Gawr Gura - March 2022's Reward
Added 2022-03-11 04:15:35 +0000 UTCReward preview will be posted tomorrow !
I finally made it... not in time at all. This illustration really gave me hell. I want to draw a pic that is small enough to have her feet but it leads to problems that there are not many suitable background ideas that suit the pose. I have to draw - erase - redraw three times for this background. From the beach to the hill and now, finally the private garden ! It looks quite empty and I know I can do better by adding more characters but It is already the 11th day so I'm really scared that it will affect the schedule. I didn't sleep well because of the pressure so this is all we have - sorry guys T.T
Anyway, I also tried new color pallets with this pic as well. It's not easy to jump into new water but I think I did well. Gura looks so pure in this summer dress !
Next will be our main dish. I think I will try something new again so I hope it will go well.
Thank you for supporting me !
- Hanada Yanochi
Comments
I think the art piece as a whole looks great, so I think I can ignore this small detail. Yeah, this may very well just be a personal perspective thing. Thank you for giving this your time
Bottledwater
2022-03-11 13:45:20 +0000 UTCHm...if it's about perspective then it really depends on the angle of the entire character. In this pic I didn't use hyper angle so the feet shouldn't be too smaller than one in a nearer camera. I took reference in here: https://puu.sh/IO3Y7/16cf198c5e.png I fixed the feet even bigger than the first one so that the left feet is only smaller a little bit compared to the right one. That is why you don't see the outline of toe anymore. Well, this is a very hard angle I must say. If we view both sides ( your opinion and mine ), they are all correct in theory though. So I think I will stop here. That is why art is interesting. They view differently for each person to see it. I just hope the fixed one won't decrease your enjoyment when watching the entire set.
花田やのち - Yanochi Hanada
2022-03-11 12:37:58 +0000 UTC( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
Kriet
2022-03-11 12:19:15 +0000 UTCI'm sorry for being so critical but it still looks pretty large for the perspective, and some outline detail, mainly around the toes is gone now. I'm really trying to give helpful criticism here but I feel extremely guilty at the same time pointing out my opinion here, I'm so sorry!
Bottledwater
2022-03-11 11:37:26 +0000 UTCGod I wish that were me lol
花田やのち - Yanochi Hanada
2022-03-11 10:22:44 +0000 UTCI tried to fix it. Please check it out again.
花田やのち - Yanochi Hanada
2022-03-11 10:20:49 +0000 UTCThank you ! As long as you like it then it is worth my effort and suffering lol
花田やのち - Yanochi Hanada
2022-03-11 10:20:14 +0000 UTCI love how the setting is at, making a weird feeling (which I am not going to be guilty at) when stuff happens, but can I also talk at how that chumbud's expression is super relatable?
Kriet
2022-03-11 09:53:06 +0000 UTCnah, it's less the hue and more the shape and size that seems off to me
Bottledwater
2022-03-11 09:04:03 +0000 UTCI think the issue is that we've all been conditioned by hentai to have that exact hue be the "male character stand in" color.
Mannlowar
2022-03-11 09:01:35 +0000 UTCGotta be honest, her left foot, the one by the shrimp looks a little odd. Everything else though, absolutely fantastic.
Bottledwater
2022-03-11 08:15:59 +0000 UTCI think you did amazing!. You may have gone through a lot of trouble with this illustration but it turned out great. The garden setting is done nicely with the colors, flowers, etc. and it makes her look cute. I love it all!
Ultra
2022-03-11 06:19:12 +0000 UTC
