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Gawr Gura - March 2022's Reward

Reward preview will be posted tomorrow !

I finally made it... not in time at all. This illustration really  gave me hell. I want to draw a pic that is small enough to have her feet  but it leads to problems that there are not many suitable background  ideas that suit the pose. I have to draw - erase - redraw three times  for this background. From the beach to the hill and now, finally the  private garden ! It looks quite empty and I know I can do better by  adding more characters but It is already the 11th day so I'm really  scared that it will affect the schedule. I didn't sleep well because of  the pressure so this is all we have - sorry guys T.T

Anyway, I  also tried new color pallets with this pic as well. It's not easy to  jump into new water but I think I did well. Gura looks so pure in this  summer dress !

Next will be our main dish. I think I will try something new again so I hope it will go well.

Thank you for supporting me !

- Hanada Yanochi

Gawr Gura - March 2022's Reward

Comments

I think the art piece as a whole looks great, so I think I can ignore this small detail. Yeah, this may very well just be a personal perspective thing. Thank you for giving this your time

Bottledwater

Hm...if it's about perspective then it really depends on the angle of the entire character. In this pic I didn't use hyper angle so the feet shouldn't be too smaller than one in a nearer camera. I took reference in here: https://puu.sh/IO3Y7/16cf198c5e.png I fixed the feet even bigger than the first one so that the left feet is only smaller a little bit compared to the right one. That is why you don't see the outline of toe anymore. Well, this is a very hard angle I must say. If we view both sides ( your opinion and mine ), they are all correct in theory though. So I think I will stop here. That is why art is interesting. They view differently for each person to see it. I just hope the fixed one won't decrease your enjoyment when watching the entire set.

花田やのち - Yanochi Hanada

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Kriet

I'm sorry for being so critical but it still looks pretty large for the perspective, and some outline detail, mainly around the toes is gone now. I'm really trying to give helpful criticism here but I feel extremely guilty at the same time pointing out my opinion here, I'm so sorry!

Bottledwater

God I wish that were me lol

花田やのち - Yanochi Hanada

I tried to fix it. Please check it out again.

花田やのち - Yanochi Hanada

Thank you ! As long as you like it then it is worth my effort and suffering lol

花田やのち - Yanochi Hanada

I love how the setting is at, making a weird feeling (which I am not going to be guilty at) when stuff happens, but can I also talk at how that chumbud's expression is super relatable?

Kriet

nah, it's less the hue and more the shape and size that seems off to me

Bottledwater

I think the issue is that we've all been conditioned by hentai to have that exact hue be the "male character stand in" color.

Mannlowar

Gotta be honest, her left foot, the one by the shrimp looks a little odd. Everything else though, absolutely fantastic.

Bottledwater

I think you did amazing!. You may have gone through a lot of trouble with this illustration but it turned out great. The garden setting is done nicely with the colors, flowers, etc. and it makes her look cute. I love it all!

Ultra


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