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Possible Chapter 4 Wrap-up?

Hey guys, quick question.  I have a couple more pages in mind for chapter 4, however I don't feel the ending I have planned is that strong.  So, I could easily mesh it into chapter 5.  I think the final panel of the last page I just submitted would make for a good page-turner for the next chapter.  What do you guys think?  I don't want it to seem forced to end the chapter here, but I also think it's better than what I have planned.

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You are making a story, and it is up to you how you forge it. If you think one thing is better, instead of the alternative, go with it. =) Also, yes. The last page you posted works very well as a page turner. =)

Empo

Sounds like a good plan!


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