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71 - Interrogation

Rafael watched Vivisari rip apart a Cataclysm-level threat like it was some insect she found crawling around on the ground.

Nineteen hundred and fifty. He could read the creature’s level; they all could. The Grand System was freely handing out approximations to even those who should have failed a regular [Inspection].

Seeing a person so casually end an extinction-level monster was sobering in its own right, even for a man as aware of what the pinnacles of power looked like as he. The expression on Vivisari’s face, though? The fascination shining in her eyes, the gruesome satisfaction she took in tearing open her opponent?

Despite having total confidence in the moral character of this woman who could erase Meridian with a spell, Rafael felt a shiver go down his spine, and a clenching in his guts. Fear for what Vivisari could be, if she chose to be.

Or, more importantly, if the world shaped her that way.

She had definitely grown stronger in her time away. Much stronger. Could even the Dragon King or other mythical immortals face her, now? Had she somehow reached the very top of that seemingly infinite mountain, like the greatest of Cataclysm Monarchs that had died to her own hand? Or had she gone further? Surpassed the limit he, and all others, thought a summit? It seemed almost obvious that she must have, considering the ease with which she’d bested the [Greater Voidbeast].

In a way, this overwhelming display of power simplified whatever events would follow. At least regarding Vanguard and Vivisari’s return. Because people would not assume the Sorceress for the events transpiring. They would assume a god. That the heavens themselves had descended to aid in this battle of otherworldly origin. Vivisari was a legend, yes, but even she couldn’t rip a Cataclysm in half with such casual disrespect.

The brief excitement touching her face faded into that look of perpetual boredom. She glanced at Rafael, nodded at him, then [Blinked] away.

Rafael stared at the empty spot she’d been occupying, then shook himself and, putting the harrowing display out of mind, focused on his own mission.

He frowned down at one of the wealthiest and most influential humans in the world. A man he had worked with on many occasions. Duke Caldimore had captained the most collectively powerful guild in the Human Kingdoms, and Rafael the Adventurer’s Guild. So of course they had spoken often. He’d always had a mildly positive view of Duke Caldimore, if he set aside the man’s pride. How shameful a lapse of judgment, in retrospect.

Had he recognized latent trauma in the Duke, no doubt borne of those many tragedies he’d faced? Of course. All men had been burned by the Cataclysms and carried scars from those days. Archmage Aeris, with whom Rafael also met on occasion, displayed those concerning indicators far more clearly. Between the two—the Duke and the Archmage—Rafael would honestly have expected the latter to break in this particular way. To turn on humanity, by accident or not, in desperation.

Though was that what had happened? Or was it greed? Ambition? Something else entirely? Rafael was unsure. The Duke’s motives remained unclear. Rafael hoped he had not read the man that poorly. His blindness to this plot had already failed Lady Vivisari. But for him to so fundamentally misunderstand the Duke’s nature would triple his already substantial shame.

Though Duke Caldimore’s views were no doubt misguided, Rafael didn’t believe, even with the man’s folly playing out around them, that his goal had been indiscriminate ruin. That he was some monster like Lucorius, seeking power at the uncaring expense of all others. This man had had a greater purpose in mind, and probably one that could be presented as a net positive to the world.

Likely, it was related to that dagger Vivisari had mentioned. A weapon that had pressed even his Lady. Considering her newfound strength, the magic-negating material must be fearsome beyond imagination.

Simple logic told him that the blade had been forged from the carapace of those creatures below. Perhaps Damon had intended to harvest them and create similar weapons in great numbers? Rafael had to admit, equipping mere foot soldiers with blades that could slice through a Titled-rank monster would do unimaginable good for the world.

But why not take his findings to a qualified council? Instead, he’d gone to Morningstar. Worked in secret. No, his motives had been nefarious or selfish in some way. Rafael needed to accept his failure; the Duke was not the man he had assumed.

The human was stirring awake, Vivisari’s healing spell finally prompting him to consciousness. Winston stepped to the man’s side, rapier sheathed, but hand on the hilt. Rafael would admit that the butler’s presence relaxed him. The Duke was only orichalcum, but the difference between that and Titled meant little to Rafael. He had artifacts, scrolls, and potions to defend himself, but in a struggle of life or death, he would not bet on himself against even a man of Duke Caldimore’s strength with total certainty. Power came foremost from levels, and Rafael had few of those. He had never been an adventurer.

The Duke jerked up, and neither Rafael nor Winston flinched at the abrupt motion. Winston, acting in direct service of his mistress, could challenge nearly all Titled across the mortal lands; Rafael had little to fear.

Besides that there would be little useful to mine from the man. Except where his daughter had gone, and the general shape of his schemes, which might not be much help at all. He doubted Damon knew how to seal the dimensional breach. Only the Fell Apostate would, if even he, and he was either gone or consumed with the ritual.

The man oriented himself to his surroundings, head snapping side to side as he took everything in, eyes slowly gaining lucidity. He looked at them in turn. Rafael. Winston. A glaring red-haired beastkin. Then down at the abyssal pit beneath the magical platform.

At armageddon itself. An endless stream of monsters pouring out and into Meridian’s streets, monsters which couldn’t even be [Inspected] properly, but which the Grand System provided a vague appraisal of nonetheless, each of the beasts ranging from Orichalcum to high-Titled.

‘High-Titled’? A comical understatement, for a few of the monstrosities emerging.

It was a lot for the man to digest, reasonably.

“Rafael…Headmaster…?” the Duke said, slurring his words. “What is…the meaning of this?”

Rafael could forgive the confusion, the automatic response that bordered on nonsensical. The situation was rather extreme, and the Duke had just been the victim of a ritual that had run wild. That he lived at all, without so much as mutating into some cursed, apocalyptic beast, was rather incredible. The heavens had smiled on him; many worse fates could have awaited him.

“I’m afraid we don’t have time for pleasantries, Damon,” Rafael said smoothly. “As I’m sure you’ve noticed, your plans, whatever they may have been, have not quite lived up to your expectations. I hold out hope that you are not a total madman, and that before the entire capital is overrun with this insanity you’ve brought to us, you explain what you’ve done, what your plans were, and how we might mitigate this disaster.”

“Isabella,” Saffra demanded. “What did you do to her, you—you bastard?”

Rafael’s attention flicked to the Sorceress’s apprentice. An imperceptible frown tugged on his lips. It was hardly unreasonable that a thirteen-year-old girl would respond in such a way, especially one who was, apparently, friends with the Duke’s daughter herself. But Rafael was trying to navigate this conversation as quickly and efficiently as possible, and the outburst didn’t help.

The Duke’s attention jerked to the girl, and his eyes narrowed, the man’s pride never one to suffer an insult. He took a second to find a response, still struggling to understand everything that was happening, but a sneer pulled onto his face.

“Know your place, commoner brat. I could have you strung up for those words.” He made to rise, but a gloved white hand fell on his shoulder, pushing him down like an anvil. He hit the ground with jarring force.

“I would prefer that you stay as you are, Duke Caldimore,” the ever-polite butler suggested.

“Please let me handle this, young mistress,” Rafael told the girl. “I assure you that I will find out what I can, as quickly as I can.”

Saffra almost flinched at the words, and she pulled back—though kept glaring at the Duke.

The Duke’s attention had slid away from them, despite Winston’s manhandling, which should have prompted outrage. He gazed into the distance. This time to where the world’s most powerful mage—having draped herself in invisibility, appearing simply as an empty spot in the sky—was chaining eighteenth-tier or higher magics faster than Rafael could process, tearing apart high-Titled threats by the dozen and lighting the sky for miles around.

“Nysari,” the Duke murmured, his brow furrowed. He looked at Rafael, Vanguard’s steward. Then at Winston, Vivisari’s personal manservant. The more telling of the two individuals present, certainly. Though Winston had been more active in the years following the Turning, he was a private man, concerned predominantly with his Academy. “Vivisari.”

Rafael snorted. There was hardly a point in denying it. “Indeed. An identity I arranged for my lady’s personal use, with the permission of the Keresi family. I cannot say I am surprised it lasted a mere two days before falling apart. This is unimportant. You are an intelligent man, despite everything, Damon. I assume that you have grasped the implications of your failure. Your only hope for mercy stems from complete cooperation.”

“Mercy?” Saffra erupted, looking like she’d been slapped. “What mercy?”

A glance at the girl had her going quiet again, but this time she met his gaze angrily, fists clenched to her side.

Damon frowned at Rafael, ignoring Saffra’s outburst, and Rafael was pleased to see calculation churning behind his eyes. What Rafael absolutely didn’t need, right now, was a raving lunatic.

“This is the fault of Vivisari, not me,” the Duke spat. “The ritual was rushed. If not for her interference, this chaos never would have manifested.” He glanced over the ledge of the magical platform, face whitening at what he saw below, before turning defiantly back to Rafael.

“It is a rather unimportant hypothetical,” Rafael said mildly, finding the man’s words ridiculous, but understanding his desperate need for delusion, “considering where we find ourselves.”

The man fumed, deliberating over his next words. Again, Rafael found relief in that. He could shepherd the man to a desired location, could extract information, but only if Damon remained rational enough to engage on an intellectual level.

There was torture, but that was startlingly inefficient, and he doubted Vivisari would approve, even in this drastic a scenario. He disapproved of those interrogation techniques on principle too, of course, but if it were a city of lives or breaking a few fingers on a man who deserved it—well, suffice it to say, his morals were less unyielding than his Lady’s.

There was mind magic as well, but Vivisari would never approve, not even with a city at risk.

He hoped that was the case, at least. As far as Rafael was concerned, a miniature god let loose on the world with flexible morals would be worse than even the roaming Cataclysms of yore. To some degree, he saw Vivisari’s accidental killing of the Red Tithe as the worst event to occur today. He would much prefer Vivisari’s hands remain as uncompromisingly clean as the old days. The first kills, as the truism went, were the hardest. And he wanted Vivisari to find killing as difficult as possible, even when it came to monstrous men like the Red Tithe.

“I do not regret what I’ve done,” the Duke said coldly, and Rafael observed with great interest that the man’s flinty eyes and squared jaw promised absolute earnestness. “I knew of this possibility. But for once, I was the architect of my destiny. I decided; I failed. Me.” He grunted. “It was necessary, besides. Some great threat will come, Rafael. You know it, I know it, we all do. I sought a way to stand against whatever does. Preemptively. Only the least, and most foolish of men, rely on a…savior.”

His attention flicked to the invisible Sorceress. The world washed briefly white as a gigantic beam of lightning tore through one of the sleek, alien creatures. A very complicated series of expressions flashed across the Duke’s face. The man likely revered Vivisari, as most of humanity, and especially veterans of the Cataclysm wars, did. She was his savior. Everyone’s savior.

He tore his gaze away. “I did not believe she even lived,” he muttered. “That she does…it changes nothing. I would have acted the same.”

“The ritual, Damon. If you expect even a shred of leniency, explain. What were your goals? The broad shape, in any case? And more importantly, do you have any conception of how this might be contained?”

A sneer pulled back the man’s lip. “Of course I don’t. You knew that without asking; I am no ritualist. But I will escape ultimate consequences nevertheless, Guildmaster. With what I’ve created—a process I can replicate—and with what I know, I am too useful to be executed. I know how the world works. My value is too high alive, and nonexistent dead.”

The unfortunate reality was that the Duke might be correct. About ultimate consequences, in any case. His best hope was an imprisoned life as a disgraced pariah—but his usefulness might keep his head on his shoulders, if what he was saying was true. That wasn’t for him to worry about at this point. “The general shape of the ritual. Explain. And where is your daughter?”

The Duke mulled over his options. To Rafael’s relief, he reluctantly answered. “I know little of the implementation; again, I am no ritualist. It was fueled by the name of the Wardens, and all the wealth within, as the primary sacrifice. The designing mage—”

“The Fell Apostate.”

He paused in surprise, and irritation flashed on his face, which confirmed Rafael’s guess. “The designing mage insisted that to reach beyond the dimensional veil, a soul must be used as a breaching projectile to create an opening—or so was the comparison he drew. Nothing else would have the conceptual weight. My daughter met the criteria.”

“Where is she?” Rafael asked, pushing back the disgust he felt. No, he had not fully misjudged the man—the cool rationality the Duke maintained even now fit the image Rafael had always held—but clearly there was a monster underneath too.

How was there so little concern in his voice? He didn’t even sound vindictive, or hateful: simply callously unworried about his daughter’s fate.

“Presumably, beyond the barrier,” Damon said. “At least she served some useful purpose to her family, prior to her expiration.”

A prickling on the back of Rafael’s neck alerted him to a sudden influx of mana. A scroll had been burned…and by the name the Sorceress’s apprentice spoke behind him, he knew what was about to happen before he turned.

The blunt end of a wooden staff lunged forward and crashed into Duke Caldimore’s face. The man’s nose broke with a crunch, head whipping back. A follow-up swing slammed into his side, breaking several ribs, or so Rafael assumed by the gruesome noise. It was only when the length of wood came cleaving down in an overhead blow that Winston caught the weapon with a heavy thud that had wind gusting in all directions.

The butler pushed the struggling girl backwards.

“Please, calm yourself, young lady.”

“She’s your daughter,” Saffra screamed past him. “What’s wrong with you?”

Rafael suppressed an enormous sigh. Again, he agreed on principle with the outrage—of course he did. But dealing with a time-sensitive disaster surrounded by such emotional actors pained him on a fundamental level. She wasn’t helping. Couldn’t she see that? Any delay in this conversation was harming their chances of saving Isabella Caldimore, not helping.

If the girl had lived at all, which, unfortunately, Rafael thought quite unlikely.

Perhaps something was broken inside him. Perhaps he should be raging the same as his allies, logic notwithstanding. Winston himself had obviously lost his composure too. He could have caught the first blow, much less the second and third, regardless of the scroll the girl had burned. The man had wanted to see the Duke punished, no matter how impassive he kept his face, and so he had allowed, consciously or subconsciously, the young woman to vent her frustration on his behalf.

Rafael withdrew a healing potion and bent down to feed it to the Duke. Further scuffling ensued, the butler controlling the girl who was suddenly wielding Titled-rank strength. This was why he’d almost advised Vivisari against the idea entirely. Children had no place carrying around scrolls of such incredible power.

“So you know of no way to close the gate? Not even a guess?” he asked in confirmation. With how distracted the Duke had no doubt gotten by having his face smashed in, Rafael bluntly reiterated the point that he was certain would have the highest chance of convincing the man quickly. “Any information given now that mitigates this disaster will have the powers that be look on you more forgivingly, no matter how much immunity you believe you have through usefulness. Your knowledge of this…void material, and where it comes from.”

Before Damon could respond, a voice spoke from Rafael’s side, startling him. Not that he showed it; he calmly glanced over his shoulder.

“It’s fine,” Vivisari said. “We don’t need him. I’ve finished studying the breach. It’s healing on its own. That holds with what I saw at Prismarche—the dimensional boundary is resilient and self-repairing. Already, they’re coming out slower. See?”

Even as she was speaking, she was casting spells and clearing away monsters with magic of such high tiers that Rafael tasted blood just looking at them too closely. Spells that made him feel like a very small man indeed, and he had spent many years surrounded by powerful individuals.

Ignoring that primal fear, he saw that she was right: there were fewer monsters coming out. Not that he found it comforting that Titled-rank threats were spewing out into the heart of Meridian merely by the handful rather than the dozen.

“I’m certain the wound is scabbing, so to speak,” she went on. “It’ll resolve itself eventually. We just need to hold the hordes off until then. Speaking of, I should return—I was just updating you.”

Without waiting for a response, she [Blinked] away.

Rafael stared briefly at the empty air, then turned back to Damon. He raised an eyebrow. “Your self-proclaimed value is rapidly diminishing, if the Sorceress believes she has no need of you.”

Damon met his gaze evenly, unworried. “She does. The world does. I was unaware that voidglass originated from these…creatures…but it is logical in retrospect. I understand, now, why the material is useless raw. The monsters give it life, somehow. But it needs reactivation. Else it is little more than a very sharp and very durable metal. More importantly, I know how to bend it to my will. Force it to respond to one’s class and skills. Emit a short-range aura of immunity, and thus serve as functional armor. More. The knowledge I carry is too valuable to rid yourself of.”

Despite the words, Damon’s frustration and worry were plain. He was not so confident as he presented.

“You did not make these discoveries yourself,” Rafael observed mildly. “You are no great inventor, of the arcane or otherwise.”

Damon grimaced. “Another organization knows many of the same secrets, yes. But not all. I have worked with several great minds over the years. Some more and some less aware of what I hired them for. I alone know everything.”

More had slipped under Rafael’s nose than he had feared. Then again, no information network could infiltrate personal dealings with a Duke very carefully covering his tracks. Or the highest echelons of Morningstar. Rafael couldn’t truly be faulted…but he blamed himself regardless. It would be unseemly otherwise. He was Vanguard’s eyes and ears in the world of politicking and scheming, and he had been deaf and blind in this crucial regard.

Morningstar had been Duke Caldimore’s primary contact through the decades. That was unfortunate. Vivisari seemed to have found a way past the material, but most people were not Vivisari. That particular group having access to weapons and armor so dangerous was…far from ideal.

Damon Caldimore’s knowledge really might be too invaluable to allow for his execution. While Vivisari might be able to rip the information out of his head, she never would on a moral level. Even if she was somehow willing, the Duke no doubt had safeguards in place. He was an intelligent man, in spite of this madness that he’d hidden for so long. Rafael fully expected the Duke’s retort to a threat of such nature to be, ‘try it, and watch the knowledge be erased forever.’ That was what Rafael would have done. Arranged for an effect to wipe his mind the instant it was invaded.

So. Some of the major players would be ultimate pragmatists and forgive the man’s actions, so long as he aided them going forward, considering this Eighth Cataclysm lurking beyond the dimensional boundary. And this material which he might be able to work into weapons and armor that could empower even a mere high-Titled into threats capable of forcing the Sorceress to struggle, however slightly.

But some would call for his head regardless. Vivisari perhaps among them. Conflict would ensue. Cascading complications. The brewing storm made his head ache. Perhaps he should kill the man now, and end the conflict before it began.

But no. It wasn’t his decision to make.

His eyes drifted toward Vivisari. The worst part was that she would be needed in the coming days, yet he had a strong suspicion of what the Sorceress had planned, learning that Isabella Caldimore, a thirteen-year-old victim of a deranged father, was on the other side of that dimensional fracture, most likely dead, but perhaps alive. Anyone could make that guess. They hadn’t been called the Party of Heroes without reason.

There was never such a thing, to that woman and her prior party members, as a lost cause.

Comments

I half wish it gets explained to him in these exact words.

Sean Mcguinness

I'm with with all the points you stated. The only missing piece is how the ritual would look like if it was completed correctly. He mentioned that and said what is happening is vivi's fault. I'm really curious what his counter measures are to such apocalyptic breach. But yea i think losing his family and shouldering all the responsibilities after that broke his mind.

fm

I get a sinking feeling when I see Rafael assume that the rescue of Isabella will take longer than a few days. I only hope that, like with Rhek, she hugely surpasses his expectations. (Oh, it's ok if she has to kill some level 2100. She might even level!)

Matt Grayson

Rafael and Saffra were both given a fly spell so they can just fly down anytime. Not sure about Winston, it wasn't mentioned.

NickT

^ Once again, it’s extraordinarily difficult to challenge someone as absolutely mighty in a LitRPG world (which is part of why I don’t generally favor the genre). The Grand System is just too versatile, Vivisari too powerful, for anything to really reasonably get by her. Idiot Plots are only so interesting when it contradicts established worldbuilding, though I think ArcaneCadence has done a well enough job managing the strength of the MC and the challenges posed to her.

Jiayi Xu

First, the author and the story is improving, and remain a good read. Any "fixes" to change things could break the story line. Vivi, Rafael, and others remain less intelligent or competent than they should be for what they are. A 2109 level demon with level enhanced Wisdom and Intelligence should not forget nor even be able to forget. At a certain level, you can have inattention, but not forgetfulness. She should 40ish times smarter than she is strong. At 7 million WIS, possibly at Sherlock Holmes smart. Not necessarily making good decisions as very young person will not, make good or well thought decisions. A hundred plus years. Nice. Also since there are physically enhancing spells, there should be intelligence enhancing spells. I note [Perfect Form] enhances agility. Spells should exist to enhance mental abilities, as well as the existing defenses, but not ignore limits. This is probably too late for the current narrative to change. Examples. [Bring to Mind] - Bring a vague memory to clear recollection. [Library Index] - Scan through everything you've read. [Divine My Thoughts] - Perform enhanced introspection on consequences of actions with assistance of divination. [Multitask Read] - Read multiple books you've scanned and gist them in the back of your thoughts. Sleep and read. [Log entries to Journal] - Write a monograph of actions to a physical journal. A /chatlog plus or /histlog spell. [Memory connect] - Get a visual picture or "mind map" of a topic. [Grocery cart receipt check] - skip that, it's from Disney's High Potential series. [Greater clarity] - Removes any geas and clarifies thought. [Greater Restoration] - recovers physical and mental damage. Skills [Journal]. Books [Vivi's heart/phoenix/dragon doodled diary]. A trope of fan girls/ fan boys is that they will tend to doodle. Seriously, A mage will keep a journal. Vivisari is Vivi's best person to ask about thing through a her own diary. Osmian had a journal. Rafael would ask, knowing her memory was damaged, "Did you check your journal?" to help her memory. He made a comment on the High King's senility, so even limited attempts to restore the mind from senility should be in play. Mae raised the topic of deterioration with Jasper's drinking. He or Vivi should immediately have asked Saffra if she had anything of Isabella's (like a trace hair) for divination. As part of Isabella, the divination is much stronger. He is a spymaster, it's magical tradecraft. Fell Apostate knew about Red Tithe. Jasper the Ranger wished he had tracking skills for FrostMaws. I assume that meant more skills because otherwise he can't be a Ranger. The thought is a bit more than "A Ranger, caught off his guard." Saffra and Mae finding out about Vivi's memory never asked her if a healing potion would help. And Vivienne doesn't know if her body is passed out and starving on her floor. Or does she know, she is fully transported. Just as worrisome to a MC, who's mind is there in her body? What was the last game spell? John Myers Myers 1949 "Silverlock" has a MC stranded in a literary world, by shipwreck. Enough so that MC knows how he got there. Wonderful in many ways. I would prefer the author consider a slower pace, and take time because it's not about output. It's about the author's love, sharing well built characters and our respect for the effort. More that gaps, working toward memorable sections takes time. Some brilliant writing pieces are the snowy landscape and creatures when Saffra levelled up. The voidbeasts here are well described and easy to visualize. It is the gem sections of the author's work that kept me here.

error pokemongo

Vivi crosses the boundary, and finds Isabella working at a Starbucks in Minnesota.

Viria

I hope so too Bl4 has that and it was annoying as hell. That would be an absolutely terrible ‘twist’. It would especially suck given Vivi nearly unlimited power and expertise.

DesertOfGlass

"What? No! This apocalyptic event is not MY fault! I only sacrificed my youngest daughter to an extremely suspicious man to breach the dimensional boundary! No, it's clearly the fault of the woman who saved the world seven times over in the past!" Bruh.

BottledChaos

Thanks for the Chapter!

SleepyKooky

I think the reasons I gave were pretty logical. If you want to disagree you should constructively explain why, otherwise it's just pointless complaining

Arcane Cadence

I don't like how incompetent vivi has been in the last ten or so chapters tbh. The whole ' not kill the red tithe and play around with him for this totally minor reason' was very out of character for a lady who casually blows up entire forests just to prove her identity. Then the whole 'instantly using a spell she has never used before, doesnt understand, and knows is very dangerous just to protect her apprentice' was very cliche, leaving an obvious loophole where the red tithe with probably go to the void with his fancy dagger, kill a bunch of voidlings, level up a bunch, and then come back as a threat. Then, while an entire army is marching through a portal into a city full of civilians, she plays around using a single target kinesis spell instead of using her clearly demonstrated ability to cause mass casualties without damaging the city right off rip. Thousands of creatures at that level should be moving at insane speeds, fully capable of slaughtering hundreds while shes just playing around and having fun. Seems entirely out of character and wildly incompetent

PyritePlunder

I think Rafael is my favorite character! Very well-written!

Alan Kwok

The Duke is completely delusional. I don't know the full scope of the previous cataclysms, but a dimensional breach spewing approximately cataclysm leveled invaders probably counts as one. If she hadn't been there to put so abrupt an end to it, anyway. So to prepare for some hypothetical future cataclysm, he functionally *became* a cataclysm. Mission accomplished? ... And who's to say the special properties of these weapons would even be useful against a future cataclysm, if it stems from the same source? They're resistant to magic and skills because they're foreign to the world. If an incoming cataclysm is *also* foreign to the world, that resistance is a completely moot point. At most you can say they work like regular weapons against a similar aggressor. Absolutely not worth the destruction here. ... And who even knows the consequences of breaking dimensional barriers like this? You're punching holes in the *world* and don't think that might be, I dunno, a bad idea?? That could - potentially - have apocalyptic consequences far worse than any single cataclysm! His justification is absurd, all the way around.

Westeller

Idk, he seems too dangerous

cadmean-handler

Thank you for the chapter! I would totally buy a physical copy of this story

deKu

Vivi don’t look like the marryin’ type.

Matt Grayson

So Vivi races off to rescue Isabella… leaving everyone else floating 1,000 feet in the air on a magic platform. And they’re invisible. “Nova! Get help!”

Matt Grayson

Some people seem to have the idea that some things, such as refusing to kill, is somehow morally superior even if it makes the world a worse place. Personally, if your morals prevent you from making the world a better place, through action or inaction, then what good are they? Ideals don't help people's lives, results do.

Aria

What plan did Rafael make? He simply want information. Research also has provided information that torture is utterly useless in getting information, people will simply say anything to make it end. Did he do wrong? Probably, but espionage isn't exactly a precise work. Was the advice wrong? Yes, but I think we all know that Vivisare isn't some psychotic murder who goes and destroy mansions immediately. And again, they didn't know where the Ritual was. It wasn't at the Dukes home, it was in the guild headquarter and it was stated they likely wouldn't have been in time to visit both. Im not defending Rafael not doing the best, but man you're being waaaaay to accusing. It's not a fairy tale with only positive outcomes at all turns. That makes for an unrealistic and frankly boring children's story.

Oskar Nordström

You know judging by how that other demon noble behaves I'd say that they act like sayians from dbz, so applying that to vivi, it's gonna take a god level threat with genius intellect to really get her blood pumping. And just on a side note, can u imagine someone trying to marry vivi, especially if she's one of those that says her husband must be stronger than her.

JOHNNYBOY 117

Thanks for the chapter

bladepony games

yeah, they should punt him through the rift.

Nodren

Rafael is remarkably cocky for somebody whose fuckup is responsible for this whole mess to begin with. His vaunted intelligence network missed the buildup to an apocalyptic threat, and his genius political advice shielded the Duke from exposure by putting off his confrontation with Vivisari. It's a little rich for him to now be thinking "these fools controlled by their emotions don't realize they are derailing the perfect plans created by me, a genius."

jacobk

Vivi will have a field day in that rift. And "Only I know the secrets" - Vivi found out a ton about that material in seconds and while in combat to boot. Give her minutes, hours or even days and see what happens 🤣 Also: That "organisation" that is apparently playing around with stuff like rifts that can clean the capital from the map in minutes - that's basically another apocalypse in itself, again prevented by Vivi...

Tamashii

I have a feeling that for the most part Saffra wasn't paying attention to it until she learned where her friend was.

Herp Derp

He might have planned that but clearly it didn’t give her much trouble, so it’s definitely not her kryptonite anymore.

Stephen Phillips

I wonder if Saffra noticed Vivi casually destroy a 1950 monster or if she missed it due to being focused on the Duke.

Nick

She did repeat the “See what you can find out” part after killing the monster so just the “This might take some effort.” part should be removed.

Nick

He talks about protecting people from a hypothetical great threat, but he literally unleashed a threat on the order of the Cataclysms. This would be the Eighth Cataclysm if Vivisari wasn't here to clean up his mess.

Kinruush

I hope Rafael is not gonna go Lex Luthor on Vivi. "You are too powerful to be left without check and balances. This void glass is your kryptonite."

Viria

genuinely not surprising, nothing gets humans more riled up than the fear of the unknown

Chaos

Last sentence flows poorly. Try ‘to that woman and her friends, there was never such a thing as a lost cause’

Docnox

Clearly, you've never read the First Law trilogy by Joe Abercrombie... I won't spoil it for anyone, but let's just say that justice was on vacation in those books

Hamis

Huh, so the ritual sent her soul to a different dimension. That... sounds familiar.

Finch

Yet the only important question Rafael didn't think to ask: "Is the high king or any official aware of your plans?"

Cyclone001

Thanks for the chapter!

Olof Karlsson

Thanks for the chapter!

Wensber

Simple solution to ensure the Duke's punishment, spirit him away before he can tell anyone he has that knowledge or that he's even responsible. Vivo doesn't have to kill him, either, just imprison him somewhere nobody can find him. That would be worse than death for him, too.

Kyfe

In the game is very different from in person. Hopefully you have that understanding. Too many people in real life have been playing games for so long. They forget that when you kill somebody in real life it is not the same. To her it is now real life.

Skylar

Absolutely loved the chapter. I do want to point out one minor continuity error. In the chapters from vivi's pov she says it will take some effort and then kills the voidbeast. In this chapter she makes the comment about it taking some effort after killing the voidbeast.

Patrick Dungar

I love this idea. 👏

Skylar

She already did. Back a chapter or so.

Skylar

Oooh or use Cadimore in a ritual to locate/summon back his daughter if she survived? Thanks for the chapter!

Linkneo5

Honestly I hope Vivi or Saffra obliterate this prick. Vivi can question his departing spirit or figure the voidglass out herself lol

Linkneo5

I‘m confused. Shouldn‘t Saffra have summoned nova at this point already? Is this before or after Vivi goes beserk with the artifact book? I thought it would be after because in Vivis pov last chapter she only mentioned she is keeping tabs on their conversation. Not that she talked with her allies.

Girl Moss

yes those words seem a bit like "throw the spear over here." for last words.

Han Pol

turns out the greedy humans scarred by the cataclysms were the 8th cataclysm all along

sommie

In the previous chapter it was stated that Vivi was keeping an ear on the conversation.

khora

I’m begging you please kill this piece of shit!!!

Gildogfish

thanks for the chapter and i would assume that this would be seen as treason or rebellion.

Han Pol

Also loves seeing Rafael play 10-D chess in real time, what a guy. EN PASSANT HIM RN

Zach

If justice doesn't hit that unrepentant villain hard - especially after all the people he got killed and attempted murder of the sorceress herself - then one of the core tenets of storytelling will be violated. Justice must be served, and that is a fate worse than death.

Cyclone001

Hahahahahahahahahahahahahaha “I’m too important to die” - yeah that’s going on his tombstone 100% TFTC!

Zach

I'm kinda hoping that Isabella comes back with some sort of void based class or maybe some voidglass claws or something. It'd be phenomenal if she could completely invalidate he fathers knowledge by her own merits of surviving his insanity

zetorian

I am also betting that Vivi could rediscover anything he knows after a couple years maximum. The puzzle might actually keep her from getting bored a while without needed to fight a literal god. World leaders will probably be a lot less willing to spare Damon for his knowledge if doing so would tick off their savior and if said savior can figure that stuff out anyways.

Garnet of Flame

Small correction: Vivisari said this before she ripped the cataclysm-level threat in two: “See what you can find out,” Vivi repeated gravely to Rafael, already drawing on her mana. “This might take some effort.”

Esko Elo

Tyfc

Shatteredneon

I quite like this chapter, but I’m still hoping Morningstar gets more depth besides “generic evil cult incorporated.” I’m curious what their ultimate goal is, their methods, their leadership. So much can be done with a cult (especially since ancient cults weren’t even necessarily bad, just dedicated to a deity)!

Jiayi Xu

I would like to point out to the good Duke, that the opposite is also true. The value he has is based on his willingness to share what he knows, If we are not getting the information either way then there is no reason for him to live. If he has no intention on disclosing the information on the first place, then he might as well not have it. Informants only get protection if they well... snitch... nobody ever got away with "I know the information you want but I will not share it no matter what"

ElAyVee

A lesson for what? Vivi acted as fast as reasonably possible in this situation. As soon as she knew the problem she started looking into it. It isn't like she just let things go.

Nick

It'll probably open up to a reptile / amphibian zoo in Louisiana whereupon we find out that everyone in Meridian is only 3 inches tall and the creatures coming through are just alligators from the exhibit.

Tom S

Since even Vivi was getting a bit queasy from glancing at the Otherside, I doubt she’s going to let saffra come with her, and she’s probably going to take some… extreme measures to protect herself from corruption.

Garnet of Flame

I love how Rafael's already fully aware of how this event is going to play out and is already planning for what's next. Dimensional breach with a child thrown through it? Well they're the party of heros, obviously they're going to go search for the girl in another dimension.

Sean

So Caldimore thinks that he can string all of the interested parties along indefinitely? Sooner or later they are going to figure out the entire process, at which point he becomes expendable.

Sam I Am

What an odd rpg game where you don't have a kill count of a at least a few thousand varying humanoids when you reach the end game.

Markus

Also the man seems to hate empathy, which his daughter has a lot of.

Garnet of Flame

No, let the daughter be turbodead. It's time she realizes the weight of her choices. Extract all knowledge from the guy, go no mercy on the Morningstars, and be done with it. No deus ex machina please, indulgent self-appeasing behaviour should not be rewarded with a way out. It should be paired with pain and a lesson learned.

Max Lopo

"You rang?", at which Vivi internally giggled. "I am Rafael. My song is a dance for kings, nobles, and their understudies who await. Your drink of insane ambition caused your stumbling removal from the stage. You are no longer a Duke." "The oil for igniting the ritual to heal the wound in the world must be boiled from your living flesh and bones." "The great nonsense of this uncaring fool births these horrors. I do not need him to craft this. [Let time slow] In a thousand years, he may come forth."

error pokemongo

Vivisari and co have killed previous cataclysms, who we know were sentient beings/some human in origin. Presumably cataclysms (and other random quests) also had sentient mobs/bandits to clear. It seem weird she has this hang up on killing the Red Tithe. In a game that seems like a reasonable mid-game boss to kill.

Ilya Valmianski

Rafael was a character I thought to be somewhat Machiavellian, but in this chapter he goes against that because of his inaction and indecision . I like that he starting to see that but I hope he does something decisive soon.

Niels Valkenborgh

Nice to know that the red tithe was the first time Vivisari had killed a person, and so I’m assuming that their status as cataclysms means that Lucorious and The Shattered Oracle couldn’t really count as people anymore. I hope Rafael doesn’t ever beat himself up too much about being “broken” as he puts it. Being able to suppress your rage and other emotions and remain rational in even the most dire conditions is a valuable skill to have for someone trying to manage a little god. Again I love how despite the historical records glossing over their craziness and glorifying the heroes a bit, Vanguard was still full of true heroes in every sense of the word. Their madness—from a mortal’s perspective—was an integral part of their heroic nature. So I really enjoyed that last line. I will now be torturously waiting for the next chapter.

Garnet of Flame

I always forget that Safra and Isabella are so young. Really makes the Duke extra hateable for despising his daughter calling her a failure and useless to the Caldimore family. Yeah no shit dude, she's 13 years old. I wonder what you had accomplished at that age.

Tatus

Tftc

Dukeofchaos

Looks like Vivi has her new goal... I just hope that when they find Isabella, she hasn't been warped into something that has to be put down.

Kalel

It would be insane but interesting to see what Vivi would do when she goes to maybe try and save Isabella. She might even taken Saffra with her to do a field trip.

Mrburgerdon

Uhh having to live like 99% of the people what a unimaginable terrible punishment... Yeah not really. He deserves death.

Cypha

Well, another very interesting chapter. I don't really see why they would keep quiet about Vivi now. Saving basically the whole kingdom is as good as possible of a reason for the Sorceress to return. Anyone with two brain cells will anyways put together she was the one defending the breach and not some random gods incarnation. When she turns up a bit later.

Cypha

The worst punishment for a noble is not to be kill but to be stripped of all his titles and living the rest of his life as a commoner.

Daesolus

TFTC! Need so much more!

Undead Writer

The difference between an amateur and a professional plus one being tied more closely to the case .

Vicente Huerta

And just as importantly, so can everyone else who is helping to fight.

Dotakiin

Decent chapter. It feels like it meanders a little bit but that's most certainly cause im reading from chapter to chapter. I'll give it second pass in a week to see if it reads better then.

Ding Dong

Vivisari 2.0 -The Patch Release!

Matt Grayson

Vivi might not use mind use mind magic on the duke, but I'm pretty sure that the [ten hellish bowel movements] spell is fair game.

Gwalmeich

Some cancers need to be cut out, even if the process can be painful. Also feels really really bad as a reader if a character survives who shouldn't is then able to affect things later on.

Aria

If she gets trapped on the other side of the portal, that would indeed be bad. Stories which do that (especially Chinese cultivation web novels) tend to get sidetracked and quickly become unreadable. So let's go for "jump through, quick check, melt baddie, rescue Isabella, scrape back through the portal just before it closes.

NickT

Poor duke is delusional if he thinks himself so important and knowledgeable as to be in no danger. Blaming Vivi for this is just the icing on a cake... "She forced my hand! Trying to save my daughter's life and compromise the ritual devised by known criminal organization, how dares she!"

Lishmael

sociopathic chessmaster raphael is peak <3 i love that despite his faith in vivisari's character, he's still terrified and spinning up various management strategies for the incarnate mortal god lol. also. trash duke is TRASH sdjkfkj god I hate him. he's so hateable. saffra's so real for throwing hands. i HATE that he's probably going to survive for WAY too long, meanwhile his DAUGHTER is stuck in the void. petition to bring him along on the rescue mission and leave him there!! if he's a real caldimore he wouldn't be scared tbhhhh he should be THROWING himself in there. disgrace to his family smh i hope he gets disowned in the afterlife

rubberducky

Tftc!

brennon Petersen

Maybe let Vivi know about Isabella before the breach closes if she is going anyway

David Welch

Vivi needs a goddess illusion next, to put on the show Rafael needs for her. But we all know she'll jump into the breach once it gets small enough that anything higher than titled can no longer push through...

NickT

Thanks for the Chapter. Hopefully you explaining in plain text why Vivi having flexible morals and giving in to emotions and immediately punishing the duke is a bad thing helps quiet the more bloodthirsty of the commentators. Also nice preemptive logical explanation for why the duke might not be executed even if you do end up having him killed or executed.

Paul

"Between the two—the Duke and the Archmage—Rafael would honestly have expected the latter to break in this particular way. " Except that Aeris worked with Vivi enough to expect her to come back when things got truly awful.

Steven C

Excited to see Vivisari go across the breach :p

Arvedur

I sure hope she isn’t trapped on the wrong side. It takes some heroes a whole volume to make it back from the other side (I’m looking at you, Ilea). Anyway, good luck V + S on your rescue mission.

Matt Grayson

My oh my.

Garnet of Flame

It would be so frustrating if Duke Caldimore lives after this.

chris salinas

“There was never such a thing, to that woman and her prior party members, as a lost cause” - Operation Save Isabella is a go!

James

I know Saffra isn't really helping resolve things, but I have a hard time blaming her. I would also want to hit this man repeatedly about the head and neck.

Helen of Boy

What can I say except you are the GOAT.

Tristan Torn

Tyftc

Sawyer Anderson

Ha! So he can see the approximated level. That’s going to be very interesting. Now then, time to read more than the first sentences…

Aaron A. Cole

Thanks for the chapter!

Kasamuri

Tyftc!

Bobby


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