[Spicy!π₯] 'Breathe In, Breathe Out' (Jane Version)
Added 2024-02-06 13:30:01 +0000 UTC
[Alternate Text: A header image of a simple bed with white sheets and two white pillows. The title, 'Breathe In, Breathe Out', is in a heavy, black font with some shading around it.]
Hello Evergreen and Hickory Patrons! π²π
I hope you're doing well.
Before you dive into this spicy writing, I wanted to say that there is a less explicit version also included at the bottom. Simply search or ctrl + F: 'Less Explicit' to jump to that version. Your comfort level is always what's most important. π₯° Those who read the longer, spicier version will come across bold: *if prompts while reading the story for you to use to tailor/navigate it.
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Your eyes are already wide open when Jane carefully slips into her spot in your shared bed with a gentleness that very few truly possess.
She doesn't want to risk waking you up.
Too late, you've been waiting.
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Comments
I raise you an extra pair of eyes emojis: π. I'm psyched that this writing has added more intrigue to J! The JR route in particular might be fun since you're an ardent R-mancer; they have a lot of unique scenes with both the MC and J during the poly. There's a different feel as well.
Aelsa Trevelyan
2024-02-13 23:26:18 +0000 UTCThey have the range, but also I'm loving how these different emotions came through, adding to the other in a unique way. π Perhaps, it has something to do with J's love? It's very pure, tempering other aspects of themself that are known to be more rigid or commanding to others. It brings to mind their RO route achievement in Book One and sign-off for the MC in letters/notes/things, 'Always Yours'.
Aelsa Trevelyan
2024-02-13 23:22:22 +0000 UTCSame! The design choice the MC picked is adorable.π (Also, J's strong arms will be /wrapped/ around the MC later on in the book, both on the J route and JR routes, ahem. I was looking over that before typing this. It might not be in the way you think though. π)
Aelsa Trevelyan
2024-02-13 23:19:51 +0000 UTCI was distracted by trying to figure out why my emoji keyboard doesn't seem to have the salute emoji?? I want it... π€ I'll look more later. >.> The MC knew exactly what they were doing with these outfit upgrades; I love this for them (also us). XD Oh, that's such a good observation and link--the fact that the MC and J have that innate awareness of each other along with a /want/ to always be looking for the other. It comes from childhood. There is a backstory about why the MC always tended to be able to 'find' J out of everyone else, partially because of J's own trust in them. I will spare you from those ~feelings~, for now. π Thank you for your comment! (Also, yes, the 'isn't a legitimate' refers to a case. π)
Aelsa Trevelyan
2024-02-13 23:17:39 +0000 UTCLove, love and more love.
Lurker11
2024-02-11 17:25:53 +0000 UTCIm not a jmancer im not a jmancer im not jmancer im not a- But hmmmmmmm im looking at their route and specially JR with new eyes now.... πππ
alex
2024-02-08 14:00:36 +0000 UTCBut how is J so soft and devoted while being commanding and rigid? π
dasburnfrau
2024-02-06 23:13:24 +0000 UTCJ with boyshorts that have little hearts on them?? Excuse me. π sigh I'm a sucker for women with toned biceps...
Sadie
2024-02-06 18:35:17 +0000 UTCtoo bisexual for this. lost all reason when picturing jane in that thin cotton shirt and boyshorts π«‘π«‘π«‘goodbye forever thank you for your service but anyway - love how Jane just knew the MC was awake and waiting, the same way the MC is always aware of where Jane is, even if the detective trying to be unobserved. Also, if Joshua bought Jane her night shirts as a gift, I think he should be given special approval to ruin their fit. Everything else was very hot. π₯β€οΈβπ₯ I'm also wondering "isn't a legitimate-" - could be hinting at? Jane working on something unofficial? A Fernweh weirdness case that will remain forever off the record?
ckl
2024-02-06 18:03:32 +0000 UTC
