Modern MoGal #179 - The park under the full moon #002 (Early access/提前觀看) (Eng/中文)
Added 2021-09-21 14:53:43 +0000 UTCThis is not Patreon Only content, but Patrons has Early access.
這不是Patreon限定內容，但是會員有提前觀看的權限。
Due to the workload caused by a multi-page, multi-part story arc, the comic release will face some delays. Instead we will feature guest artist works as high-quality rewards.
我們現在作畫速度較慢，所以這個月會有客座畫師放入高畫質獎勵包。
Comments
These action sequences cannot be easy to draw. If the next panels are this complex as well, you have my unquestioned patience. I had mentioned that before, but just wanted to reinforce my understanding.
Jordan Andrew Scherr
2021-09-24 21:49:13 +0000 UTCOH! The tension is immense!
Fred Enders
2021-09-23 03:49:11 +0000 UTCGood call, and very true. I like that as well! Aella's mother is going to be plum-proud of her daughter. Who knows with Carmilla's parents. Shelly sure, but I'm not so sure about the father.
Jordan Andrew Scherr
2021-09-23 02:23:45 +0000 UTCIn regards to healing, Wendy has one advantage. Significant perks to her condition. She can run/climb incredibly well, track by sense of smell, and at least begins to approach Aella's strength. (Good luck beating it, but you get my point.) These traits are what Leo and Jennifer need to focus on for Wendy to find emotional peace. She won't feel so inferior anymore after that. (It might actually be cool if the sense of smell stays partially with her as a human. Suddenly Carmilla has hide and seek competition.)
Jordan Andrew Scherr
2021-09-22 18:21:08 +0000 UTCI like them too. But I also like this: Carmilla and Aella are not in danger, they are both stronger than Wendy, they could save themselves without too much effort; they CHOOSE to be in danger by fighting her without endangering her because the "danger" is a friend of them!
Davide Franzoso
2021-09-22 18:10:43 +0000 UTC(and yes, I have first AND second hand knowledge about this. I'll reserve the second out of respect, but I assure you it hits home. I myself have high functioning autism. I can work with my brain's chemical imbalance, but it's never going to go away.)
Jordan Andrew Scherr
2021-09-22 17:12:50 +0000 UTCThere's no denying it's an intense trauma for Wendy to overcome, particularly since she is permanently a werewolf. This isn't a matter of riding out a disease, it's about accepting one that will never go away. The new cub is incredibly fortunate she has friends, parents, aunts and uncles who can make this possible.
Jordan Andrew Scherr
2021-09-22 17:10:11 +0000 UTCI slept badly today, and I didn't digest lunch well because of the stress. But as Shepherd has published a new chapter, the stress is gone and today is a beautiful day. Thanks, I needed it!
Davide Franzoso
2021-09-22 16:56:38 +0000 UTCThanks. I edited my message accordingly.
Jordan Andrew Scherr
2021-09-22 15:06:50 +0000 UTCAmazon's were from Greek mythology (and supposed to be from Central Asia). So probably wouldn't be worshipping the Norse/Germanic pantheon.
Mark Temple
2021-09-22 06:40:32 +0000 UTCThe right duo is in place to prevent, or at last stop it from continuing. While there's a dark side to all this, that's exactly what gives both parents something meaningful to do. The story of how Leo and Jennifer help Wendy will have as much impact as the initial fight itself. (P.S. I posted a suggestion how the adults can coordinate to help Wendy find fun in being a Werewolf. She's going to be terrified of returning to that playground, yet needs to find peace with this event and her new-self.)
Jordan Andrew Scherr
2021-09-21 22:18:04 +0000 UTCThis is gonna be awesome!! ❤️
TheGrave999
2021-09-21 21:33:07 +0000 UTCI love them all so much, please dont hurt eachother 😥
A2zero
2021-09-21 20:15:02 +0000 UTCLooking forward to the next part
Super Vader
2021-09-21 18:41:37 +0000 UTCOMG OMG OMG!!!!
Mattcucu
2021-09-21 17:52:43 +0000 UTC🥰🥰🥰🥰
Angelo B.
2021-09-21 17:14:30 +0000 UTCLast comment I promised, but imagine the scene! Wendy and Jennifer visit the park on daughter's 3rd or 4th full moon, after she's gained full control of her transformation. Wendy's a little perplexed what they're going to do there, until they actually arrive. She's delightfully dumbstruck to see Carmilla flying through hoops over a circular race track, and Aella wrestling with an ultra tough dummy before hopping on an Amazon size rocking horse. "Can you outrun the bat or arm wrestle in Amazon?" Welcome to the club Wendy! And the perfect way to end it? She climbs to the playset's top and lets out her first heartfelt howl!
Jordan Andrew Scherr
2021-09-21 16:41:42 +0000 UTCSpeaking of "Oh my god," do you know what would be so funny? If Carmilla's plan involves breaking the playground equipment, and Aella's mom works in construction installing playsets. Can you imagine her setting up a playground specifically for monster girls to use their abilities? It would be glorious!
Jordan Andrew Scherr
2021-09-21 16:19:55 +0000 UTC(We have actually seen Aella's mom in a previous panel. That, and her personality. Daughter is going to be stammering trying to explain this. Before she can finish, momma is going to swoop her up and say, "Honey, you where amazing! Greek gods, am I proud of you!") (Thank you Mark Temple for the Edit!)
Jordan Andrew Scherr
2021-09-21 16:04:55 +0000 UTCLots of Brain and Brawn going on here. Nice thinking on Carmilla's part to stop Aella before she was infected. It establishes the duo have the dynamics to stop Wendy. Take your time and let this chapter go as long as it's story asks. You've got GOLD on your hands here!
Jordan Andrew Scherr
2021-09-21 16:03:01 +0000 UTCI like how Carmilla looses her cap when evading. Attention to little detail that count for plenty, along with plenty of foreshadowing. Jennifer asking about the moon sets up for her to look at it when she needs to transform.
Jordan Andrew Scherr
2021-09-21 15:58:32 +0000 UTCI'm wondering how long the comic will continue after Wendy's first "bomb shell" night. Not out of impatience, far from it. More like wanting to see the healing and study process as Wendy is taught to control her new inner beast. I really REALLY hope that isn't truncated. But if this fight is any indicator, it won't be. And the comments + likes tell me the series has that kind of popular support!
Jordan Andrew Scherr
2021-09-21 15:54:55 +0000 UTCSo story wise, it would appear to be a mix of the two theories. Looks like her friends will restrain her until Jennifer arrives. Hence the second bombshell moment of Wendy realizing who her imaginary friend has been all along. But I tell you this, Aella is getting a metal of honor from her mother for bravery! If anything, I'm more worried how Carmilla's parents will react.
Jordan Andrew Scherr
2021-09-21 15:51:33 +0000 UTCAnd how expressive! It's going to be cool seeing how she looks and emotes when not in a blind rage.
Jordan Andrew Scherr
2021-09-21 15:49:15 +0000 UTCThat would explain why this took awhile. Hey, you guys just earned an extra level of patience on my part. Both for production and this episode's likely leingth.
Jordan Andrew Scherr
2021-09-21 15:48:45 +0000 UTCI agree! And this is the story for it too.
Jordan Andrew Scherr
2021-09-21 15:47:57 +0000 UTCNever though this 1-page serie would become an action manga but here we are. And I'm all for it! Great work, Shepherd.
PrismAzure .
2021-09-21 15:21:54 +0000 UTCGreat action!
Randall Norman Pick
2021-09-21 15:21:43 +0000 UTCI know it is a high stress melee but I cant get over how kute Wendy is as a little werewolf!
chronicDreamer
2021-09-21 15:15:41 +0000 UTCSuperb paneling on the action
Fronswath
2021-09-21 15:06:05 +0000 UTCoh no
Visprite
2021-09-21 14:55:38 +0000 UTC
