Ideas for the Patreon comic : time to vote !
Added 2017-01-05 16:02:46 +0000 UTCPhew it took me really long to decide on this one ! I was very amazed by the number of ideas you guys submitted ( were talking about several dozens ! o.o ) And many of them were really good ! Thank you ^_^
In the end, after reading and re-reading the whole list several times, I decided based on a mix of a couple things : of course on how interesting the idea is and how inspiring it is to me, but also on how it would look as a comic and if there is enough material to go on several pages :3
So here are the ideas I selected, with my thoughts on it :
1 ) Nagas, adventurers and an hungry slug-girl :
This one based is based on several suggestions ^^ It would be a bit like the anticipation strip ( https://www.patreon.com/posts/anticipation-5415259 ) but turned into an actual comic :3
A group of adventurers and their two naga guides somehow get caught in a sticky trail left by a slug girl. they struggle and panic to free themselves from it before something big find them. Some of them would manage it by discarding items of clothing but some would stay stuck as they watch Pipril slowly approach ! Lot of vore ensues X3
In term of vore I think this one is really interesting because it would play a lot on anticipation as the slug girl close on them and then take her sweet time slurping them one by one, while the remaining ones watch in horror their companions getting gulped down. There would be some nagas getting eaten spaghetti style as well as Pipril is pretty adept at swallowing them despite their long tail ( Personally the « slurping » scenario is one I like a lot in vore ! ), sticky spit to catch a prey running, some teasing and noisy digestion. It would clearly focus a lot on the swallowing, with a lot of inside shots.
And maybe in the end "the one that got away" scenario with one member of the group having escaped Pipril only to become stuck in another sticky trail. Then maybe an ironic end with just a passing fairy walking by, spotting the survivor, plucking them and eating them before wandering off XP
2) The meeting of Crisis and Lea
Now fore some Felaryan History ! Those two met when Lea was a slave and was being transferred from one world to another, with a brief passage through Felarya. That was the plan anyway. However a wild Crisis appeared, overcame the caravans rather unprepared defenses and started to devour everyone left and right. She spared Lea though, at first entranced by her voice, then interested by her as a person wen she heard her story.
Its been really long I didnt do a comic with those two and its a moment of Felaryan history :) I can imagine some really interesting and moving dialog between the two, as well as some views of Balfrezagg, Leas native place ^^ But also quite a lot of vore with Crisis gorging herself on the caravan of course X3
Overall I feel this idea represents a good balance :)
3) Traditional giantess rampage !
Several of you have suggested me to do some more « classical giantess » :)
This idea is more about the setting than the actual story ( at least for now in my mind ) . It would be all about « classical giantess » with a giantess ( or more ) rampaging through a modern city. Lot of playful destruction ensue with a very monster movie feel to it except.. well instead of Godzilla you have a lovely giant lady doing it XP
Obviously it would be a very visual type of comic, with a lot of panels playing on the sheer gigantism of the giantess, perspective shots etc.. in order to make the reader feels theyre really here and also to convey theyre really small !
Among some of the scenes I imagine could be happening, there is one where the giantess holds a bus above her mouth and shake it to make its occupants fall in her maw. I know this scene remains a big favorite among macrophiles ;3
Is the giantess coming from space as a scout for an invasion force maybe ? Or was she enlarged as some kind of new experimental weapon program and something went horribly wrong ? Maybe theres a hero trying to stop the giantess by climbing on her and trying to get to her, or trying to fix some mind-controlling device ? I dont know, but there are certainly a ton of possibilities and fun things to do here ! XP
4) The slumbering giantess :
The theme of unaware vore is one that come back often in what people suggest me and this comic could be an occasion to do just that :3 This one is quite similar to one of the entry in the last Patreon comic poll and to a sketch I did a while ago : https://www.patreon.com/posts/sleeping-and-6655616
As I see it two humans ( or tinies ? ) are running through the jungle ( maybe fleeing some threat chasing after them ). They arrive at a gap with a giant Temi ( ? ) sleeping underneath. The first one jumps across it. The second then try but somehow fall on Temi's mouth ! I can imagine the prey panicked efforts to get out as Temi's mouth open on its own to take them in. The first human would try to lower themselves to the mouth ( maybe by holding a vine ) to haul up their trapped friend, only to eventually watch them getting swallowed by the sleeping fairy. Then the first one try to get back up to safety but fall in Temi's mouth as well ( maybe Temi burps in her sleep and cause them to lose their purchase ? )
This one would be very visual, showing a lot of inside mouth shots obviously and the frantic efforts of the prey to escape the mouth. This would be a very « biological » type of vore as well. No teasing here, its just Temis body functioning on its own ! Which in term of vore scenario is pretty fascinating too XP
5) The cursed relic :
A group of adventurers have gone out to find a certain object or relic, only to find out that when they get their hands on said object it shrinks them!
Now the startled party have to find a way back through a route home that has become 100x more dangerous due to a certain size reduction. Just making their way back to the entrance of the temple would be a journey in itself, when simple cracks on the floor have become menacing pits and all sort of items are now obstacles or walls. Not to mention they left one of the member of their group at the entrance ( For some reasons Im imagining a shy, introverted female neko ). Who was too afraid / sick to enter ? And now that they are tiny they are slowly realizing shes now a predator? ( especially if they mistreated her before ) Or maybe instead of a member of the group she is the guardian of the place ?
The idea is still to be developed in term of scenario but it would play a lot on the shrinking and the perspective you have on the world when you are small, and it would also focus much more on the prey perspective too :)
6) Hell trials :
Another mix between several of your ideas :3 In this one, Chalyss ( she is by far the most likely pred to do this ) has gotten her hand and on a bunch of tinies and make them compete in various sort of ways ( asking them riddles or/and physical challenge ), promising to let the winners out and eat the losers. There would be a lot of teasing Chalyss-style like you can imagine as you know how much she enjoys it X3
The culminating scene in my head would be that of a maybe some sort of makeshift bridge, with Chalyss under it, mouth wide open, and two challengers brawling and attempting to throw their opponent in the pit. (and maybe Chalyss burping intermittently from the ones she already ate, to « motivate them ! ). A sort of Felaryan version of the Sarlacc pit scene XD
It could be also a nice occasion to show a bit more in details what life for the survivors looks like in the library, with maybe day to day stuff like hunting small creatures living there. I imagine some kind of possible ironic end as well with the winner being released by Chalyss but maybe getting picked up by Ashmet who was passing by as they exit the room ?
Well thats it ^^
So It's now time to vote ;3
IMPORTANT :
Please put the all six ideas in the decreasing order you prefer them ( the last being the one you'd least wish to see )
This way we can do a preferential voting system where the '1' votes are tallied up, and the option with the lowest percentage of votes is eliminated. From the people who voted on the eliminated option, their '2' votes are then taken and added to the votes of the surviving options, and it continues until one option has greater than 50% of the total votes.
Also keep in mind those are base and rough ideas. Once one of them is selected, I'm going to work closely with you guys and ask your opinion to refine it ;3 This means it coud change and evolve quite a lot !
Also I'm not entirely sure yet but rather than making a long ( 20 + pages ) comic, maybe make two medium ones insteads ? We'll see, I'm still thinking on that ^^
Comments
Lars Flyger
2017-01-19 04:43:24 +0000 UTCMangamastermind
2017-01-19 01:06:36 +0000 UTCKevin Harding
2017-01-19 00:42:02 +0000 UTCJulian
2017-01-18 23:51:49 +0000 UTCJupiter
2017-01-18 23:33:31 +0000 UTCNoral
2017-01-18 18:58:52 +0000 UTCJulian Travaglia
2017-01-18 18:43:11 +0000 UTCAmerdism
2017-01-18 17:40:11 +0000 UTCTyrion13
2017-01-18 17:19:56 +0000 UTCYuzaris
2017-01-18 17:07:13 +0000 UTCFlaps
2017-01-18 16:26:23 +0000 UTCDon Collectoria
2017-01-18 16:06:52 +0000 UTCShriven
2017-01-18 15:47:08 +0000 UTCKobold
2017-01-18 15:46:55 +0000 UTCKonton454
2017-01-18 15:43:45 +0000 UTCAin
2017-01-18 15:42:09 +0000 UTCMaplesburg Publishing
2017-01-18 15:41:29 +0000 UTCRamiro Garza
2017-01-18 15:40:56 +0000 UTCEhren
2017-01-17 06:51:40 +0000 UTCAilith
2017-01-16 23:08:21 +0000 UTCAerys Bat
2017-01-16 05:26:31 +0000 UTCSenecaHyde
2017-01-16 04:43:39 +0000 UTCStahlinator
2017-01-16 01:04:55 +0000 UTCZalzas
2017-01-16 00:16:41 +0000 UTCNodrog
2017-01-15 22:58:13 +0000 UTCKarbo
2017-01-15 17:20:58 +0000 UTCKarbo
2017-01-15 17:20:17 +0000 UTCKingboo983
2017-01-15 17:14:53 +0000 UTCKarbo
2017-01-15 17:02:19 +0000 UTCKarbo
2017-01-15 17:01:27 +0000 UTCKarbo
2017-01-15 17:00:49 +0000 UTCRobert The Bruce
2017-01-15 15:43:53 +0000 UTCLalavi
2017-01-15 14:38:24 +0000 UTCWhitelion03
2017-01-15 13:18:00 +0000 UTCYuan
2017-01-15 12:16:36 +0000 UTCJumper9
2017-01-15 09:30:59 +0000 UTCAnonymous McFakename
2017-01-15 08:20:34 +0000 UTCThatGuy
2017-01-15 08:15:04 +0000 UTCJS-Xeno
2017-01-15 06:19:02 +0000 UTCKain
2017-01-15 05:50:53 +0000 UTCheromanbunny
2017-01-15 05:44:42 +0000 UTCSergey Komanov
2017-01-15 04:50:02 +0000 UTCNyiss
2017-01-15 04:46:55 +0000 UTCtjb0607
2017-01-15 04:36:26 +0000 UTCKexSonOfCormac
2017-01-15 04:27:26 +0000 UTCSemaphore
2017-01-15 04:03:29 +0000 UTCKomg
2017-01-15 03:38:09 +0000 UTCDavid Dent
2017-01-15 03:32:15 +0000 UTCyamiasuna95
2017-01-15 03:25:41 +0000 UTCZephyr
2017-01-15 03:24:01 +0000 UTCkaibrightwing
2017-01-15 03:12:07 +0000 UTCDresdenQ
2017-01-15 01:41:48 +0000 UTCTomnautical
2017-01-15 01:40:24 +0000 UTCTestSubject6
2017-01-15 01:22:41 +0000 UTCgwadahunter2222
2017-01-15 00:54:47 +0000 UTCBrendanZillyhoo
2017-01-15 00:48:36 +0000 UTCMos
2017-01-15 00:42:48 +0000 UTCMinamoto Terumi
2017-01-15 00:35:34 +0000 UTCPanzerDan
2017-01-15 00:33:42 +0000 UTCTENEB99
2017-01-15 00:31:54 +0000 UTCkaiju56monster
2017-01-15 00:24:14 +0000 UTCbask25456
2017-01-15 00:23:15 +0000 UTCCali
2017-01-15 00:21:45 +0000 UTCSaftkeur
2017-01-13 18:09:37 +0000 UTCChance Hanley
2017-01-13 03:37:42 +0000 UTCKarbo
2017-01-12 09:31:21 +0000 UTCnostromo
2017-01-11 23:03:33 +0000 UTCErnst Undesser
2017-01-11 06:33:40 +0000 UTCyesyesyou1234
2017-01-10 08:36:07 +0000 UTCHola
2017-01-10 01:53:15 +0000 UTC1, 4, 3, 5, 6, 2
Homer4hire247
2017-01-09 14:00:47 +0000 UTC542613
Toast Baron
2017-01-09 13:53:42 +0000 UTCWell, there are several interesting choices. Still, instead of following my desire for vore this time, my vote goes to Crisis' and Lea's meeting. I love those two!
2017-01-09 12:08:46 +0000 UTC165432
2017-01-09 02:21:03 +0000 UTC4,5,3,2,1,6
2017-01-09 01:58:17 +0000 UTC6,1,2,4,5,3
Triskelion
2017-01-09 01:39:19 +0000 UTC6 5 2 4 3 1
2017-01-08 22:18:25 +0000 UTC6.5.3.1.2.4
2017-01-08 18:37:54 +0000 UTCThese are all fantastic ideas!! My order goes 5,1,3,6,2,4, I think for 5 the Neko should be changed for slug girl, it would be a nice combo to still see some slug girl vore but just with a smaller slug girl :) also I feel if number 3 wins that the alien scenario would play best but the aliens must look alien ;) other than that many thanks for considering my ideas :)
Jimmypootron
2017-01-08 15:13:50 +0000 UTCCan you indicate your order of preference for the five others please ? :3
Karbo
2017-01-08 14:45:44 +0000 UTCCan you indicate your order of preference for the five others please ? :3
Karbo
2017-01-08 14:44:14 +0000 UTC4,3,5,1,2,6
Scott Miller
2017-01-08 02:45:26 +0000 UTC3, 2, 5, 6, 1, 5.
Lime Siren
2017-01-07 21:51:36 +0000 UTC5,4,1,2,6,3
2017-01-07 21:11:53 +0000 UTC4 3 1 5 2 6
RoTheHuman
2017-01-07 18:40:23 +0000 UTCWow, all of these are realy good! It's actually hard to pick :( but here goes - 6, 5, 2, 3, 1, 4
turboman500
2017-01-07 14:37:57 +0000 UTC1,5,2,6,3,4
Davo
2017-01-07 10:43:47 +0000 UTC3, 4,1,5,2,6
2017-01-07 10:18:36 +0000 UTC3,4,5,6,2,1
2017-01-07 07:23:44 +0000 UTC5,4,6,3,1,2
ZaneofBane
2017-01-07 06:02:10 +0000 UTC5,4,1,2,3,6
Cable
2017-01-07 05:43:20 +0000 UTCThrow my hat in for 3,4,5,1,6,2 Gotta go for that rare opportunity to see how you'd handle the rampage!
Doc
2017-01-07 05:31:16 +0000 UTC6,5,4,1,2,3
dzutte
2017-01-07 02:42:20 +0000 UTC2,3,4,6,1,5
PickledHotDog
2017-01-07 01:41:27 +0000 UTC1
Dekkard
2017-01-06 23:53:40 +0000 UTC4
2017-01-06 23:41:14 +0000 UTC4, 6, 1, 3, 5, 2
2017-01-06 23:23:25 +0000 UTC1,5,6,4,2,3
Franz Hässler
2017-01-06 23:20:39 +0000 UTC1,5,2,6,4,3 . I love the idea with a shy neko, maybe they maked fun of her and left here as a joke behind. TIME FOR THE SHY REVANCHE.
2017-01-06 20:49:03 +0000 UTCTough choices heh- but I gotta vote for 2, 1, 5, 4, 6, 3
Asuroth
2017-01-06 20:13:47 +0000 UTC5,1,4,6,2,3, methinks. The dynamic you've described with the shy, scared neko girl that suddenly becomes empowered is one of my favorite fantasies. :3 Then again, the mouth play, and anticipation sounds just as tantalizing. And of course we can always do with more Chalyss. This is a very difficult vote xD However, I'm not worried, because I know whatever wins is going to be a masterpiece. :)
2017-01-06 16:03:33 +0000 UTC4,6,3,5,2,1 yeh
MadameMaeve
2017-01-06 15:27:21 +0000 UTC1, 2, 3, 6, 5, 4 I'm obviously somewhat biased towards 1, but all of these sound like a lot of fun, so I'll be quite thrilled to see whatever ends up winning. :3
PrinnyDood
2017-01-06 13:32:36 +0000 UTC6, 4, 2, 1, 5, 3 Just can´t get enough of Chalyss <3
2017-01-06 12:48:26 +0000 UTC1 6 3 4 5 2
Life-Saver
2017-01-06 12:03:07 +0000 UTCnagas, adventurers, and hungry slug girl. +stomac Transparency?
Life-Saver
2017-01-06 12:00:05 +0000 UTC3, 6, 5, 1, 4, 2
2017-01-06 08:30:53 +0000 UTC1, 6, 3, 4, 5, 2
2017-01-06 08:21:41 +0000 UTC4, 5, 3, 1, 6, 2
ASKDV
2017-01-06 05:02:09 +0000 UTC3, 5, 4, 6, 1, 2
HunterGarou
2017-01-06 04:31:47 +0000 UTC4, 5, 3, 2,1,6
2017-01-06 04:28:10 +0000 UTC2 or 6
AndurilWielder
2017-01-06 04:27:49 +0000 UTC1, 5, 6, 2, 3, 4 :). Looking forward to whatever you choose, you rock man.
Woeirnoginds
2017-01-06 03:21:06 +0000 UTC1,3,4,5,2,6
Nick2802
2017-01-06 01:03:52 +0000 UTC1, 5, 6, 2, 3, 4.
Vision
2017-01-06 00:27:22 +0000 UTC1,4,6,2,3,5
Hans
2017-01-06 00:00:12 +0000 UTC4,6,5,2,3,1
2017-01-05 23:14:14 +0000 UTC2,3,4,1,5,6 just a little tired of hell as an setting. With the place taking up the last two major comics and a succubus at work on the way I think it would be nice for a break.
2017-01-05 22:42:55 +0000 UTC6, 4, 5, 2, 3, 1.
Enigmatic Jester
2017-01-05 22:15:55 +0000 UTC2,1,3,4,5,6
DarenGC
2017-01-05 21:53:17 +0000 UTC4, 5, 2, 6, 3, 1
2017-01-05 21:10:40 +0000 UTC1, 2, 3, 5, 6, 4
2017-01-05 20:47:53 +0000 UTC3, 4, 5, 6, 2, 1 i would not mind two shorter comics if it ends up working out better for you.
purpledenmark
2017-01-05 20:42:36 +0000 UTC3 all the way
2017-01-05 19:15:01 +0000 UTC1, 6, 2
Bitter
2017-01-05 19:14:59 +0000 UTCOhh man ^^; deciding on an order of choice was not that easy since all ideas are really good :-) . Anyway here goes °_^: 5,4,2,6,1,3
JohnboyX
2017-01-05 18:46:28 +0000 UTC5 6 1 4 3 2
vbk345
2017-01-05 18:16:21 +0000 UTC6,1,5,4,2,3 is my voting
Sebastian Welz
2017-01-05 17:39:17 +0000 UTC2! hands down! also 2 4 3 5 6 1
Feedfancier
2017-01-05 17:39:17 +0000 UTCcan you vote for the rest as well though please ? ^^;
Karbo
2017-01-05 17:31:56 +0000 UTC4 3 5 6 2 1. But in a way I kind of want them all to be done haha
Chaotic Sloth
2017-01-05 17:19:38 +0000 UTCI'm voting for just 5, I like the whole idea of its concept. Edit: 5,2,3,4,6,1
Vixsune (ThatSlyFox)
2017-01-05 17:12:40 +0000 UTCI think both story and material wise it my preference would be: 2 1 4 5 3 6 I really like the world you have set up, and feel that both option 2 and 1 would really show off your particular flavor and style very well. Seeing more of the world, especially with familiar characters is great. And the way you integrate the history with the action in idea 2, to me, seems like it would flow really well. As for 1 i think the scenario would work really well and it has a certain balance between horror and the happy anticipation perspectives. The rest of the vote is just personal preference. =P
2017-01-05 17:12:31 +0000 UTCSpeaking from my preference...6,4,2,3,5,1
Rem Buchard
2017-01-05 16:54:58 +0000 UTCI'm going to say... 2 6 4 3 1 5
AngelicChaos
2017-01-05 16:47:08 +0000 UTC