Art by Bebecake: https://www.patreon.com/bebecakeart
Maybe I'm being too picky but her hair seems a bit off to me.
And here's an outline of what's possibly bugging me:
https://i.imgur.com/rfpyi4o.png
I thought her hair might bend too sharply there (pink circles), but I'm not really sure about it. I'm also wondering if it should maybe flow more gently, like the green line.
Anyway I would really appreciate feedback. Thanks!