Innocent Devil’s Harem Ch. 173
Added 2024-11-10 20:51:14 +0000 UTCNovember 10, 2024
NOTE: I still plan on having another poll soon (maybe two polls). It's just been a really busy week.
I also plan on having another chapter of Combat Healer soon as well. Ideally, I would like to get back to my previous schedule of switching back and forth between the two stories, week to week.
Hope you enjoy!
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FEEDBACK: Thoughts?
Thoughts about this overall development?
Are you guys disliking Raegan, or is she just neutral? Or otherwise, is she just not as liked as much as some of the others? (I just want to make sure her low ranking isn't because of true 'dislike,' as opposed to her just being a new character who isn't like as much as some of the others.)
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Comments
the ambivalent nature of Raegan was a bit annoying, but other than that I have no issues.Reagan noow appears to be one of Kai's ladies and reading some of the comments seems like Alicia and Jessica may be joined to the harem soon one because of necessity the other to help Jessica if she is truly ill.
dfontana59
2025-01-26 20:33:01 +0000 UTCI think I like the way this is unfolding, at least in terms of Ian continuing to encounter challenges that he can’t easily overcome socially/legally/etc, but what I’m wondering is if he’s ever going to presented with another physical threat. I really liked the werewolf attack on the mansion and the way everyone had to rally together to defend, but I’m struggling to visualize what another challenge like that might look like. Ian decapitated the vampire instantly, and so many of the girls are so strong now too that I can’t really see anyone attacking the group and not getting instantly obliterated. Although I’d like to be proven wrong. Kaiser, if you read these, is there any chance of more combat conflict anytime soon? Or should we only expect intrigue, sabotage and legal conflict?
Fake Fake
2025-01-22 09:37:51 +0000 UTCMy only issue with Reagan is the fact she came from nowhere, she's all over the place and already she seems to have been made way more important than a lot of others, I don't mind her being a concubine but not a wife, she should be background noise at best, he did what he set out to and saved her, but she sure as shit shouldn't be more important than Nicole and definitely not more important that Rachael, someone he built for himself, as she seems to have faded to being unimportant in his life, hell she even feels that way.. remember Reagan is just a sugar baby and that's what she should stay, kind of like Tracey however he just pays for it instead in my opinion. But now I want to know what Roland is hiding, with the last name. I'm fine with Kelsey but she's always going to kind of be a background character until her abilities are needed to help calm and collect Kai. I don't mind Jessica being added however I don't think she should be a wife, however that could change eventually, everything could, he could just date a different woman almost nightly to keep them all fresh in perspective.
Allen Ferriola
2025-01-15 14:02:38 +0000 UTCI'm really not a huge fan of Reagan. The way she was brought in, and her actions seem to conflict with everything else we know about Kai. She makes him look less real and wholesome.
HapiCpl
2024-12-24 22:27:33 +0000 UTCPlus Rowland could be up to something. Kai hasn't seen him in person since he gave him his blood.
J Bone
2024-11-12 01:42:05 +0000 UTCMaybe. But his dad had many tricks up his sleeves. I bet he will return with a vengeance.
J Bone
2024-11-11 23:31:44 +0000 UTCIts sorta getting out of hand a bit, the number of women or rather their roles in this story. Who kai was, what he was discovering all fit fine for me up until he started dealing with his half brother. At that point the mental picture in my head started to fragment and things started to get out of focus. Also, up until now the pecking order and the order of who meant what to kai was reasonably clear, the two succubi and gwen past life, serenity, gabriella and the classmate and natalie, all clear. Gabrielle mom was a bit much but OK, and michelle was just hot. After kai "deals" with his father and sides with his half brother is when things just become confusing I'm still not sure why that woman in Jacobs house had to be defused like a living time bomb or how she fits into all this, who they are, why Kai even had to "design" them and I'm seriously tuning out the tail thing. As ever, this is just an OPINION. Nothing more and easily ignored. With the introduction of kelsey, it sort of feels like she was just parachuted in, given a quite important role and that's it....... she just feels flat. Reagen is a character I feel ambivalent about at best.
Rhys
2024-11-11 22:45:27 +0000 UTCDude, even if Absalom teleported successfully, I think homeboy is fucking toast. Literally. I don't think there is any way in Heaven, Earth, or Hell that he could survive the most powerful spell cast by potentially the most powerful Being in the entire world. I'm just not seeing it
Jonathan Depenau
2024-11-11 20:53:43 +0000 UTCI agree. Jessica could be terminally ill somehow. Very good thought, Archer. That feels right
Jonathan Depenau
2024-11-11 20:46:17 +0000 UTCTrey's father makes more since to be behind the set-up against Kai. He would have supernatural connections from Roland. Kai should have Nick come long to watch over Alicia. Jessica should be read in and changed. I have a feeling Jessica has a terminal illness, which Kai can smell as rancid. Hopefully, she doesn't have a tail issue like Serenity. Having three dictectives in the police especialy like Nick, who deals with special cases, and Jessica being close to Chief is good. Reagan has potential, and some of the newest harem members it's just seem to be more focused on others like Natalie.
The Archer
2024-11-11 14:23:56 +0000 UTCFor me the ambivalence of her nature is just very hard to like, as I can't really relate to that. I also feel like you intentionally wrote her in a way that is hard to like in the beginning and are slowly making her grow now. Her origin is interesting, but the whole ambivalence thing seems like a huge hassle and remembers me of trying to take care of a little sibling or something like that.
xilefs
2024-11-11 12:53:39 +0000 UTCFor one I’m intrigued on how this will play out.
Pedro Comenda
2024-11-11 09:42:44 +0000 UTCMay not even be an incubus, could be another supernatural creature, there are a few that utilize compulsion, perhaps a fae or djinn could be responsible. Maybe that prince vamp has decide to take a vacation and visit or has been there for years without anyone noticing. Just theorizing possibilities and can be taken as a grain of salt.
Pedro Comenda
2024-11-11 09:42:04 +0000 UTCI'm honestly neutral when it comes to Raegan, I think she is currently for me a concubine character rather than a wife. I see her as being similar to Claire tbh. Not one of Kai's most important women but still part of the harem.
Carl
2024-11-11 08:20:34 +0000 UTCI have the same sentiment as most of the other responders, nothing against Raegan, just too new to crack my top 5. Not sure she'd make my favorite tip 10 at this point.
CausticWraith
2024-11-11 06:57:56 +0000 UTCYeah thats a fair point, for me personally i still believe its perhaps not in her character to be THAT submissive and she might be better in sort of a mentor type of role, teaching raegan how to be dominant/assertive rather than being a sex pet to raegan; but we'll see what happens.
Carl
2024-11-11 06:04:13 +0000 UTCI chose the original 5 - I know them their relationship to Kai. Reagan has ‘literally’ only been here less than a day. Getting juicy with Jamal and others. I would like to see Kai work with the ‘cops in the know’ and Roland to track down and punish the baddies. The poor fkr still hasn’t finished school.
Rupert Purcat
2024-11-11 05:14:06 +0000 UTCShe could still be dominant to some of the other girls, only submissive to Kai and Raegan.
RadAsha Nightstrider
2024-11-11 04:30:12 +0000 UTCthats interesting cause i feel like the sex pet thing doesnt fit rebeccas character and i prefer her being one of his few dominant women whos confident and assertive; like her aura suggests.
Carl
2024-11-11 04:08:45 +0000 UTCI mean the adopted sister.
David
2024-11-11 03:28:00 +0000 UTCAnd Kai is acting like he forgot his dad is probably still live. He's probably trying to set him up. Then try to come at him again when he's healed up.
J Bone
2024-11-11 03:25:34 +0000 UTCI think Raegan could be a great addition. But I truly don't want more people in the Harem. Forming stronger connections with the current women would be appreciated.
J Bone
2024-11-11 03:24:42 +0000 UTCHe already gave her his blood..
J Bone
2024-11-11 03:18:26 +0000 UTCI appreciate what you're saying but it wouldn't work out like that, essentially you would do every pairing possible which eventually lead to a clear 1st, 2nd, 3rd etc. :)
Moi465
2024-11-11 02:51:29 +0000 UTCNot sure that would work in this instance. Supposing two popular characters came up against each other.. like Serenity vs Gabriella. both I expect easily top five most liked, and then you get another pairing say... say Tracey vs Claire. I do appreciate that there would be further rounds, but it would eliminate some of the popular ones while letting the not as popular ones pass through leading to an inaccurate result
Kimiko Hawke
2024-11-11 02:35:33 +0000 UTCI like Raegan so far. She just hasn't had a chance to shine yet. I do like her relationship with Rebecca and Kai.
RadAsha Nightstrider
2024-11-11 01:50:30 +0000 UTCI don’t really like her, but just turn her already and show Nick. She needs it, he needs the affirmation that Kai is good, and it will move things along.
David
2024-11-10 22:03:58 +0000 UTCOne poll at a time and keep track of the winners and losers manually on paper, it'll be kinda painful though. You could do two polls at a time; a who do you like better AB test, and a who do you like the least AB test. The aforementioned method will half the time it'll take at least, even though it adds more complexity for you.
Moi465
2024-11-10 21:39:30 +0000 UTCIt’s probably not that Reagan is universally disliked but she still hasn’t done anything truly noteworthy to be seen as part of the group. She’s basically Natalie when she was first introduced, someone in trouble but unwilling and uncooperative to receive help. Kinda hard to like someone when they’re kicking and screaming while you’re trying to save them from themselves
Raul Salazar
2024-11-10 21:32:04 +0000 UTCOkay, tomorrow I am going to do a poll to pick your '2nd Top 5' or basically who fits in your 6-10 list.
Author Kaizer Wolf
2024-11-10 21:26:43 +0000 UTCOkay, tomorrow I am going to do a poll to pick your '2nd Top 5' or basically who fits in your 6-10 list.
Author Kaizer Wolf
2024-11-10 21:26:34 +0000 UTCMy next votes would have been Claire and Reagan. Agree that Reagan has potential. Thanks for the story!
Tyron Stellmach
2024-11-10 21:23:04 +0000 UTCI like Reagan, I think there's potential there
Jonathan Depenau
2024-11-10 21:15:55 +0000 UTCThat is a good idea, but I have no idea how I'd implement that. Patreon's polling system isn't that advanced.
Author Kaizer Wolf
2024-11-10 21:08:59 +0000 UTCI think your poll issue is because you have too many options. You'll be better with AB testing, just picking two characters at a time and asking which you like better.
Moi465
2024-11-10 21:01:43 +0000 UTC
