After reading your comments and suggestions in the previous preview i've inserted an extra 9 minutes of video and polished a few parts.
Fair warning: Still using the computer generated voice.
Here is the script again: https://docs.google.com/document/d/14Qz1mssG0YQilhOoX3hzYsFoWE22ZC4oN2xGf4OQl7M/edit?usp=sharing
I should note that the script will change in real time as i make changes and polish out parts. So if you see it not matching the video you'll know why.
Anyway, i've pretty much done most of what i wanted to do and say. So this is much closer to the final product. Let me know if there anything i need to clarify, add or improve. No need to be silent thinking i'm still planning more :)
Hopefully i'll get to recording actual voice this week and finalizing the video.
Let me know what you think!