Innocent Devil’s Harem Ch. 159
Added 2024-07-07 23:30:00 +0000 UTCJuly 7, 2024
NOTE: I kind of edited this in a hurry, so there might be a few mistakes here and there. Let me know if you find anything. Hope you enjoy!
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Any issues with this chapter? Anything you think needs elaborated on? (I kind of had them cover a lot of things pretty quickly, but hopefully it felt like a normal organic conversation? A lot of 'normal' conversations hop around a lot.)
Starting with the next chapter, things should start getting pretty interesting.
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Comments
Was a great chapter as always, I hope Rachael doesn't end up too much on the back burner, tho I'm wondering why he didn't mention that Kelsey wasn't born alone? Also in my opinion Nicole requires his blood, I think in order to be apart of his life and close to him should require his blood not only does it make them better, the best and strongest versions of themselves, he seems to be able to learn some of those skills once bonded, but also it keeps close secrets from getting out from being compelled. But she's dedicated herself to him before she even met him, that alone deserves his blood.
Allen Ferriola
2025-01-13 19:20:59 +0000 UTCI will say I am very disappointed by the start of this chapter! We've been waiting for it for a while now for it to not even happen. He was supposed to breed Rachael, instead he gives it to Avry and Michelle, Rachael begs him for it yet again at his house, he makes her wait, then the poor girl doesn't even actually get any real penetration. I didn't realize you were going to turn it all into a big game with those 2, I thought they both wanted her pregnant more than anything in the world, then he fails to even remotely try, hell he could have pulled out of Laura right at the end and at least stuck it in enough to finish in her..... Man what happened to not stopping screwing her until he was 100% sure she was pregnant.... Anyways there's my rant, back to reading.
Allen Ferriola
2025-01-13 17:31:13 +0000 UTCShe’d be a good bodyguard.
Alice Duffield
2024-07-14 18:04:13 +0000 UTCSorry for the late comment, I was under the weather for much of the week and playing catch up at work for the rest. I really like where this is going with Nicole, Rachel and Kelsey all being members of a long-lost family meeting up for the first time.
Christopher Miller
2024-07-14 15:00:31 +0000 UTCI can't help but wonder if interesting things may happen when all three af Kai's (including him) experiments meet up together....good chapter, looking forward to all the various meetings in the next.....
Jonathan Depenau
2024-07-12 13:49:12 +0000 UTCThis isn’t a threat. It’s a promise. I love this story and want to see it continue and grow but I hate authors that kill off loved characters just to drive the story somewhere
Salsa and Chips
2024-07-09 07:01:37 +0000 UTCIf you kill off any of the girls, I’ll unsub and delete Patreon permanently
Salsa and Chips
2024-07-09 07:00:45 +0000 UTCI am starting to think Raegan his the third experiment.
The Archer
2024-07-08 18:57:12 +0000 UTCI hadn't read that far yet, so you did.
Moi465
2024-07-08 12:54:42 +0000 UTCEspecially considering she used to be a werewolf before her transformation into hellhound.
Pedro Comenda
2024-07-08 08:47:41 +0000 UTCNatalie has become his Luna. It’s the theory that makes sense in supernatural shifter culture.
Pedro Comenda
2024-07-08 08:46:42 +0000 UTCWhich character did you forget?
Author Kaizer Wolf
2024-07-08 06:57:13 +0000 UTCIs this better? ...to check my message from Kelsey, recalling that I had previously thanked her...
Author Kaizer Wolf
2024-07-08 06:55:29 +0000 UTC"Kelsey, knowing I'd", it's formatted weird.
Moi465
2024-07-08 05:55:14 +0000 UTCThis was the first chapter where I had to re read a name a couple of times to remember who she was. Going to have to start writing them down!! Haha really enjoying the story’s direction
David Russo
2024-07-08 05:34:29 +0000 UTCThe situation with Natalie could possibly drive a wedge with Serenity, Gabriella and Avery feeling left out.
The Archer
2024-07-08 01:29:13 +0000 UTCActually, maybe I should change it to 'second time' and then just leave the clarification that it was more than with Claire.
Author Kaizer Wolf
2024-07-08 01:14:52 +0000 UTCI actually bring that up a handful of paragraphs past that point: "The fullest I’d ever stuffed anyone, even Claire." Claire was a lot, but not 'an hour-worth' amount.
Author Kaizer Wolf
2024-07-08 01:12:55 +0000 UTC"He had a shower this being the first time", this is incorrect, it's actually the second time, the first time was with Claire.
Moi465
2024-07-08 01:10:26 +0000 UTCI like what you are doing with Natlaie. I like the idea of them going everywhere together.
Florida Reader
2024-07-08 00:35:11 +0000 UTC
