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COMBAT HEALER: (Pick 3) Who do you want to see more? (3)

Please only pick your top 3 that you want to see on a more regular basis.

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Hi it's a great read but you add too many woman too fast. I think val is like background character, so is Mel. Sylvia has barely done anything. I am at chapter 28 and I want to know more about them. I think if they were more fleshed out then I would care more about them.

patrice souef

BTW, I voted Wren (she's just cool), Val (way under utilized), and Mel (a deeper character, but you've dropped all her early motivation [i.e., the search for a cure, or even her angst over her problem])

William L


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