Materia Enhanced V, page 4
Added 2022-03-27 12:03:28 +0000 UTCI changed around the dialog a bit, I think it doesn't quite fit as well as before, but it's alright. I was worried in the original version it wasn't as clear that they would be doing more trips after the first one with Rikku.
I also wanted the last panel to be a little funnier, but less constructive.
Comments
The typo is fixed.
Lightfoot
2022-03-28 09:26:00 +0000 UTCIf it's not too late, "I've let lose" should probably be "I've let loose". But little typo aside, very nice. I definitely feel it conveys what's going on better now. This whole comic has been quite amusing and entertaining, so this care and attention to detail is much appreciated. :)
MinionOfGruumsh
2022-03-27 15:29:48 +0000 UTC
