Adjust your speakers with 6 to 7db at the top end so that you will not bump your top end with 6 to 7db. I highly suggest fixing the top end first and -6 all the hi hats. Second, the kick seems to be lacking a bit. Replace it with a few kicks and see which will work better. Low end would be nice too. Overall a 180 in comparison to the first song so keep on going!