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Apologies for not finishing this page by Thursday. There was a family emergency the past two days and that has taken up all of my time.

I really liked this redo illustration of Toph in the bottom right but it was being obscured so I removed a panel, and moved the illustration to the top. I'm considering putting the first Panel in "earth sense" so that its like she knows that the superior officer is coming. What do you think of the change, and what do you think of the potential change to the first panel?

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Comments

Do think the earth sense look would be better!

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