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Toph Heavy Part 3 - Page 16 - Final

Added 2022-11-15 20:56:37 +0000 UTC

About this page: Once again I changed the dialog because of the art. As I was rendering, I noticed that Hippo's arm looked like it was bent the wrong way. He could be double jointed, but it still looks weird. Normally, I'd try to redraw the panel. Problem is... we're on a schedule now. So I worked it in to the story. Toph too stronk. I'm not sure about the sound effects. I wanted Hippo's thang to have an audible heartbeat to make it more primal. Not sure if that comes across. I'm not sure if the other audio effects make sense. What do you think?

Edit: changed the dialog quite a bit again, because the art bothered me so much. This arm is a little bit better, if stubby.

About the patreon: It's pretty typical for me to post something and then sort of refine and clean it up. I don't know why, but posting on patreon suddenly makes errors noticable. Anyway, since we're starting to release stuff publicly on thanksgiving, I am going to upload the next two pages in the coming days and refine them as I normally would. Starting this thanksgiving it will be one page a week. I'll post a page, refine it and clean it up over the course of the next couple of days, and then post the next page the following week.