Quest Front - The Brighton Hamlet
Added 2020-09-25 03:40:43 +0000 UTCEDIT: This quest front is now featured in Quest Fronts #1, which you can get in digital or print format on the following store pages:
- DriveThruRPG: https://www.drivethrurpg.com/product/360541
- Itch: https://ludicpen.itch.io/quest-fronts-issue-1
Comments
Yeah, that makes sense. Don't wanna step on Shawn's turf, but that doesn't mean you can't give it a viking-esque feel :) thank you!
Solanaar
2020-09-25 16:27:50 +0000 UTCNoted. I updated the other quest fronts and foe accordingly. I've tried to avoid Ironlands terms, such as "Irolander", "circle", "Old World", "firstborn", "iron priests", and region names; but there's definitely a middle-ground that doesn't necessarily refer to the Ironlands but the dark ages, and "warband" is a lexis I definitely missed.
Samuel RondΓ³n
2020-09-25 16:15:11 +0000 UTCA few things: 1. Again I am just exhilarated by this concept. Irs just so genius. I get instantly inspired and am itching to play. Defining the threat and threat process is one of my favourite things about this. 2. It feels not very Ironland-ish. This can be fine but is probably not the best selling argument. This might easily be changed by some tweaks like naming it "warband" instead of "army" and so on. Try focusing on making it feel both deeply Ironland-ish and flexible enough for other settings. 3. There's a type at "vow": you wrote "treat" instead of "threat"
Solanaar
2020-09-25 06:13:33 +0000 UTC
