AnK Chapter 6: Pages 13-19
Added 2022-07-25 01:00:11 +0000 UTCI know some of y'all said that the previous image of Deleon on the floor was enough of an emotional impact, but I wanted to try out this new angle and I think I'm a little happier with the detail and foreshortening. Idk, lemme know what you think!
On a side note, it seems like the campaign for the Walker plush might not be as successful as I hoped :C
I apologize to those who were really looking forward to one, but rest assured that your money will be returned in full. I really thought that I might get something special out to y'all but I think where I failed was my advertising and for that I'm sorry. Hopefully I can start on a different project that won't rely on campaigning like this and I can get something special out to y'all.
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Comments
It makes sense. Deleon is still thinking like a doll, when really he has become something else entirely. I can't imagine suddenly having the ability to feel emotions during such a distressing time.
2022-10-31 12:10:14 +0000 UTCYep It sure is Might have to take lessons lol
2022-07-28 19:58:00 +0000 UTCLol thank you. It’s sometimes hard having to put characters through this, but development is important
2022-07-28 19:03:19 +0000 UTCThanks so much, and I’m happy that you’re doing well~
2022-07-28 19:02:46 +0000 UTCOooooh, you mean keep both panels? I didn’t think about that!
2022-07-28 19:02:15 +0000 UTCI genuinely like the transition from that last page to this first page. I would keep both, in my opinion; I feel like it adds to the storytelling. In terms of what is actually going on, sweet JESUS, what Deleon is going through is incredibly relatable, in terms of his emotional state and this anxious reaction. The amount of characterization and dimensions you add to your characters is so superb. I’m loving this story more and more every day
Thedion
2022-07-25 02:29:57 +0000 UTC
