The Girls of S.L.E.E.P. - N.C.U. - Part 2 Alternate Ending

Description: what would have happened if the coin toss between Carly and Eve had gone in Carly’s favor...

Several of the other girls laughed while Trisha rolled her eyes. “Alright,” she said as she pulled a coin from her pocket, “heads and Eve goes first. Tails, Carly.” She flipped the coin and let it fall to the ground, spinning a few times before it finally landed on...

Tails.

“Sweet!” shouted Carly with more excitement than anyone had expected. “But...what do I actually do?” she said in confusion as she looked around the room. “I’ve never hypnotized anyone before…in my life. I’ve never seen it done for real other than the afternoon I spent with Trisha, Laura, and Rayne…and, well, I didn’t really understand much of what they were doing.” 

“Oh come on.” Cheyenne started with a grin. “Just swing a pocket watch or something in front of her eyes, haven't you ever seen a movie?” she said as she laughed at the thought. 

“That’s...not a bad idea, actually.” Laura said, looking from Cheyenne to Carly. 

“Wait, what?” Cheyenne asked, confused that her joke was being taken seriously. 

“Anyone have a pocket watch? I left mine in my other pants!” Carly said as she pulled the pockets out of her jeans. 

The rest of the girls laughed, assuming no one would actually have a pocket watch with them. Trisha, on the other hand, merely smiled and handed one to Carly as the others looked on, dumbfounded. “Here you go.” 

Carly stared at the pocket watch in her hand, clearly confused. “Why do you have this?” she asked. 

Trisha narrowed her eyes in a look of disbelief as she waved her hand around the room. “Hypnosis…sorority.” she replied slowly and sarcastically. 

“Oh, right!” Carly said as Trisha rolled her eyes. Carly held the watch in her hand and examined it as she took a deep breath. She’d never done this before, but she had seen Saturday morning cartoons, so all she could do was draw from that and see what happened. She raised the watch up in front of Eve’s eyes and began to swing it slowly from side to side. “Watch this watch of gold…and soon you will do…as you are told.” she said in her attempt at a stereotypical villainous voice.

The other girls, including Eve, all got a good laugh at the cartoon reference. But Eve noticed, quite unexpectedly, that she was having a hard time taking her eyes off of the watch. That she couldn’t pull herself away from just watching it swing back and forth, back and forth, in front of her.  

It was so obvious that even Carly noticed it was happening. “You ok there, honey?” she asked with a look of genuine concern…but not enough awareness to actually stop the watch from swinging from side to side in front of Eve. 

“Yea...Yeah…I think so…”  Eve said, almost sounding like she was struggling to answer. “It’s just…so hard to… look…look…awa…” Eve’s thought process trailed off as she watched the pocket watch swing from side to side in front of her. Little by little her arms and shoulders began to sink. Her face seemed to be relaxing more slowly than the rest of her…but once the muscles in her jaw relaxed and her mouth fell open it was pretty clear that she was equally relaxed across the whole of her body. 

The rest of the girls could only stare in awe. But especially Carly, who was completely dumbfounded about what to do next. Fortunately for her, Trisha leaned in and began to whisper some...ideas into her ear. Carly listened and gave Trisha a curious look, only to receive a reassuring nod from Trisha as she urged her to continue. 

Carly looked at Eve and took a deep, slow breath. “You can feel your eyes getting heavier and heavier…it’s ok to let them close…just let your eyes sink down…deeper and deeper…into sleep.” Carly repeated what Trisha had whispered as best as she could remember, and it was not in vain.

Eve’s eyes fluttered and started to cross in an effort to keep the watch in her line of sight, only to finally lose track of it for a split second. But that split second was more than enough for her mind to simply shut down, as her eyes slammed shut and her head fell to her chest. She wobbled for a moment and was about to fall but Trisha steadied her with a hand and whispered “able to stand up straight…deeply hypnotized and relaxed.” She looked over to Carly with a pleased smile. “Nice job. You get to be an officer, and that will make a hell of a story in your article.” 

“Sweet!” Carly shouted. “Although given that I did this by complete dumb luck, I think we should probably let me pass on that.” She looked over at Eve. “What do we do with her?” 

Trisha just smiled. “Well, you hypnotized her…what do you want to do with her?” 

Carly’s attention was more than piqued as she looked at Trisha. “Anything?” she asked excitedly as Trisha nodded her head in response. “Hahaha! You’re mine!” she laughed evilly as she quickly made her way over to the much taller girl. “Ummm…kneel down!” she commanded. 

Much to Carly’s delight, and everyone else's surprise, Eve immediately sank to her knees. Her head was still completely limp against her chest but the rest of her folded neatly into a very elegant kneel. “Perfect…now, look at me!” Carly commanded again. Eve’s head slowly rose to look at Carly, but her eyes were barely open. “For the rest of the night, you are my slave…understand?” she asked nervously. 

Everyone watched Eve with baited breath, curious  as to how the older girl would respond. After a moment of silence, she whispered the response of “Yes mistress.” Much to everyone, including Trisha’s, surprise.

Carly jumped up and down, giggling and clapping like a small child before running back to the chair she had originally been seated on. Instead of sitting down on it, she perched herself on the arm as if it were a throne. “Come to me, my slave!” she commanded. 

“Yes mistress.” was Eve’s almost seductive reply as she slowly crawled to Carly’s feet. Somehow, she managed to do so in a way that made her butt wiggle seductively as she crawled. And she kept her head back so that her chest was more than a little on display. Finally, she arrived at Carly’s feet and returned to her kneeling position. This time her eyes were fully open and she stared adoringly at Carly. 

Carly smiled and gently placed a hand on Eve’s head, lowering it to gently rest on Carly’s lap. “I think I could get into this whole hypnosis thing.” she said, blushing as she finally realized what she had just done. 

As the laughter from the rest of the girls faded, Trisha smiled and stepped back into the center of the group. “So, who has number 2?”

To be continued...