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The Three Commandments - Page 20

Sorry this one got posted so late today! It had a ton of detail and it took forever x.x

ANYWAYS! Trouble in Paradise? Hmmmm...

The Three Commandments - Page 20

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On reflection, this also means that depending on how things play out the two could POTENTIALLY prove the third commandment unnecessary. But that'll have to depend on exactly how much worse things get for our Grand Warden pair.

Zhon Lord

Well, more and more it looks like Aida and Keleth can make this work out. Keleth is already proven to still be willing with other dragonesses (Caught in the Act), and if they stick to being scouts and outriders they'll have plenty of breathing room to work out their passions so they can hold off while at the Obsidian Keep. But if they prove their worth and rise through the ranks, there will be challenges to address. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Zhon Lord

Not to mention the weekly lore uploads put a LOT of additional importance to why the Grand Warden's dragon in particular is the one whose clutches are important here.

Zhon Lord

And therein lies our problem; With her decision to not address the situation of her dragon's libido (perhaps due to their much stronger than normal mental bond), they both are neglecting the FUTURE generations of dragon riders. The order will stagnate with their mutual decision to not have Lorath cover a properly fertile female, or Jenna choosing a proper suitor. (Methinks this is definitely more cautionary than the previous two tales, as it seems far less likely for a rider and dragon of their equal reputation to disregard the very order they're now in charge of.)


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