Once again~

Both pieces are by Obakawaii:
http://www.furaffinity.net/user/obakawaii/

Please see the attachment as well. For some reason she sent me that as well, saying that it had less of her stylistic choices.

She seemed upset in the email, saying that she had to toss out the clean lines she's already done because so much is changing, and also because I didn't mention some of these things during the sketch phase. Honestly I thought the final sketch she had sent me looked pretty good, and then it all changed when she sent me the rainbow gradient version.

From now on I'm going to run the final sketch by you guys first so that this hopefully won't happen again. There was a lot of useful feedback in the comments on the previous post.

What do you think? Please look at both versions, choose which one you prefer, and let me know about anything you find wrong with it.

I've looked them over a bit and here's my feelings about it. Feel free to disagree with me. I will hold off emailing her until I can get several comments pinpointing all the problems.

Original version critiques:
Honestly I'm a little dismayed. Every time she does a new version it seems like  she  correct some things but also messes up others that didn't need changing. I liked her right hand before, so I don't understand why she changed it? Her left forearm looks too big now, not to mention that hand. And her instep on her right foot. Her face is definitely improved, but her mouth placement seems off. The feet, hands, and arms all bother me.

Alternative version (attached file) critiques:
Toes aside, I like the rear view in the alternative version, but the front view is depressing. Maybe I'm just weird but I feel like she started with the front view while mad at me and poured her feelings into it. The things I don't like about the front view aside from that are the expression on the face and the shape of her body (too hippy?).

If I say all this stuff to her I'm definitely going to have to try and
reword it. I feel like I'm trying to poke holes in a plastic baggy full
of water while trying NOT to spill the water.