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Jackanapes The Ninth, Page 12

Spent a lot of time this week drawing centaur O-faces. Actually a lot of fun, though I have an unconscious tendency to make the faces myself while I’m drawing, so my wife’s been looking at me funny.

I do seriously need your feedback on the layout of this, though. I naturally read the big center panel first, then follow the peripheral squares around clockwise. I need to know if that’s clear and you all do that too, or if any of you are starting at the top and working your way down, making this incomprehensible.

Jackanapes The Ninth, Page 12

Comments

I concur. It’s unusual but actually fun to take in.

R0KN3

I did not go to the center first, but I eventually put it together

MAR

I grew up reading Jim Lee's Uncanny X-men, so I am not put off by creative panel order. Did take a second glance to figure it out, but the ellipsis guided the way. To quote a football meme, “Not gonna lie, they had us in the first half”.

MV


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