Padme's Younglings
Added 2019-08-14 18:36:30 +0000 UTCI just posed an updated Padme's Younglings to the dropbox. I hadn't intended on doing a total re-write of the Lonny chapter, but it just happened. I'm really happy with the results though, and hope you all are too. It's 95% re-written and much longer overall, and finally does the scenario justice, I think. Sorry if there are any errors in the text. It's hard to edit something this long, especially when it's so fresh in my mind, but I ran through it a few times to polish and clean it up. So enjoy and any and all feedback is appreciated!