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Twisted Lorna
Twisted Lorna

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Her secret Tinder feedback wanted (pretty please)

As promised, I thought I'd ask my beloved supporters for some feedback on how my first stab at a complete story in the form of captions was received.

I know it was far from perfect, and ultimately a lot less serious than the texting stories, but I had fun doing something a little different and, I hope, you all enjoyed along the way.

If you have time please select the best option, or comment below if you've a different opinion that I haven't covered. Even if you didn't read any of them please select that option so I know if it's not for you.

Thank you and have a great day 😊

Comments

I was limited by the 20 image upload limit on two of the Reddit caption subs, so it was hard to balance the pacing. Part 9 actually has 2 extra images over what will be the version the caption subs get, but I think those final captions enhance the story without adding something others will miss out on. Thank you for taking the time to give me some feedback 😊 it's always appreciated

TwistedTranSista

Hellooo, so I enjoyed it. Was a fun read. Maybe I’m forgetting some details, but sometimes it felt like things developed too fast. Overall the writing was good, and the pictures as well. I’ll read everything again to give a more precise feedback

Gab


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