Trance Night Out - Editors Reactions

[Note: Remember as you read this, Sleepygirl, WROTE this story, after being hypnotized to live it out as a fantasy in real time while I had her hypnotized. She does not remember writing it, so she is commenting on her own writing and not realizing it. (Some exceptions apply as I have to occasionally add a paragraph here or there to extend out word count.) ]

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Story: Didn't exactly take a rocket scientist to see that he was trying to hypnotize her.

Sleepygirl: I mean sometimes people are oblivious...

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Story: The man took her hand and started massaging it while she was watching and her eyes began to flutter,

Sleepygirl: ok but that would probably drop me like a rock, too 

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Story: Kind of reminded me of you, actually

Sleepygirl: funny how that works

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Story: In hindsight, this club kind of reminds me of Spirals

Sleepygirl: shameless plug is shameless

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Story: She was taken by surprise, of course, and didn't struggle much so it was a quick chloroform.

Sleepygirl: sometimes a quick chloroform is nice too

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Story: I think Jesse was in an active competition against no one

Sleepygirl: ok that's actually a good one

[Hypnotist Note: Remember… Sleepygirl wrote this story, she just doesn’t remember she wrote it.]

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Story: I knew he was trying to hypnotize me, and even though I was trying to fight it it was still working on me, 

Sleepygirl: to no one's surprise

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Story: but were instead going to magnetically pull the most attractive and sexy women in the room up to the stage, and how those women were going to feel their breasts pulling them toward the stage from a tingling in their nipples, etc.

Sleepygirl: well there's an image

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Story: As it started we all got up and started dancing seductively while he moved in front of each girl and snapped his finger in front of their eyes, which froze them mid dance.

Sleepygirl: nice way to end up with a little statue collection

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Story:  I didn't want her to blow my cover or get herself in more trouble so I tested out the trigger I saw the guy use on Eve and snapped my fingers in front of her face. 

Sleepygirl: sure it wasn't that i really wanted her frozen again, of course not

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Story: So I don't know if that was a good plan in hindsight or not.

Sleepygirl: maybe not "good" but kind of hilarious and unintentionally sexy?

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