Possible Chapter 4 Wrap-up?
Added 2016-11-08 19:20:35 +0000 UTCHey guys, quick question. I have a couple more pages in mind for chapter 4, however I don't feel the ending I have planned is that strong. So, I could easily mesh it into chapter 5. I think the final panel of the last page I just submitted would make for a good page-turner for the next chapter. What do you guys think? I don't want it to seem forced to end the chapter here, but I also think it's better than what I have planned.
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You are making a story, and it is up to you how you forge it. If you think one thing is better, instead of the alternative, go with it. =) Also, yes. The last page you posted works very well as a page turner. =)
Empo
2016-11-08 22:55:41 +0000 UTC