Miko's Lament
Added 2024-08-25 19:55:51 +0000 UTC
Comments
It was beautiful π So sad and haunting, but so hopeful
KnightRider007
2024-08-26 22:59:50 +0000 UTCI am aware. I'm saying it doesn't scan well -as in, the line is sung a bit awkwardly
KnightRider007
2024-08-26 17:41:16 +0000 UTCYeah, maybe it went a little too hard on the Koto jam, but I'm glad you liked it.
Andrew Hunter
2024-08-26 15:53:32 +0000 UTCThank you!
Andrew Hunter
2024-08-26 15:51:18 +0000 UTCThe "cold and hard" master is the Devourer, Draxxorel, the god Tuul worshipped. "A servant of another god, a master cold and hard (or maybe "cold at heart"), I pray that you will take him in and heal his many scars." She's praying for her goddess to take him in instead. I hope she listens; Tuul deserves a more peaceful and pleasant rest than Draxxorel would grant him.
Varyon
2024-08-26 10:44:29 +0000 UTCBeautiful.
lChronosl
2024-08-25 23:29:42 +0000 UTCA full minute of instrumental may be a bit much (I got the mistaken impression that it was entirely instrumental) Some of the lines donβt scan very well, eg βa master cold and hardβ That said, Iβm now crying on the train to work π
KnightRider007
2024-08-25 20:23:28 +0000 UTC
