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Birds Of A Feather, Chapter 2.17

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What I want to know: Is Aiko an OC? Is there anything notable about this 'perfect self', or is literally just "human(variant)"?

Gabriel

Unless these idiots are pawns sent to test Drich's defenses and capabilities, part of me fears this be an "Other Doctor Bob" scenario, with all the other small-name gangs like the Silver Faces turning this into a contest to see who can take down "Big Bird" first.

MontyTzeen

I feel like Aiko is going to be very pleased with her choice of Biosculpter if she’s watching this fight from the windows

Danielle

Should probably be “I have.” instead.

inkaral

Opening bit feels like it should be either "three MORE days of..." or list the total number of days (six? seven?) the rush was a thing. Also, when Aiko is asked "Have you made a decision?" she replies "I am" which doesn't quite fit.

Helen of Boy

GENERAL KENOBI

Diego

Not just that, it is also that they walked out right when an attack on their property would begin which implies VERY good threat detection

Kairuf

Mooooore!!! This is awesome.

Lape99

Absolutely beautiful work as always

Ant C

I have a feeling there's going to be some drastic re-evaluations of just how 'simple' a process dealing with a certain bird will be when the footage of this incident ends up shared around. Because there's 'can deal with the car and people in it if they catch it' and then there's 'grabbed and disabled someone who triggered speedware without any apparent foreknowledge they would be doing so and did so in a fashion that leaves it uncertain what sorts of speedware equivalent they might be running, if they have one'.

Pyro Hawk

Thanks for the chapter! "General Kenobi"

SolusEclipse

Thanks for the chapter!

SirDeP


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