[Spicy!π₯] 'Breathe In, Breathe Out' (James Version)
Added 2024-02-06 13:30:01 +0000 UTC
[Alternate Text: A header image of a simple bed with white sheets and two white pillows. The title, 'Breathe In, Breathe Out', is in a heavy, black font with some shading around it.]
Hello Evergreen and Hickory Patrons! π²π
I hope you're doing well.
Before you dive into this spicy writing, I wanted to say that there is a less explicit version also included at the bottom. Simply search or ctrl + F: 'Less Explicit' to jump to that version. Your comfort level is always what's most important. π₯° Those who read the longer, spicier version will come across bold: *if prompts while reading the story for you to use to tailor/navigate it.
Thank you for your support! π
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Your eyes are already wide open when James carefully slips into his spot in your shared bed with a gentleness that very few truly possess.
He doesn't want to risk waking you up.
Too late, you've been waiting.
Please continue reading this story: here.
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Comments
I'm living for the all caps 'DAMN' . Thank you so much! :D J. Corvin contains multitudes; I'm so glad their control/command came through alongside the utmost care and love that they have for the MC. π
Aelsa Trevelyan
2024-02-13 23:08:39 +0000 UTCI adored coming up with the banter in this writing alongside that playful bratty vibe. I love that this fits with your MC, Lena! π₯° I can't wait for her to have more scenes with J that are heart-melting. Thank you for your kind words! π
Aelsa Trevelyan
2024-02-13 23:07:06 +0000 UTCOh, I'm touched that the Detective is occupying your imagination, while J would be somewhat bashful. ππ
Aelsa Trevelyan
2024-02-13 23:04:52 +0000 UTCThank you, Chani! ππ» I'm so glad you enjoyed it, though now I'm more excited for Naia to unlock a few exchanges on the poly route. I know one for sure might catch your attention in Chapter 4. J can be this way on that route; R will sometimes push for this side of J, possibly even with the help of the MC depending on their disposition, etc.
Aelsa Trevelyan
2024-02-13 23:03:39 +0000 UTCYou're welcome! π₯° I'm so happy that you enjoyed it, and I whole-heartedly agree about the MC expanding and upgrading J's wardrobe. J's apartment can be mentioned in a few missable conversations, but for Everly (well, J-mancing Everly π), she will trigger set mentions of it. A visit to explore J's space/style might eventually be in the cards. I love how sweet you are about A, future sibling-in-law! The apartment above Turn the Page would afford them more space too since it has a larger layout/footprint.
Aelsa Trevelyan
2024-02-13 23:00:39 +0000 UTCI'm ridiculously pleased by this! π
Aelsa Trevelyan
2024-02-13 22:36:09 +0000 UTCOof, that line hit me in the feels too. π The inclusion of the flannel was also something I've been eager to do. >:D The MC has been sleeping with a nightlight since around the middle of Book One after some of their nightmares. It comes up again in Book Two, so maybe they brought it to Turn the Page from the B&B. π‘ It changes colors, oscillating through them. I love that this detail caught your attention, possibly because Mal sleeps with one a well. J would proudly accept their title as 'heart melter'!
Aelsa Trevelyan
2024-02-13 22:32:36 +0000 UTCI need to say: God DAMN. This was so spicy and so delicious. Absolute gorgeousness. J Corvin holy shit??? The commanding tone, the control, the care, the tension. This got me all: π³π³π³
Renata G.
2024-02-08 12:32:05 +0000 UTCOmg this is perfect for my MC for my J-only playthrough, Lena. Sheβs so bratty and sarcastic and this would make her absolutely melt. This is perfect 100/10 *chefs kiss*
Bobeah
2024-02-07 14:27:28 +0000 UTCThis is pretty much exactly how I've been imagining J would be once they were comfortable with someone. πππ
Kieran Tala Dawnshadow
2024-02-07 02:03:39 +0000 UTCHoly hell that was hot. I didnβt expect James to be thatβ¦ commanding. Hope we see this side of him in the poly. Naia would be in troubleβ¦. In a good way! π₯°π₯°
EvilChani
2024-02-07 01:31:39 +0000 UTCI don't usually enjoy the so-and-so is being bratty in bed thing but I quite enjoyed this. Thank you for the meal. Also, because I always need to make weird observations, somehow I thought when J and MC moved in together it would be MC moving in to J's apartment, rather than J moving into Turn the Page. I'm not sure why I had that idea? I like this better though, J probably gets to see A more often this way too. π EDIT: Also I forgot to say that I approve of your choices in attempting to upgrade J's wardrobe MC. Keep up the good work. π«‘
chellyense
2024-02-07 01:10:43 +0000 UTCThe reveal that J has the genetic tongue curl thing isn't something I knew I needed... π₯΄
Sadie
2024-02-06 18:28:13 +0000 UTC"James/Jane has always been good at going unnoticed except where you're concerned." π AND THE FLANNEL SHIRT. ugh. bratty mc is adorably doting and J is such a heart melter π also the nightlight π€¨ and "isnβt a legitimate-" legitimate WHAT, mc???
sunday
2024-02-06 14:24:57 +0000 UTC
