New Pages !
Added 2020-08-31 12:23:40 +0000 UTCLINK
I like these pages, they look pretty good ! *proud*
We all got those glowing plastic stars at one point, don't lie !!! Haha-
I made it more noticeable than expected, but did you notice ? We've been two times in the Boy's room, each time everything seemed banal - since it is his daily life. But when Tera gets in, he instantly sees everything that's "wrong".
Also, I didn't tell you but we have already started to dive into the "metaphor" aspect of the story: the way the scenes follow each other means something! so much mystery !!!?
If I'm right, in the next update there will be contact U///U
I hope you'll like these new pages !! Thank you so much for being so supportive! <3
Comments
My two sons, 15 & 17, still have these glowing stars on the ceilings in their bedrooms!
Scarlett Quinn
2024-12-21 07:23:52 +0000 UTCIt is so much fun re-reading those comments with the story at chapter 8 now. Some of you nailed it, kudos! (And some wishes came true - "fan-service" at its best).
Mellowcat
2022-02-28 07:29:21 +0000 UTCSo much effort with the symbolism of things. So much to explore and discover, partial with Tera as a guide, the Wolf sniffing out the boys weakness. Sharp nose, prying eyes, clever swift "moves"... what a joyride. Got me hook line and sinker time and again.
Mellowcat
2022-01-10 20:05:53 +0000 UTCHaha you make some interesting comments ! Can't tell you too much but I assume you won't be disappointed!
Z-Pico
2020-08-31 19:19:48 +0000 UTCI kinda know for Tera, and hesitated to say it on his Character sheet lol
Z-Pico
2020-08-31 19:13:41 +0000 UTCHaha yeah we all did at some point and just because we were too lazy to take them of, they stayed there years ! At that's what happened for the Boy lol. What an interesting comment !! Love the fact that you try to analyse the scenes ! Yeah don't worry, the Boy will be a good fighter ;) They both have a very interesting evolution pattern!
Z-Pico
2020-08-31 19:12:39 +0000 UTCI'm in love with this pages! But I excited to see the events of last post in they're real life 😏 Tera has to take off his mask in the next update! And I really use to dream about the stars! Lol.
Die_trane
2020-08-31 19:06:44 +0000 UTCTera is wearing tactical gloves with upside protection. They are pretty handy when it come to a dirty street fight but otherwise they are not as well suited for stealing or breaking in.
Michael Lohmeier
2020-08-31 17:54:04 +0000 UTCI like how the boy calls Tera a thief for taking his phone, but calls Joris a friend even though he tried to kidnap him
Aj
2020-08-31 17:08:58 +0000 UTCI actually think it's OK for Tera to not be kind yet towards the Boy's issues ... no major issue is solved by being delicate from my experience. It's good he calls it out for what it is in so few words ... a fear/trauma that started since childhood and is not yet solved. Yeah, just like the Boy is clearly calling Tera a thief to his face/mask and threatens to call the police ... there's no sugarcoating that.
Andy
2020-08-31 14:18:34 +0000 UTCMy thoughts exactly ... but I think we're hoping too much for a shower scene (crossing the apartment with "stinky raccoon" seems a bit too much) ... BUT I totally see the Boy lending Tera a shirt or something ... the one on him seems big enough to fit Tera.
Andy
2020-08-31 14:11:54 +0000 UTCGood, we got Tera on the bed, next step, we gotta do something about that mask! And CONTACT next time! Perhaps during a shower scene...
Aj
2020-08-31 13:41:30 +0000 UTCGlow in the dark stars ftw I had them too 🥰
Michelle King
2020-08-31 13:32:43 +0000 UTCI always wonder how the boy and Tera sound. Like, do you have a voice in mind for them?
Aj
2020-08-31 13:31:55 +0000 UTCYes yes yes! I look forward to this every month!
Aj
2020-08-31 13:28:01 +0000 UTCAwww! The Boy is so pretty confused and Tera with a bow is so sexy. And after that, on a bed, he's also so pretty!
Maj
2020-08-31 13:20:09 +0000 UTCYou are the best 🥰🥰🥰🥰 can't wait for the next pages, I really think that Tera will help the Boy with His fear of the dark Pd: I did have stars glued to my ceiling jajajaja
Blanca Elena
2020-08-31 13:08:19 +0000 UTCThis was nostalgic for me, as I totally had glow-in-the-dark star stickers up on the ceiling of my room in the house I grew up in. They stopped glowing over time, though, sad. anyways, I think the unobtrusive way Tera rummaged around and found the blatant evidence of Boy's PTSD was interesting; the first hint of one facing the inner problems of the other. I think the juxtaposition of the crime-filled life that Tera leads, and the airy, positive way Boy carries himself leaves a very high disparity. In other words, I can't yet imagine the Boy being thrown into Tera's world yet, though I feel that that might inevitably happen. I am definitely more excited about it than afraid, as I can't wait for them to know more about each other. I just noticed how highly they contrast when Tera had just been out burning someone while Boy had been doodling Team Rocket, and I think this is what makes Tera stick around. I absolutely love their dynamic and the writing. It's so interesting!
weirdgirljuliet
2020-08-31 13:04:15 +0000 UTCAwh noo !! Hahaha !! I saw the notification and started to read .. and burst out laughing! xD So cute !!!
Z-Pico
2020-08-31 13:03:19 +0000 UTCFlashback from when I was nine and I tried to glue that type of stars on my ceiling with scotch tape, but than they started to fall in the middle of the night and nine-year-old me was too afraid to look what was happening or why were little light thingys falling from the ceilinglol (⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄)
_damn_rius
2020-08-31 13:01:58 +0000 UTCAwh :3 At first he was more sad, but I thought he wouldn't show to much, he's a proud Boy -
Z-Pico
2020-08-31 12:43:45 +0000 UTCI know !!! I really hesitated to make Tera say that ! (That's also why in the park scene he doesn't say anything) It just to show he's not fully kind and caring with the boy yet !
Z-Pico
2020-08-31 12:39:19 +0000 UTComg confronting the boy with his fear ...... i love how you always sway from funny to complete sadness or drama T_T <3 can't wait for the next pages!! the fact that the boy has these stars on the ceiling tho... ;W; to notice the metaphor i think i need to rereread everything in one sitting... i actually love these things, but its hard to grasp on only seeing a few pages every month...so i will search properly for this when the next chapter is ourt. i gonna reread the old chapters again and see if i find something <3
Mym Phoenix McFly
2020-08-31 12:34:23 +0000 UTCi felt the pain on the boy's face when Tera said: "stars don't even look like that."
Watochello
2020-08-31 12:34:16 +0000 UTCHaha -
Z-Pico
2020-08-31 12:30:31 +0000 UTCTera if you make our boy cry...I swear...
Crowned Crow
2020-08-31 12:29:26 +0000 UTCPs: Did you notice that the Boy still doesn't know who Tera really is: he thinks he's just a thief lol
Z-Pico
2020-08-31 12:26:15 +0000 UTCI think someone was asking about their fingerprints last time. Here is the answer !
Z-Pico
2020-08-31 12:25:02 +0000 UTC
