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Earthblood Episode 24: Hiding in Plain Sight - M4A

"This is bullshit..." 

Kheen nearly drags his feet beside you as you walk across town. 

"I should be with the others." He glances sideways at you and you can tell he saw the expression on your face.

"I don't need to calm down." You try to stifle the quiet laugh.

"I'm serious! I could... I am... I..." He sighs. 

"Wait where are we?" You point to the sign that reads Public Baths. 

"Oh. Right. Time to get naked. Uh... wait... I meant..." His voice trails behind you as you laugh your way through the front doors.

Comments

Hehehe thank youuu πŸ˜πŸ’•πŸ’•

This_Guy_Eli

Jaciiiiiiiii!!!!!! Thank youuuuu! Hehe the "other side of the wall" trick is a fun one, and I'm so glad that it's convincing! I do enjoy doing all kinds of little edits like that to add to the overall experience πŸ₯°πŸ’•

This_Guy_Eli

Thank you so much Carrie! Kheen is becoming a favorite character of mine, to write and to perform, and I'm so glad y'all are enjoying him as well. It's very fulfilling getting to see them grow, and to see y'alls reactions to the progression of these characters. πŸ₯°πŸ’•

This_Guy_Eli

worththewait Something about Seri's gentle assertiveness when saying "okay" tickled my brain in a good way. Such a weird thing for it to latch onto but it made me smile. I loved the resonance and reverb of all the people in the bathhouse. Also Kheen. Very nice. Yes. Good. Gold star.

tropey

Elllliiiiiiiii!!!! This was such a kewl episode!!! this is definitely one of my fave eps in the series so far! I especially loved the ending with the villain banter it was so kewl!! You really are such a talented actor! And all the sfx throughout were amazing as always! But the bath house sfx were soooo good!!! And also idk how you did it but the villain banter literally sounded like it was coming from the other side of a wall it was so fucking kewl! And dont even get me started of seris voice!!!Just amazing job eli each ep i get more and more hooked to this series!!!πŸ–€

jacijoan

The sound design kicked ass! The water and bathhouse intricacies sounded really cool. You killed it, as well as the people peopling in the background. And I enjoyed the wet ol' pitter-patter of the feet, adorbs. Although, I'm still heartsick abt Seri + resentful.. kidding I guess πŸ˜‘.. I understand, I get it, and it's fine 😭, the way you edit and isolate the vocals when they are speaking sounds so neat. It makes me smile every time. And I'm sure the means of the telephone-like interactions allows contact between characters easier from a writing sense and brings fast clarity to the listener on top of its framework for the story. Kheen is ugh adorable, yes, all his nervous energy surrounding being intimate. But also, the bit after the attendant asks if he would like a towel and guides him and Kalu to the private area just made me chuckle. Dropping him and Kalu into this scene was real cute and silly. I enjoyed that lean into awkwardness with another reaction to this new environment. Sothesexsceneislikereallycooool. His reaction to Kalu's bombardment, the panning, PERFECT dialogue, kissing, whimpering, the mentions of gentle touch (ween kissies).. α΅ƒβΏα΅ˆ ᡗʰᡉ ᢠʳⁱᢜᡏeⁿ ᡍrα΅’Κ·l ᢠʳⁱᢜᡏ was niiiiice. You might've hit the nail on the head with the whole appeal of the dynamic, hot, but you didn't hear it from me 😐. Every time I think, β€œooo this is my fave performance! πŸ˜›β€ you go and surpass itπŸ–•πŸ»πŸ˜ . I dig this whispery, flirty portrayal as Kheen in both the scenes from this episode and the previous, these characters unveiling and evolving as we progress, alongside a typical enrapturing Eli performance. Ooo πŸ‘οΈ what an intriguing lil eavesdropping of an ending. Hmmm. Thank youu, stellar performances all around and lovely sound design! X.

Carrie


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