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Pinocchio Thoughts

Well, he finally got his wish, didn't he? To be a real boy. I mean, going into the original story, I knew that was the ending. Everyone does. But the original's decision to make the puppet body a shell at the end of the story for the Real Boy P to look at and laugh over was what made me really invested in sharing this story.

That we go thru the whole story with our Puppet Pal, we watch him get hung, drown, eaten, etc, and then discarded at the end for the morality of seemingly Someone Else, just felt needlessly cruel. The whole book was pretty needlessly cruel to every character. Humorously so, I should add! But I wasn't laughing with Real Boy Pinocchio at the end. I felt like it was a bit of a non-ending? Like the right one didn't get the happy ending we wanted him to get. Some new kid took his place. And all the new kid does is laugh. Laugh and dance.

The whole story was greatly ham-handed in handling it's moral. But that's the 1800's for ya. And that's also the charm of the story made up by Carlo Collodi. What I never really put in my version was his narration, talking directly to you the audience, like an old man in the corner of a room who's got a funny story for ya. It really is ultimately a great little book. But I felt a profound sadness in that ending that I don't know if Carlo meant to bring about.

Gioia Fiammenghi, the illustrator who's drawings were in the Puffin Classic version of the book I have, might have felt that. Her final illustration (shown above) was the final page of the book. And I took a lot of inspiration from her art for the characters in my adaptation. I thank her the most in this endeavor, as her work pointed me in the right direction.

What a wild ride. I believe this begun in 2014, around the time of BACK's beginning as well. And now here it is finished, along with BACK. Everything from then is over, finally. Now what? That's a good question. One I've been pondering since 2020. The most I can come up with is to just do some comics. FOA is still gonna go on. But I need something more out of this. 

As I said before, I got some short comics and ideas I want to do next. Gotta shake out the cobwebs and get back on the horse of writing more, too. There's a longer story taking shape in my head, too. "A Sinner's Prayer" is an idea I've mentioned before, but it's taken on so many shapes that I barely understand what kind of story I want it to be anymore. Gotta just nail it down and what comes out, comes out. That's the idea: Just make some shit.

A collected Pinocchio book is definitely going to happen. Topatoco is working on their own in-house crowdfunding system that we will be using. Before Pinocchio, tho, we still got BACK volume 3 to make. So, let's let our boy rest. He's deserved it, I think.

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I grew up in Russia and was familiar with an alternate version of the Pinocchio story, retold by Aleksey Tolstoy and called “The Adventures of Buratino”. Here’s the cartoon version that I used to watch: https://youtu.be/OeBEr6LWKuI (it’s long and unfortunately not dubbed or subbed, but you can skip around and get the idea). What’s interesting is that in this version, Pinocchio (Buratino in this case) gains his own puppet theater at the end (skip to 59:20 in the cartoon) but does not become a real boy. Perhaps Tolstoy felt the same as you and decided to “fix” the ending.

Arthur

Have been following your Pino adventures from the very first shared panel, and now I can't wait to back the crowdfunding campaign!

Tom Striker

Seeing the updates continue, after months and years, and seeing the shape the story took was an ongoing pleasure. Thank you for seeing it through and sharing it!

Terra-dasche

I, too, am extremely hype to own a copy of your adaptation in book form in the future!

Shiny Skunk

It's interesting how this version isn't "puppet comes to life, becomes real boy" it's "small log of wood is sentient and can talk, is turned into an impression of humans, comes to accept the human ways and eventually completely sheds his original wooden body to become completely human" ... wait a minute.

Duth Olec

I found your comic shortly after reading the book for the first time, and I thought your style was so well-suited to telling this kind of story. Thanks for sharing it over the years!

Heike Dorippidae

Congrats KC! I can't wait to buy this when it gets a print version!

Mike E

I never really thought of the puppet at the end as being anything else than an ol chunk of wood. Never saw that final illustration before, but it really ilustrates your point of view on the ending and it pretty much changes the whole story. It's funny how a single illustration at the end can change the entire (and I think intended) context of the ending, shifting the focus towards the discarded puppet. I'm kinda mindblown right now

span

Well done KC.

Liam

Congrats again on finishing the story KC. I'm really moved by your inspiration to tell this story to put your own fine point on the ending. Can't wait to see what you do next, I'm sure it'll be great as always ♥️

Sam

You truly are one of the great cartoonists of our time! I look forward to buying this for my niece ha ha.

Mangulwort .

i really loved pinocchio and am definitely going to back the physical copy. i'm really excited to see what comes out of a sinner's prayer. thank you for the great work as always kc.

Kit Spindler


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