eddlai608
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Bedtime story
Added 2020-03-25 02:29:11 +0000 UTC
Comments
Your comics are womderful
Eric Brennan
2020-04-05 18:51:04 +0000 UTC
Thank you! You are so kind.
But I already have someone to help me, hope you have a nice day. :D
2020-04-01 00:21:31 +0000 UTC
Thank you! I will fix it!
2020-04-01 00:18:16 +0000 UTC
Hi there, I have a lot of experience correcting English, and I would gladly proof-read your comics for you.
Robert Patrician
2020-03-25 05:33:39 +0000 UTC
Hi Edd Lai - in the first panel the sentence would make more sense by saying "after being adopted"
Luke Stark
2020-03-25 03:07:26 +0000 UTC
Oh no! The last picture is STORIES, not STORES. I will fix them, sorry~
2020-03-25 02:42:25 +0000 UTC