Read the new pages!
Read desc, there's some funny shit lol!
OH NO it cuts before the best part !!! Haha I think that shot is my favorite one! That's small details but I love when characters are interacting with each other while focusing/doing something else, makes it really natural-
For that opening scene I had in mind those scene where the wife kicks out her husband who cheated on her! Haha
But the last page is definitely my favorite page! Visualy speaking lol. It just looks good!
I know I KNOW you really wanted to see the Boy blush when he sees Tera shirtless! That's what usually happens in that kind of story lol; I didn't make him blush earlier cause he's really mad at Tera! He just can't see any beauty there haha. That's only in the last page when he faces Tera's body that close that it feels intimate to him. I kinda like that scene with Tera being "at the Boy's mercy" (cause he accepts it lol) he is calm, stays still. He has his head in his shirt so he doesn't even see the Boy.
Now let's talk about that shirt scene u__u At first I thought "Okay, let's use that shirt to kinda translate the way Tera is acting with the Boy": he's aware the shirt is fragile/delicate (?) so he doesn't want to damage it by being to brutal. He knows he is strong, so he is very careful, and even stop moving when he feels stuck instead of just tearing off the shirt. And that's pretty much what he does with the Boy too!
And then. Something happened u_u As I started to write the dialog of this page I realized I could hide some double meanings in it lol. Couldn't push it too far, lack of English vocabulary :/ but I started to list sentences they could say in ...other situations that would match with the shirt scene. Me bypassing my own censorship lol. Enjoy!
(PS: if you have better sentences I'll take it!)
Also some stuff are inspired by your comments! The fact that Tera says "you dragged me all over the room!!" was said once and made me laugh so I used it! Same when he says "Sounds like a regular Tinder date to me." With the last update some of you were like " oh yeah, it happened to me too !" (hiding a boyfriend) haha and as it matches Tera using Tinder, I put it there...!
I really really hope you like this update!!! The struggle was real I swear OMG-
In the next update (if everything fits) the Boy hits Tera 3 times, in 3 different ways, with 3 different intensities. I swear, that poor Tera -
OOH PS: Note that at the end, the Boy stares at Tera's wounds/scars, and not his nipples lol The fact that I only draw them in that last closeup shot means they're light/old scars. I didn't want huge scars on that body lol. Not there.
Ra
2024-05-04 15:29:32 +0000 UTCClaudine Cinq-Mars
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