Iridan's magnetic dance flat color WIP

thank you ! :3

Karbo

Thanks you ! her and Tina would do a breathtaking spectacle XD

Karbo

Hnnng . . . so gorgeous! x3 I know I've said this about the previous WIPs, but I really just love these like crazy. Such a sexy sense of motion with the dancing, and Iridan's naughty expressions are just perfect!

PrinnyDood

Amazing.

Asdfghop2

hehe I see what you mean ;D iridan is definitely one of this type ^^

Karbo

yush X3 it was about time she got her own thing XP

Karbo

Thank you ! yes I think that would make a great finale :3

Karbo

thank you ;)

Karbo

oh Tina would do that ^^

Karbo

XD

Karbo

;3

Karbo

Thank you :)

Karbo

Hehe glad you like it X3

Karbo

Iridan's looking really sexy in this one! I'm loving the bubble cheek on page 3, predators playing with prey in their mouth before swallowing is one of my favorite parts of vore <3

atupomaruru

Mais cette DANSE DU VENTRE, bordel ! ^w^

Taiki Sensei

Yes! Finally the ol girl is getting some color! Now her cone back seems far more a serious campaign! X3

David Dent

Nerf karbo! He too creative. Like, he's the dark souls of creativity lol.

turboman500

>///< I would love to see more preds of yours partaking in seductive dances like that. Perhaps one that uses belly dances at some point? That would make my week. <3

vfan1155

Looks stunning! Great work as always :3 Also I really like the idea for the final page <3

Amazing work, then I see there is more than just 1 image and now I'm just speachless

Chaotic Sloth

Like the colors =) Beautiful x3

This is a spectacular dish Chef Karbo

hehe yes exactly X3

Karbo

Oh yes I will definitely add something for the background :)

Karbo

Thank you :D

Karbo

Glad you like it :D Well for the previous version what wasn't really working was to have poses not really separated by panels I think. It made the reading pretty not natural I think ^^;

Karbo

I plan to finish it soon :3

Karbo

I figured you'd like to see those pages XD

Karbo

I'm quite surprised to see the Iridan comic again :-) . Didn't think this was on your list of priorities since I remember that you weren't really happy with it last time. Anyway I really liked all of the past WIP's and I loooooove this one too ^^ . Sexy succubus sure knows how to put that magnetic powers in combination with her curvaceous body to full use on her preys. Not much to add/improve to be honest apart from the usual: More stomach sounds (gurgle, groan, rumble) , lots of saliva/wetness to the open mouth/stomach views and a personal preference one as it would be really really great if you could also completely show Iridans head (satisfied face with open eyes) on her pose with the stomach cutaway view (page 4 first panel on the right) .

JohnboyX

This looks like it has progressed really well. I approve of the survivors witnessing what is happening to their colleagues (I mean how else do we know this has happened unless there is a witness?). XD Keep up the good work!

Nodrog

GASP! LOVE IRIDAN! I AM REAL BIG FAN! MUCH APPROVE!! <3 <3 <3 <3 lol also love the halo she has above her head now with them. And the fact she can seperate metal weapons from the people shows how well she can flow with her magnetic power. Iridan is a real predator ya don't wanna mess with!

Vixsune (ThatSlyFox)

This is coming along very nicely! I will say adding the black defiantly helps, before them it just made the comic look more like a doodle page to me. The only thing I can comment on is that the backgrounds sort of feel empty, but I'm not sure if that was your plan. other why I think this all looks great! Looking forward to final product.

Homer4hire247

I must admit this one is looking top notch karbo! I feel the same way aswell , always like to see at least one get away with a story to tell and live in the raw fear of what is happening around them all at once while they know nothing they do will help!

Jimmypootron