Sssslipping into the Jungle - Editing Banter
Added 2019-11-28 01:14:40 +0000 UTC
“Although he had already said he had the perfect scene in mind for Jennifer, and indeed he did, the issue he now faced was which scene she should act out for him first.”
Sg: (the editor) it can be so hard to narrow down your porn…
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“My name is Miss Bonya…Ivana Bonya”
Sg: well played :oP
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“The secret to your hypnotic powers. Give me that secret, Mr. Kaa…and I will give you pleasure beyond anything you have ever experienced.”
Sg: you write a damn good spy scene :oP
Me: Thank you.
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“Oh...yes...yes…yes. Mr. Kaa!”
Sg: Damn… talk about getting into your role.
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“Yes…” came the soft, almost whispered reply as she surrendered herself to the vampire she saw before her.
Sg: ok well that pushed buttons…
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In her mind, Jennifer felt a pair of fangs sinking deep into her neck as her body grew weaker and weaker. The vampire that was feeding off of her already had her mind under his spell, but now he was taking her body…and with it, her soul. She would belong to him. She would be his…bride. His slave. It was the last image that went through Jennifer’s mind before she found herself passing out into the snake’s coils. It was a kind of self induced hypnotic state brought about by the suggestions that Kaa had given her.
Sg: so she basically put herself back under because of how she interpreted the suggestions...interesting (far be it for me to question weird shit that happens when you're under)
Me: or the weird shit i come up with when I write =cP
Sg: i never question that anymore :oP
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Her body began swaying gently as her eyes rolled up into her head, the swirling colors of Kaa’s hypnotic gaze reappearing as a soft ‘ping’ echoed through the forest.
Sg: nice image :oP every time i read about the pinging noise, I keep imagining that I'm hearing it...but that's just probably my imagination being overactive
Authors note (SG may or may not have a suggestion / trigger involving a ping sound buried in her subconscious mind.)
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“Fine!” she said defiantly. “Do your worst!”
Sg: i'll take famous last words for 10,000 Alex…
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“Ssssleep for me now…”
SG: and here i am, trying not to let that get me...and failing…
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sounding almost like something that would come out of an angry turkey.
Sg: there's an image…
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“Freeze, Jennifer…”
SG: i promise that didn't make me freeze for a split second...really…
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She was stuck at a plateau of arousal...and frustration.
Sg: been there, done that :oP
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he said with a devious grin, knowing exactly what he was doing to her.
Sg: well that's button pushing as all hell…
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she was essentially programming herself at this point…and he liked that idea.
Sg: yeah honestly i do too :oP
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