[NEWS] Motherly Touch 4 almost done
Added 2016-07-10 03:49:14 +0000 UTCOkay so I'm still working on Motherly Touch 4. I finished the complete draft, at 47 pages (that includes 18 pages of the previous stuff that's been posted here already). I also made a bunch of fixes and tweaks and improvements to those first 18 pages as well. No changes or additions, really, just better wording, fixed spelling or grammar errors, that kinda stuff. But it's an improvement.
Anyway, I wanted to post Part 4 tonight but just getting the draft done was exhausting. Writing about 10 boys all ejaculating is... ridiculous. Writing about any boy ejaculating is ridiculous. And at this point in my writing experience, any sex scene is redundant. So anyway, it was a tough slog but hopefully everyone will like it. So anyway, it's got some more work to be done but I need to get a bit of distance on it first before I dive back in and go over those 30 new pages with a fine tooth comb.
