The Girls of S.L.E.E.P. - N.C.U. Part 4 - Alternate Ending

Key: FD, MC, Hypno

Description: Another bad toss lands Jackie in the hypnotist’s seat against a very nervous Rayne. Fortunately, Trisha is there to lend a hand. 

Trisha took a deep breath to compose herself. “Alright.” she started with a smile, looking knowingly at Rayne and Jackie. “Who has number 3?” 

Rayne slowly held up her ticket. Even though she knew that there were only two girls left, and she was obviously one of them, she couldn’t calm her nerves. As she stood up she heard giggles coming from the two successful hypnotists, Carly and Cheyenne, while Trisha smiled and winked at her. She couldn’t help but glance at the hypnotized forms of Laura and Eve, two girls that were supposed to have won their tosses, as she passed them.  

Jackie, on the other hand, was a bit less…well…anything. “Alright, let's get this over with.” she said, letting out a sigh as she stood up and moved to the spot across from Rayne. 

“Heads, Jackie goes first. Tails, Rayne goes first. Are we ready?” Trisha asked the two girls with a practically giddy smile as she looked back and forth between them. 

Both girls nodded, one shaking with nervousness…while the other looked bored to tears. Rayne’s heart nearly skipped a beat as Trisha flipped the coin. “What if it lands on heads?” she thought. “What if I end up hypnotized instead of Jackie? What if I…I…oh god, why is this turning me on?” It was a surprising amount of thoughts to go through her head in the time it took for one coin flip. But finally the coin hit the ground, as both young women watched it bounce and spin as it finally come to rest on... 

Heads.

Rayne’s heart nearly jumped out of her chest. Trisha had said the entire thing was rigged. That the toss would always land in their favor…but none of them had landed the way they were supposed to! And now Laura and Eve were both hypnotized and she was next! 

Jackie’s reaction, as expected, was far less enthusiastic. “Well, shit.” she said matter of factly as she turned to look at the others. Carly and Cheyenne were sitting on the center couch with their two hypnotized subjects sitting on the floor next to them. “Anyone know how to do hypnosis?” 

Unfortunately for Jackie, Eve and Laura, the two girls who were both hypnotists, had already been hypnotized. The girls that had unexpectedly hypnotized them, Carly and Cheyenne, looked at one another and then to Jackie before shrugging in unison. They knew they had gotten lucky in hypnotizing the others and couldn’t offer that much help. 

Jackie turned to look at Rayne, who was looking at her with a raised eyebrow. “Don’t look at me!” she said, a hint of laughter in her otherwise annoyed tone. “I’m not helping you hypnotize me, are you crazy?” 

Jackie sighed and turned to Trisha with a very defeated, sad-puppy dog look in her eyes. Trisha, of course, melted immediately. She glanced back and forth between Rayne and Jackie a few times, torn between helping the girl whom she wanted in the position of power, and helping the pathetically cute one in front of her. “Oh fine!” Trisha finally relented as she leaned in and whispered into Jackie’s ear for several moments that, to Rayne, seemed excruciatingly long. 

Rayne watched the scene in front of her unfold, trying not to let the nervousness and excitement she was feeling show. Instead, she chose to focus on the anger and annoyance she was feeling towards Trisha at that moment. “How could she?!” she asked herself. “She was supposed to help me! Wait a second…” she thought as she tried to calm herself down. “Maybe she’s telling her to try something that she knows won’t work! She could do that, right?”

Just then she noticed a surprised expression cross Jackie’s face, almost like a light bulb had gone off in her head. She grinned at Rayne before turning to Trisha. “Do you think that will work?” 

“Nope, I’m fucked!” Rayne thought to herself. “Oh well…she’s not going to get me without a fight!” She steadied herself as if she were preparing for battle, albeit one of a more...hypnotic nature.

Trisha nodded to Jackie with a smile, both to answer her question and encourage her. But as Jackie looked back at Rayne, she couldn’t help but swallow nervously. “Alright…” she said, trying to steady her voice. “Here goes nothing.” 

Even as she stood there, watching and waiting as Jackie began her induction, Rayne felt a tremor go through her body. “I want you image in your mind, a cabin in the woods. I want you to let yourself see it, in all of its detail. The wood and stone that make up the outside, the hand crafted bricks that make up the chimney. Even the carefully crafted roof tiles, made out of kilned clay.” 

Jackie paused and watched Rayne for a moment. The younger redhead seemed to be focusing intently on Jackie, but her features had softened. She decided to continue. “Notice the stone path that leads up to the cabin. Every stone large and flat, laid into the ground with care. Take a moment to also notice the setting of the cabin. Surrounded by trees, tall, strong pine trees. The kind of trees that provide you safety, protection, and privacy all year round. Not only from the weather and the forest, but from the people of the world. A perfectly peaceful place to escape to. Nothing to bother you here. Surrounded by the sounds of the birds, and the pine trees rustling, and the faint trickle of a nearby creek. The perfect place to just relax. Isn’t that right Rayne?”

Rayne had been focusing intently on Jackie the entire time, and although she didn’t realize it yet, it was clear to the others that she was visibly relaxing. Both Trisha and Jackie had noticed how her shoulders had begun to sag, while the muscles in her face loosened and relaxed. The biggest clue, however, was her eyes. Without realizing it, Rayne’s eyes had started to drift closed. Not a lot, mind you, but just enough for the others to see that she was starting to relax, starting to drift away. Of course these were just the visual clues. The relaxed, almost passive, “Yes…” that escaped Rayne’s lips was just as big of an indicator.

Hearing the response slip out of her mouth was just enough to shake Rayne out of the light trance she had drifted into, but not enough to wake her up completely. “What…what did I say?” Rayne asked, looking at Trisha with a confused, almost lost, expression. 

“Shhh…it’s alright.” Jackie said as she smiled and stepped closer to Rayne. “Just let yourself relax in the cabin, relax in this very comfortable and pleasant cabin in the woods. Safe and relaxed…away from everything, and everyone else.” Jackie watched closely as Rayne’s awareness faded away as quickly as it had tried to return.

“That’s a girl…” Jackie continued. “Just let everything fade away…and allow yourself to walk into the cabin. Feel the heavy, sturdy door open as you push against it…and then close behind you, giving you a feeling of safety, a feeling of comfort. Let yourself take a moment and examine the room around you…you can hear the fire burning, the heat drifting through the room. Slowly and easily. You can just let yourself find a comfortable spot…a chair…big and soft, comfy by the fire, or maybe even in a bed in the cabin, and just curl up by the fire. And feel its warmth washing over you now…you can feel that, can’t you Rayne?”

"Uh huh…” came the response from the clearly hypnotized Rayne. Her mouth had long ago fallen open and the weight of her limp arms was slowly causing her to lean forward little by little, as she stared ahead at Jackie with blank, glassy eyes. 

Trisha leaned over to Jackie and whispered into the novice hypnotist’s ear. “Finish her…” she said with a smile, channeling her inner gamer.         

The thought made Jackie shiver as she looked over her hypnotized victim. “Just allow yourself to feel the warmth of the fire along your skin. To smell the scent of the wood burning, and the soft gentle crackling of the logs. Let the comfortable chair beneath your body, support you in all the ways you like. The perfect place to relax and let go. The perfect place for you to just let everything simply fade away as you gently drift, down…down…down…into a nice…relaxing…sleep…now Rayne.”

Rayne’s eyes had long since lost their focus, but as Jackie continued her description they continued to slowly flutter closed. Finally, conveniently around the time Jackie told her to sleep, they finally slipped shut. The young freshman let out a soft sigh as her head fell to her chest…and then her entire body tilted and began to fall forward. 

Jackie was so proud of herself until she realized that Rayne was falling...straight at her. Her knees were locked like a stiff board as she headed face first for the taller sophomore. So Jackie did the only logical thing she could do…she screamed and backed up as quickly as she could to get out of the way. 

Fortunately for Rayne’s face, Trisha was expecting this and managed to catch the hypnotized redhead before she completed her arc to the floor…and then, later, the hospital. “Easy Rayne…I’ve got you…able to stand up nice and sturdy, nice and strong now.” Trisha said in a soothing, almost motherly tone. 

Rayne took a moment to adjust herself so that she was standing upright, even though her arms and head remained completely limp. Once Trisha was satisfied that Rayne wasn’t going to take another nose dive towards the floor, she turned to Jackie with a smile. “Well it looks like we have our last officer! Congratulations!” 

Jackie actually seemed quite pleased with herself as the others gave her a round of applause. “Thank you…” she said with a shy smile. “And I even know exactly what I want to do with her!” 

Trisha smiled at Jackie and nodded for her to continue as the newly minted hypnotist walked up to Rayne and began to whisper suggestions into her ear. A few moments later, Jackie was seated happily on the couch next to Carly and Cheyenne, the three of them laughing and congratulating one another on hypnotizing their first subjects. Behind the couch stood Rayne, staring blankly ahead as she massaged Jackie’s shoulders, utilizing her strong frame to dig out the knots and tension. 

As the girls continued to talk Trisha took in the scene before her. Literally nothing had gone the way she had planned. The three girls that should have been installed as officers were all completely hypnotized. While the three victims that had been hand selected to be indoctrinated into the sorority were awake and celebrating successfully hypnotizing the girls who were supposed to be in their places. Although none of them knew that was the plan in the first place. 

So she would simply have to come up with a new plan. After all, the three lovely hypnotists that she had here could easily take the place of the original three. And there was something very…sexy about seeing Eve, Laura, and Rayne all hypnotized and helpless. The reversal of power was really pushing her buttons. Plan B it was!

As the girls continued to talk, Trisha began to move closer to the couch that they were seated on. “Now…” Trisha said as she strategically positioned herself directly in front of the three girls, in such a way that all three turned to look up at her as realization washed across their faces, just in time for Trisha to finish her sentence. “It’s my turn!”

To be continued…

Featuring: Trisha, Laura, Cheyenne, Eve, Carly, Rayne and Jackie