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Read them!

There is so much dialogue, is it Death Note??? xD

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These pages are aimed at the reader first: that's me "laying the foundation", helping you understand what's going on and reminding you where we are at the moment. 

In Chapter 06 we experienced the Boy's sleep paralysis from the outside: we were seing it without knowing what the Boy was feeling, because I don't let you know what my characters are thinking.  To make up for this lack of text I had to make the Boy talk about it: his therapist is probably the only one he opens up to, and the Boy is now describing an actual sleep paralysis. 

Those dialogues  gave me such a hard time, it doesn't show but I'm REAAALLY careful with what I'm saying here lol. 

Same for the therapist (Lee!) talking about Tera: I have to say, as confusing as it is: I think the therapist is wrong about Tera's intentions. Not fully wrong, but at that moment of the story Tera isn't aware he needs help.  - "He probably don't know how to behave with you":  wrong too (imo) I think he actually don't even think about it: he's a male lol, not the overthinking type. Lee does pinpoint something tho:  the Boy is safe with him as Tera wouldn't harm him. Tera is just enjoying the Boy's attitude. 

Side note: The Therapist is the mirror character: he shows the Boy what he cannot see about Tera. He is there to highlight his human side. Joris is a mirror character too, but dedicated to the Black Death side: he keeps reminding the Boy how they are powerful and how he should be dead by now lol. The Boy sees none of it.

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Let's talk about that painting! It's a bit of a spoiler...  but not that much, and  I thought you would like me to share this with you (otherwise you might just not see it/understand it) when you'll  see it again later you will remember this post and probably enjoy it better!

This is my notes about it:

The painting represents a huge forest of tree trunks. (I had given up on references to the Little Red Riding Hood a long time ago, but then I had this idea and it was just perfect) : The forest symbolizes the place of ordeal (?)  for the one who is forced to venture into it, for the one who has gone off the path, a place where he faces his fate, the unknown and all that is scary, to reach adulthood. It is also the representation of the unconscious. And the place where the Big Bad Wolf lives. The fact that the painting appears at this moment is prophetic: the Boy will very soon lose himself in this forest and will symbolically meet the Wolf (get to know Tera). The frame is not hooked yet because the Boy has not stepped  into the forest yet, he continues to reject Tera out of his world. Yet he's like mesmerized by the painting: "what's on the other side?".

On his next visit (to the therapist) Tera and the Boy's relationship will have already grown a little and so the painting will be hooked. The Boy will say:  "I didn't notice it was so big..."  a way of saying: "it looked much less scary from the outside. Now I'm lost in it. Will I ever get out?"  as he's probably started to slowly fall for Tera, which will lead him to fight for him.

So keep an eye on it! ;D

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I've already put that kind of stuff in the previous chapters without telling... but it's up to you to find out !


I hope you liked that update and this post!!!โค

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Iโ€™m obsessed with your artwork ๐Ÿ˜ Such an amazing talent ๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•

Marzi

YOU GO DOC! Finally someone talks some sense into the boy. Even if the therapist is wrong, itโ€™s still better than what the boy has been thinking about Tera all this time๐Ÿคฃ I love how there is so much thought and depth behind your every narrative choice. Youโ€™re a great storyteller!

Alessia

That whole conversation had me laughing!

Forester

Me too!!

LadyKya

Will the sequel to chapter eight release next month?

Adriana Santos

lmaooo the imaginary hair flip ๐Ÿ˜ญ i think its nice he has his therapist he trusts to talk to about all these things๐Ÿฅบ

churrry

Aw thank you! I'm so happy you enjoy my comments on the comic!

Z-Pico

" The boy seems like the person who would need a friendly environment to be able to speak his mind" that's a VERY GOOD point! See, you'd be a good therapist lmao โค

Z-Pico

Omg the hair flip!! Im glad Iโ€™m too burned out from work and school to analyze Tera Iโ€™m not putting my psych degree to work lol (also Iโ€™m scared I might be wrong like the psychiatrist and then Iโ€™ll never hype myself up to become one ๐Ÿ˜Ÿ๐Ÿ˜‚) I really want to discover the story as I go ๐Ÿ’– itโ€™s a beautiful story and Iโ€™m excited to see the boy venture into that forest. There are hard boundaries to never cross but a little hair flip can ease a patient so I thought it was really nice. The boy seems like the person who would need a friendly environment to be able to speak his mind so although patient and therapist canโ€™t be friends I see why he gave the boy a bit more leniency. Canโ€™t wait to see Tera and the boy interact more and in a deeper level understand each other!

naviist

Lmao huum Aj, whose side are you on ???

Z-Pico

I canโ€™t wait to see joris again! Hopefully he is successful in kidnapping the boy and delivering him to Tera!

Aj

Hair flips with no hair ๐Ÿ’€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ’€

Ky0hcp

Omg, I replied to your comment on the other post but you deleted it and mine got deleted too xD I'll write it here AGAIN don't worry haha

Z-Pico

Yeah, Tera doesn't seem like a damsel in distress... tho, I can't ignore the fact that The Boy "accidentally" hurts (or intentionally stops) people who have shady intentions towards Tera..

WhyAmIHere

I love to get to know more of the boy !!!! <3 only one thing which bothered me a little is, that the boy was talking too casual with the therapist, as far as I know, and experienced myself as well is that it's pretty important to keep it at a distance and be more formal (so It's also easier for the therapist to give you professional help - could say he is the professional mirror of the boy). But I love everything you do and I hope you don't mind my opinion. That was just a feeling I got while I was reading, it didn't feel much authentic to me (personally! - I know it's fiction but still). But super excited how the boy will approach Tera next time, keeping the therapist's words in mind. Thank you so much for the Update <3

DC

So much info to mull over ๐Ÿ˜ the "Pico universe" just keeps getting more in depth! I love update time of the month and getting to understand your work that bit more each time ๐Ÿ–ค xx

Chloe Mason

Tera seems like a pretty charismatic guy, so I never thought about him not being able to make true friends/romantic relationships. I find it cute that he likes the boyโ€™s attitude. Because the boy is truly full of attitude!

Aj

I love the therapist!!!

Beatriz 'Trixie' Montes de Oca

I LOVE it when you talk about the post in greater depth! LMAO the therapists โ€œhairโ€ flip! I like him already

Aj

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