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Monthly update ! I hope you'll like these new pages! 

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  Were you expecting this?? The funny part will start right after this tho!  I think the worst thing in this situation is not having a criminal sleeping on the bed, it's Tera's smell. 


The other day I was thinking about Tapas, and I actually wonder if they'll let me post chapter 5 because of the violence. Or  I'm gonna get banned lol. Quite a few upcoming scenes/themes will probably pose a problem too -

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OH, I watched AHS, 1984, and LOVED IT ! Which is weird cause I'm not a big fan of slasher, but I love the two "main" characters (the girls) and what a thrilling story ! (I also thought "wait, so MY chapter 5 was controversial because of a man burning, but what is THIS??!" I was shocked by all the violence in this show xD) Haha -

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Comments

Une narration très maîtrisée pour une scène à la fois intimiste et de forte tension en ce qu’elle révèle ou laisse entendre des personnages (jusque dans leur part si sombre comme cette odeur de cochon grillé 😳). Et toujours cet art du découpage et des cadrages. C’est magnifique

Jean-François Quevrain

<[•♡•]> ooooh! Love it >◇<

Mahonica

This is for everyone who's wandering, why is the storyline so preposterous, let me enlighten you. THeY👁️👄👁️ArE👁️👄👁️FreNCh. Theyarefrench. If you didn't get this, you are most probably American Or French. Kbye :) Short p. s. No hate directer towards french or the author of this ?Shounen-ai?

_damn_rius

Oohhhhhh! Is boy gonna get curious and lift the mask....?

Hufflefxck

Hahaha can't believe Tera took the pill 😂😂😂

Paola

"Oh, my gosh, please!!!" ?!? I'm laughing my heart out ... really. I have a feeling the boy's conflicted and might want to call the police. Goodness gracious, if that's the case I do hope Tera's faking it. Thank you for the wonderful cliffhanger ... I love it.

Andy

Can I ask something? Why I can't open patreon app? Is that my problem °^°?

Francesca Chan

The boys eyes seem more sparkly in this update. I like it a lot x

Lucy

I loved this update! I feel sorry for Boy and his sheets lol. about Tapas, I think they can be pretty lenient, so posting chapter 5 should be ok! I think you just have to make sure to add the warning.

weirdgirljuliet

Toujours aussi beau et convaincant. Je vous ai fait un message

Jean-François Quevrain

Et maintenant, il ne peut même pas dormir... le pauvre...

LadyKya

You are absolutely right! I thought about it when I wrote it, so I added that moment when Tera says he's exhausted (before he drank the water) meaning he was really tired, the pill just made it worse. But I agree with you lol. Let's pretend it would happen haha.

Z-Pico

Yeah, sleeping pills are not that easy to fight against. Once you took them youu can count down from 30. They send you straight on the bars and you have no chance of getting one awake. Although they might not have such a big effect on Tera because he is way heavier than the boy.

Michael Lohmeier

It's so cool you liked the show! I also like it and such things reminds me how small is the world. And there's no limits in countries, boundaries and languages - no limit for art. And such thing also may be said about your art. And I like pages! They are a bit funny, a bit sweet and a bit tragic. Poor guy from the bank and poor is the Boy who needs sleeping pills.

Maj

Oooh okay :o Thank you for telling me about it! I'll have to find a way anyway because the "worst" scenes are those who actually help to understand the story lol Thank you for your support NyRiam <3

Z-Pico

Some people on Webtoon and Tapas do it this way..you cut the worst parts out and leave only parts of panels...that way its safe....some Nsfw authors show for example faces or only part of panels and then you can see full view on patreon....also a kind of advertisement for you ;) cant wait to reaaad

NyRiam

😁😁🤷‍♂️

Z-Pico

Haha, if your look carefully, you'll see that in chapter 5 (in the boy's room) there's a pill in a glass ! When Tera asks about it, the Boy was supposed to say "It keeps me from waking up at night" because of his nightmare etc, so you can understand, but decided to say it later, in case people didn't get it!

Z-Pico

Oooh, I can’t wait for the funny part! Also, I think Tera kinda deserved that kick lol. I like how this shows a more immature side to Tera. Like he’s not just some criminal mastermind that always thinks things through (unless he’s faking it lol, then he really would be a mastermind).

Aj

The boy should take this time to snatch teras mask off, but I’ll bet he’ll wake up before it fully comes off lol just to tease us

Aj

SLEEPING PILL?! That was a surprise. I thought Tera was faking being asleep so that the boy would stop talking about the guy he murdered!

Aj

HAHA, might be!

Z-Pico

love the new pages!!! the eyes of the boy in the first panel..i think i lost myself in them. <3 BUT...How can you leave us hanging NOW at this SCENE!! no i did surely not expect this XDDD but i think they boy will remove the mask to finally see Tera's beauty hehoheoeheo uwu <3

Mym Phoenix McFly

YAY I can’t wait to read it!!!

Aj


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