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Combat Healer Ch. 64

September 15, 2024

NOTE: Posting a bit early. Hope you guys enjoy. This chapter actually took a really long time to write.

  

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FEEDBACK: Thoughts?

This chapter actually took a really long time to write, even though it's not an overly long chapter. Hopefully you guys liked it.

1. Thoughts about the Alyssa/Sylvia scene? 

2. Thoughts about what happened, and how Eliza handled it? 

3. What did you think of the chapter ending? 

 

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Comments

Yes, I agree as a busty female she would normally have issues wielding a great longbow. That is who the Amazons of Greek mythology burned off one of their breasts afterall. I was thinking Val would be unlocking a new skill, like telekinesis so she wouldn't be forced to physically wield it. Or even perhaps the sisters are ready to wield it now and they weren't ready for it before?

Christopher Miller

Ok now I'm itching to see this double berserk badassery unfold AND I'm really hoping that he managed to kill them before they kill to many (semi) important nobles BUT ALSO will he and wren be revealed and could he mass cast a curse onto just the eyes? So many questions and not enough chapters to read I'm very excited for the next drop

ReadingRed

Regarding the bow (and Val), it is because a TON of people (all elves) have tried to use the bow, and even those who were very strong couldn't use it. If you remove the idea that 'Val is a main character' and if she is instead just 'another person' in their lives, even if she is a somewhat important person, then it makes sense that they wouldn't 'assume' someone like Val could use it. Also, because Val is very busty, she would have a difficult time using it, even if she was physical capable of doing so.

Author Kaizer Wolf

Love this comment.

Author Kaizer Wolf

Yeah, not having illumination already there is kind of the point (to 'not make it easy' for would-be thieves). Your other comments helped me finetune the direction I was taking this.

Author Kaizer Wolf

Every time a new chapter comes out, it reinforces how much I love this series! I'm surprised that Sylvia didn't think about maybe Val trying to bow, or Eliza, tbh, if it was that big of a deal for a while. Regarding the main scene, I would have thought Eliza would have taken the discussion somewhere less public, both for safety reasons but more for privacy from hundreds of ears.

Itsasecret

3) The ending feels like a hail Mary by the eldritches. Their long term plans have been revealed and compromised. The threat they now pose is open for all to see. After a gambit to secure their northern flank so they can consolidate among the humans is rebuffed, they dump what appears to be left of their forces to assassinate Eliza and the nobles to terrify the elves into submission. All because they fear they are running out of time and resources to eliminate a threat that has now been foreshadowed again.

Christopher Miller

2) I think Eliza was the perfect leader in this situation. She didn't take the easy, popular decision. She made the best possible choice for her people. Yes, there might be some regrettable death and suffering by committing to finishing this war they didn't start, but it will save far more lives in the long run and the elves will remain a free people.

Christopher Miller

#1) It was nice to see Alyssa again, I was beginning to worry she had been indefinitely left on the back burner. Does another shackle showing up indicate that another princess could be resurrected? Or perhaps given to another of his women? Is EVERYONE going to end up with a legendary artifact? With the Obsidian Bow I currently see 3 (or maybe 2) candidates. Could the Rootkin sisters working as a team together wield it? Or perhaps everyone's favorite essence archer?

Christopher Miller

I described her in the chapter. She's the dark elf songstress. She first showed up in Ch 14, and then again when Eliza and crew left the Dungeon and ended up in the Atacama Valley (this was right before Eliza found out there was a challenge for the throne underway). She has the Eavesdrop skill. I mentioned most of that in this chapter.

Author Kaizer Wolf

Damn this is heating up. Sorry to ask but who is Alyssa again? It's been awhile since we had a chapter.

J Bone

Holy shit, like my heart is in my throat on this. This chapter ends at a point that could go so many directions it just like fucking boggles my little mind. Like seriously, Allister is on the very precipice of fully revealing himself and Wren to the entire royal court. Or maybe not. But FUCK, DUDE! I need to see this twin Berserker rage destruction clusterfuck happen! Like, Badly! Well done, man

Jonathan Depenau

The elf scene was fine and pretty cool though I had partially forgotten the situation they had been in prior to this chapter. Eliza acted exactly how she should've. The end was pretty good, this would be an amazing anime but picking the perfect graphic style would be a huge challenge.

Moi465

1 - Having been in man made enclosures and caves with no natural sources of light, I can say it is a darkness beyond what you have ever seen in the open. But I wonder why they would not have any artificial illumination in place. On the hopes a would-be thief didn't bring their own light? Perhaps some light-triggered trap or magic? 2 - I can only assume the plan from the start wasn't hinging on even a hope of conning their way in but seeing no downside to trying while the set their trap. The Queen's response was logical but perhaps things progressed too quickly to suspect the farcical ploy was just a throwaway pitch to cover an ambush. It seems reasonable both sides were pushed into a rapidly evolving situation by the revealing of their presence. 3 - The ambush itself helps the scene make sense. Leading up, I couldn't see how the eye expected this to play out, solo. Whatever happened to the Queen in check, it would mobilize the nation and the nation isn't just one ruler. But an ambush to try slaughter as much of the leadership (effective and otherwise) as a paralytic does make sense. Now I can only hope the next update is soon so we can see how it plays out.

Silent Count


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