The Girls of S.L.E.E.P. - N.C.U. - Part 5 Alternate Ending

Key: FD, MC, Hypno

Description: Trisha’s attempt to take over the girls of S.L.E.E.P. takes an unexpected turn. 

As Jackie, Cheyenne, and Carly gloated to one another about their hypnotic victories over the three girls who fancied themselves as hypnotists, Trisha began to move closer to the couch that they were seated on. “Now…” Trisha said as she strategically positioned herself directly in front of the three girls, in such a way that all three turned to look up at her as realization washed across their faces, just in time for Trisha to finish her sentence. “It’s my turn!”

“Scorpion! Scorpion!” Carly shouted out frantically as she looked up into Trisha’s predatory eyes. 

“Wait…what? There are no scorpions in New Chicago?” Trisha paused as she and the others looked at Carly in confusion. 

“No! Scorpion, like in the episode of Star Trek: Voyager, where they tell the story about the wolf giving the scorpion a ride across the river. Only to have the scorpion sting the wolf midstream, causing them both to drown. When the wolf asks why, the scorpion answers with “it’s my nature.”” She frantically looked from Jackie to Trisha and Cheyenne, then back again, as she finished. 

“I’ve seen the episode…” Trisha admitted, still confused by Carly’s seemingly random train of thought. 

“So have I.” Cheyenne chimed in, equally confused. “What does that have to do with anything that’s going on here?” 

“Seriously?” Carly asked, looking at both Cheyenne and Jackie as she pointed to Trisha. “The bisexual, nymphomaniac hypnotist…who just just had us hypnotize the three girls most likely to hypnotize her...steps up and says “my turn” and you don’t get whats about to happen?!” 

Realization washed over Jackie and Cheyenne’s faces as they looked up at Trisha, who smiled down at them. “What can I say…” Trisha started with a grin as she shrugged. “Scorpion.” 

The three girls looked at one another as the devious grin returned to Trisha’s face. “Now, why don’t you ladies just...look into my eyes. Deep…into my eyes…” she began. 

“Get her!” Cheyenne shouted as she leapt off the couch and tackled Trisha around the waist, pushing her back as hard as she could. 

“What the?!” Trisha’s eyes widened as Cheyenne grabbed her around the waist and pushed with everything she had. But before Trisha could react, Carly grabbed Trisha’s right arm and tried to wrestle it to her side. “Hey! I’m in charge here! This isn’t how this is supposed to go!” Trisha shouted while Jackie grabbed her left arm and very skillfully slid her own foot behind Trisha’s, causing the taller girl to tumble backwards to the floor with a thud. Fortunately for her Jackie was able to use her hand to cushion the back of Trisha’s head. After all, they were only trying to gain the upper hand, not actually hurt her. 

“Ooof!” Trisha exclaimed as she hit the ground. “What are you doing? Thanks for the catch, by the way.” she said to Jackie with a look of gratitude. After all, bonking your head on the ground hurts. 

“No problem!” Jackie said with a smile before her expression turned serious. “Pin her down!” she shouted as she used both arms to pin Trisha to the floor. The tiny sophomore had to kneel on one arm to prevent Trisha from throwing her off. 

Carly followed suit and pinned Trisha’s right arm to floor. Unlike Jackie, she didn’t need to kneel on Trisha’s arm since the two girls were roughly the same size and leverage would be more than enough to keep her arm down for now. Meanwhile, Cheyenne had managed to slide herself back and sit on Trisha’s thighs to hold them against the ground. 

Of course Trisha wasn’t going to give up so easily. She thrashed and jerked her body from side to side in an attempt to throw the three younger girls off of her, but any progress that she made was short lived. Each time one of the others were thrown off, another managed to adjust themselves enough to somehow keep her pinned to the floor. 

“We can’t hold her forever!” Jackie grunted while readjusting herself to put more leverage onto Trisha’s left arm. 

“What do we do?” asked Carly, who was equally struggling to hold her friend down. 

“Hypnotize her!” Cheyenne shouted as she slid her hands along Trisha’s leg. Despite the pleased look on Trisha’s face, it wasn’t so much of a caress as it was Cheyenne looking for something to give her leverage. 

“What?” Carly asked, panicked. “How!?” 

Despite Trisha’s moans and what sounded like a tongue roll in response to Cheyenne’s hand sliding over her leg, the tiny sophomore finally found what she was looking for.  “Here.” she shouted as she dug her hand into Trisha’s pocket and pulled out her pocket watch. The same one that had been used on Eve just hours ago. Without hesitation, she handed it to Carly. “Use this!” 

“Right!” Carly shouted as she shifted herself to keep Trisha’s arm pinned while her free hand dangled the watch over her eyes. Despite her struggles, it was clear that Trisha was reaching the point of physical exhaustion.

Trisha looked up at Carly with an odd expression, one that seemed to convey a mixture of fear, pride, excitement, and arousal. Carly paused, but brushed it off as she started to swing the watch back and forth in front of Trisha’s eyes. “Just relax Trisha…just relax. We have you pinned…you’re not going to get up. Just relax and allow your body to let go.”

Trisha slammed her eyes shut and tossed her head violently from side to side as she renewed her efforts to break free. “No!” she shouted determinedly “You won’t get me without a fight!” 

The three sophomores managed to hang on and kept the stronger girl pinned to the ground as Carly leaned in and began to whisper soothingly to Trisha. “You’ve already put up a fight…you’ve kept us completely on our toes…a lesser woman would have given up a long time ago, Trisha. You’ve won. You’ve accomplished everything you set out to do tonight. You have three girls hypnotized and helpless, and you have your officers for the sorority. Now…why don’t you let us help you relax…help you to let go.” As she spoke she managed to keep Trisha’s arm pinned to the floor with her body weight while the watch dangled above Trisha’s tightly closed eyes. While the rest of her body kept Trisha pinned down, Carly’s free hand moved to Trisha’s forehead and began to massage it gently.

Cheyenne quickly caught on to Carly’s plan and leaned forward to slide her hands along Trisha’s torso, massaging her chest and shoulders. She did, however, manage to avoid Trisha’s breasts in the process...that was a can of worms she didn’t want to open right now. 

Jackie continued to hold down Trisha’s other arm by kneeling on it, but was able to maneuver her hands to massage the upper part of Trisha’s pinned arm. 

Trisha did her best to resist, but her body was noticeably, and visibly, starting to relax. “No…” she said softly in a calm, almost passive, tone. “I’m not...done…yet…” she said as her eyes slowly opened and instantly locked onto the pocket watch that was swinging back and forth above her head. The pocket watch that she had forgotten was there. “Oh…shit…” she mumbled as her eyes began to follow the watch from side to side. 

Carly breathed a sigh of relief and kept the watch slowly swinging from side to side as she massaged Trisha’s head. “That’s it buddy, just relax…you’ve won…we’re all under your spell…all here to serve you. All here to make you feel good…in every way that you want. All you have to do is let go…and sink…into relaxation. We’ll take it from here. Ok?” Carly asked in a soothing, melodic voice. 

“I...won?” Trisha asked as the fight faded from her body. Her struggling finally came to a stop as the muscles in her face relaxed, while her glazed eyes struggled to focus on the watch that still swayed back and forth before her eyes. 

“You won, Trisha.” Carly said, still speaking in a relaxed and soothing voice. “Just sleep, Trisha…Sleep…and let us take care of you now. You can do that, can’t you?” 

“Sleep…” Trisha said as a small grin formed on her face. “That’s the name…of the sororittttttty….” her voice trailed off as her eyes fluttered closed. A deep sigh escaped her body as her head fell to the side and all her resistance faded completely. The only movement that came from her at all was the slow, rhythmic rise and fall of her chest. 

The three sophomores waited and stared at Trisha for what seemed like hours, making sure that she was really, and truly, hypnotized. Once they were completely sure, all three collapsed in exhaustion. Carly landed just above Trisha’s head on the ground, giggling over her second victory of the night. Jackie fell in the opposite direction as her head landed on Trisha’s left leg, leaving her panting in exhaustion. Cheyenne, on the other hand, went completely limp on top of Trisha’s hypnotized body.

Carly’s giggles only got louder as she watched Cheyenne’s head land squarely between Trisha’s breasts. “Oh fuck it. ” Cheyenne said, revealing her own exhaustion. “I don’t even care anymore.“ She took several slow, deep breaths before pulling her head up to look at Carly. “So...what do we do now?” she asked curiously. 

Jackie propped herself up against Trisha’s leg and smiled at the others. “Actually...I have an idea about that.” 

Fifteen minutes later…

Cheyenne, Carly, and Jackie each laid face down on one of the three couches in the commons area. All three girls had stripped their shirts off and left their bras undone as the four hypnotized girls massaged their backs. Only their vacant, glazed expressions revealed how deeply hypnotized Laura, Eve, Rayne and Trisha, still were. 

“Oh my god, this is perfect!” Cheyenne moaned as Laura squeezed and kneaded the muscles in her back. 

“I told you.” Jackie said smugly as Rayne reapplied some of the hand lotion that they had found in Laura’s purse to her back. It wasn’t massage oil, but it worked just as well in a pinch.

“I never doubted you for a second.” Carly said with a smile as Eve massaged her shoulders while Trisha’s thumbs pressed deeply into her lower back. 

“How come you get to have two of them giving you a massage?” Jackie asked in mock protest.

“Because she hypnotized two of them.” Cheyenne replied matter-of-factly as she turned her head to the side and sank deeper into the couch and her massage, letting a soft moan escape as Laura worked the tension out of her muscles. 

“What do we do with them when we’re done?” Carly asked, thinking ahead for the first time that evening. “I have a feeling they will be kinda pissed off about this...especially Trisha.”

“Easy.” Cheyenne replied as she turned her head to look in the direction of the other two couches. “When they’re done we tell them to forget the evening happened and send them home. Easy peasy!” 

“Well look at you getting all ‘evil hypnotist’ on us. Where did you come up with that idea?” Jackie asked with a laugh. 

“I watch movies.” she replied, turning her head away from her friends and her attention back to the massage. 

“Works for me.” Carly replied as she and Jackie followed suit, preparing to enjoy their own massages as long as they could.  

Two hours later....

Rayne slowly turned the key to her dorm room and opened the door. She was still quite dazed and confused, still somewhat hypnotized as the girls hadn’t really woke her up properly. She was so confused that she had forgotten she had a ‘meeting’ with Klaire that evening. She had forgotten that she was going to use her newfound persuasiveness to pry into her roommate’s mind and better understand how to control her. She had completely forgotten. 

Klaire hadn’t. 

Rayne was too out of it to notice that there was a blacklight on in the room, but as soon as she closed the door and turned around she was met face first with Klaire’s eyes. Her...glowing...eyes? Deep in the back of her mind Rayne knew that something didn’t seem right, but she was quickly overpowered as Klaire grabbed Rayne’s head and turned it until their eyes met. “Look into my eyes.” Klaire said forcefully. “Look deep…into my eyes. I know you’ve been reading my books. I know you think you have the upper hand…but as you look into my eyes now Rayne…you realize…that it was never you…who had control. It was never you that was in charge. It was me.” she said as she gently shook her roommate’s head in her hands “It was always…me!” she finished as she shook it gently again. 

Rayne was too far hypnotized to put up any kind of a fight. In fact, she didn’t even really realize that Klaire’s eyes were glowing. She just stared deeply into them like she was told, her own eyes slowly dilating as she fell back down into a trance she had never really left.  

Klaire didn’t even bother to hide her smug grin. She just pulled Rayne’s face closer to her own and, with one quick shove, she pushed her roommate’s head back and sent her body crashing to the bed at the same time that she uttered one word: “Sleep!” 

Rayne landed mostly on her left side as her face fell into the pillow. She didn’t have time to process what was happening, what had happened, before she ended up back in a deep hypnotic sleep. 

Klaire took a moment to smile down at her prey as she removed her UV reactant contact lenses. “I knew these things would come in handy one day.” she said as she looked down at Rayne’s sleeping form. “Dealing with a bitchy roommate wasn’t exactly what I had in mind, but whatever.” 

She took a moment to put the contact lenses away before and sat down on the bed next to Rayne, gently stroking her head. “Now, oh pain in my ass, we will discuss our arrangement here. Starting with your new chores.” 

The End! 

Seriously, these alternate endings took on a life of their own and became their own story…I didn’t intend for that to happen but I hope you enjoyed it! 

Featuring: Laura, Eve, Rayne, Trisha, Klaire, Carly, Cheyenne, and Jackie