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The film has returned...

The film's back up. If you're curious about all the changes, here they are: 


- I gave Conduct's resting linework a line boil. This means her linework is never standing completely still. I figure it adds to her "pure energy" gimmick.

- Encyclopath's glasses are given a highlight, so that they can be seen clearer. 

- Camera move when each character is first told the reason why they were brought here. 

- Blot's hand motion was changed when he raises it to give his suggestion as to how they want to dispose of the Red Eclipse. I will let the secret slip only to the 10$ and up patrons as to what that was supposed to be, originally. It was certainly a misfire of a joke.

- When L says "ten foot looking glass" her head was given some extra animation, sort of a sassy head bobble. 

- Aviv's cigarette was made consistent between shots, as he places Origami's package. 

- When Origami comes down to see Blot, not only does her ponytail not disappear like in the original, but Conduct's bottom half is drawn, which it wasn't initially. 

- The factotums have words on their hats now, mainly insults that Encyclopath put there because he thought it would be funny to insult them with words too big for them to know. The first guy is given the word "cockalorum" (A self important little man) and the final guy is given the word "maven" (an expert).

- The factotum at 3:37 is given a fedora.

- There's a zoom in to highlight the origami folding of the gun around the bullet in her outfit, and a zoom to highlight the costume repairing itself. 

- When Origami looks up and around to see the female factotum, her neck is drawn more realistically. If everything was perfect, I would have more realistic anatomy for Origami all around. She looks great when she has it. Now with the neck changed, we get another taste of that. Would have been way closer to my vision. 

- The phone number is now a gag number that, if you call, it sounds like an automatic operator stating that the line is out of service, but it continues to say it's disconnected because someone has torn out the phone line and is sucking out the electricity like a hookah.

- The after credits scene has been made clearer by the inclusion of stacks of money and a folded hundred dollar bill.

Comments

Any ink. He’s changing the ink on the card

Still as enjoyable as the first time seeing it - with blot changing his card, does it mean his power is based on anything black or just black ink?

Stephen


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