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Kaerwyn Issue 12 Page 65

The silence speaks for itself.

I'm not sure I should leave those ellipses in. What do you guys think? Does the page work by itself without them?

Kaerwyn Issue 12 Page 65

Comments

Also... SOMEONE needs to smek Endy for what he's missing. O.o

Sorien

I'd remove one set.

Sorien

I think it’s better with the ellipsis, especially in the last panel. It shows awkward hesitation. Without it, I’d get the impression of mournful “that’s that” silence.

VGR

I think the ellipses are fine, it conveys they're at a loss for words.

Silver Huskey

For God's sake, ONE of you two break the ice before I do it for you with this bucket of cold water.

Dave Sanders


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