Pyro

Junior Jedi Academy updated

Added 2021-04-28 15:23:49 +0000 UTC

I posted the updated Junior Jedi Academy. It's the first 50 pages or so that have been revised, polished, rewritten, reedited, etc. Everything with Leia and Ani has been touched, some of it extensively, some more subtly. There are a few entirely new passages and chapters. If you're familiar with it, skim through till you find new stuff. My revisions end at the Lost Souls chapter. There's much more to come and the rest of the story will be revised to match this pacing, though it won't be too much work, mostly just more padding and character building. Most of the new work will be several more chapters before we get to Yavin IV. The Trip to the Temple chapter is sort of the big support beam of the story, so I'm working to build up to that more naturally.