Suggestions and comments
Added 2019-10-05 06:25:09 +0000 UTCHi guys, how are you ?. I wanted to leave this post open, for suggestions and comments, I think that after 4 Chapters, you already have an opinion about the novel, and I want to know that you would add or remove it from the novel, or that you would change, or directly that you don't like it of the novel, in any aspect: images, voices, sounds, dialogues, etc. I hope to read them soon. Thanks for playing the novel and I leave a hug to everyone 😚
PD: Remember that we already have the Discord server running.
Comments
Hi Rogueremy, before starting the novel, when it was just a piece of paper, I had that idea in mind, it may happen in the future, I think that the novel can be played from the point of view of several characters at the same time , and not just Bennett, if so, his "lost brother" would be an option. Hugs
Luriel
2019-10-06 18:38:06 +0000 UTCSo this is just a suggestion, but I wonder if Bennett could have a brother who moved away from home and now comes back? I know that most players would not be interested in that, it's just my personal suggestion of course. I'm enjoying the game a lot so keep up the good work! :)
rogueremy
2019-10-06 14:27:32 +0000 UTCThanks for the comments Artem, yes, I think about the not too distant future, add a wizard to the plot, I want the novel to have some magic in the story. Hugs
Luriel
2019-10-06 00:26:28 +0000 UTCI love it. The plot is interesting and I like to see character's progression. Most adult games lack it - they just throw different hot CGs on your at most depended on your last choice, and that's it. In your game I can associate myself with the MC. He has personality and he's changing over time passing all those difficult situations. He even has time to reflect and doubt in his actions or feelings, but not too much, not turning it into a soap opera/drama. That's very nice you found this balance. I can't wait to see more, what the story brings. Keep some options open for the MC - like, keep meeting with that girl even if her father is against it, or meet some other girl as well, so bi-sexual player will be happy, I think) Or maybe even add some weird m/m/f scene) I also like fantasy plots, when it's about medieval times. So, having witches, demons, monsters there would be cool.
Artem
2019-10-06 00:21:51 +0000 UTC
