Blue Star Episode 3 - Looking For Some Ideas For Finale!

I'm not entirely sure what you're asking for but if you could always have a just the tip entry followed by hip rotation.

Horizon

Liara does not necessarily have to hold on the shoulders, he can also hold on shadowbrokerarm, handgelengeoder at her own legs. As an alternative

Ner'rull

Aardvark will be glad when he is finished with Blue Star Episode 3, Many high and deep but he is richer by much experience, I push you the thumbs that you can do the rest as you imagine There were so many tips and suggestions made, I do not agree well, I have grad a picture for the pussy scene in the head, Liara arms on shadow broker shoulders The shadow broker hlt liara legs so that this is wide spread, Occasionally their eyes meet during shadow broker his massive tail with out hollow rhythm change in liara drifting. As the left and right as a V apart, and bend forward, Only the whole with the swing position in the standing I hope it is to understand and that it led to no great confusion but difficult to explain in a foreign language which one can not

Ner'rull

Hmmmmmm

Ladies Man 7777

Sorry, friend, but you seemed to have made your turn a bit too early. Fow is a few blocks further down the road. This is LordAardvark's Patreon.

Lord Aardvark

Personally, I always enjoy a finish via creampie with implying impregnation because nothing screams complete mind break/domination like impregnation.(preggers scene eh?) Angles maybe from the back or POV style from the shadow broker. However, since it is physically impossible due to certain limitation maybe just one final massive oral creampie? Not sure if you already planned this but a resistant liara in the beginning to a mind broken liara in the end, is win in my book.

JarBeezy

I'm afraid I might not be too much help in terms of story, but if you're looking for potential positions for him to still get to her pussy could I suggest Liara using her hands or feet on the Shadow Broker's dick while the head pokes against her pussy? Something along these lines, since I think his dick would be long enough for this to work: <a href="https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/2767708" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/2767708</a> <a href="https://ii.yuki.la/6/49/a53196d60b3c590fc64768aebdc6e851a6b8ca22b538b1c0ea24a2a5e2a49496.jpg" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://ii.yuki.la/6/49/a53196d60b3c590fc64768aebdc6e851a6b8ca22b538b1c0ea24a2a5e2a49496.jpg</a> <a href="https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/1750121" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/1750121</a> Liara could be held in position either by the Broker's hands directly or she could be held up by a biotic field. Anyways, just some suggestions, whatever you do I'm looking forward to this masterpiece!

-Kris-

The first idea is entirely viable, but I just personally don't like the shrink-cock-to-fit-hole ethos, and especially not in a fundamental way that actively reduces his girth. The Shadowbroker being huge is a central theme of the scene, and is explicitly commented on throughout the Acts. Shrinking it to fit also feels a bit inconsistent - "I thought you said you were too big for my pussy, and so you *had* to fuck my butt!" "Lol I lied." The second one... You're getting dangerously close to Escher there, my friend! :D.

Lord Aardvark

I could see two "biotic" possibilities, though I don't know how difficult either would be to animate. One way might be to create a biotic "sheath" and actually shrink the dick down to fit (though I guess that would be rather a complex redesign). Another option would be to create both a biotic pussy and cock that connect Liara and the Shadowbroker. Picture this as again a biotic sheath or fleshlight for the cock but with a smaller biotic cock attached to the tip of the actual dick. That could make it possible to fuck in different positions.

It all depends on how much effort you want to put into it, really, and the tolerance you have for the fluidity of it all. In general, there's two ways to do cumshots in SFM: Using particles that clip through or disappear and are immediately replaced with a prop at point of impact, or using a single contiguous stringy model and animating its motion and impact. The first is a lot faster and easier to do, but as you can imagine, doesn't look that great. The second takes more time to do, but is cohesive through its whole motion, though it tends to resemble strings of cum (or mozzarella cheese, if you prefer) more than splatters. And I suppose I could actually take your suggestion of the "sliding off" being second-to-last, and merge it with someone else's ATM suggestion. Basically, have the finale go in this way: 1.) Arms-held-back anal cream (post picture) 2.) Blowjob &amp; oral cream / swallowing ; Liara delivers a line to the effect of "I want you in my ass again!" (which would be a nice progression, because she starts Act 3 being very hesitant and shy about taking him up her butt) 3.) They start fucking again, but Shadowbroker transitions to masturbating with her. Maybe have Liara give a line to the effect of "Jerk off with my asshole!", which leads to the Shadowbroker going full speed ahead. 4.) After the second anal cream, the Shadowbroker's decidedly worn out, but now it's *Liara* whose not done with *him*, and demands he blow a fourth load, all over her face. Have her flip a switch and go from being docile and submissive throughout the entire sex scene and become more assertive and dominant (like she is in the beginning and ending of the episode), changing the power dynamic in the wake of him becoming weakened from exertion. I'm not opposed to that idea at all. I would love to hear thoughts on it. And, finally, Patreon on mobile just kind of sucks all around. :P

Lord Aardvark

Adding to Vincent and your convo (patreon apps sucks for replying). For Liara just sliding of the Shadow Brokers cock, that should happen at very end after/last anal creampie and maybe add the facial afterwards. Also for a cum, how much can you actually do with SFM? Can SFM only handle a few spurts or could you actually drench Liara in cum? I mean fucking drenched. Edit: one more question? If the Shadow broker cums several loads into Liara's ass and mouth, will she have an inflated stomach from all the cum?

Supreme Overlord Llama

Regarding a blowjob creampie if that were the case. Unless you really want the creampie in the mouth, I would suggest something like fountain shower of cum. I reference picture at home so I can't share that right now. Liara sucks the dip off a bit. She lets go so the Shadow Brokers cock would be pointed straight into the air and gives him a few jerks and then it his cum shoots into the air splatters mostly over Liara's face and upper torso. Edit: Oops. I mixed the mouth creampie with the facial.

Supreme Overlord Llama

Yeah. Besides, Innie (Liara's voice actress) is getting her face-down-ass-up pussy-creampie fantasy indulged in Episode 5, where Liara is gangbanged and they all take turns blowing their loads in her. :)

Lord Aardvark

I would say some sort of breeding fantasy, but we all know Asari don't reproduce like that :P

All very interesting input! I am by no means married to this new ending decision. Hell, I thought of it this morning, after already changing it twice. I won't go back and rewrite / reanimate the previous two acts, though they are very strongly in-line with what you've already suggested. Act 1 ends with Liara *WANTING* him to cum in her mouth, but he denies her. That's actually why it comes back (heh, cums back) in this current iteration of Act 3, to finally indulge that desire she expressed in Act 1. Act 2 has Liara near-orgasm a handful of times from the finger stimulation, and honestly the near-orgasms are easily interpreted as a whole orgasms. So that's all more or less already there. I can gel with cutting out the implied shots, they don't really add anything substantial anyways. That being said, I need further convincing to not include at least the first two anal creams (this position and the fleshlight-masturbation) and the oral creampie. I can't argue with your suggestion of having the external shot be on Liara's ass (or her tits - both her ass and her tits are the primary focus of Act 2), though I also do take particular focus on Liara's face, and I personally just like cute ladies getting cum on their face. And there's no real penalty for my not asking sooner, because I haven't invested in this new idea at all, because I couldn't solve this whole solution. I came into this knowing I might have to can the whole revised ending, and so I wasn't going to toss out any work. :)

Lord Aardvark

Not gonna lie, but that's one too many cumshots. I get that you want to make him seem durable and long lasting. But every additional cumshot kinda devalues the previous one. There's a reason why cumshots are generally saved for the ending of scenes. If I had to make a comparison, say professional wrestling. One finishing move makes it more significant, that the fighter just needed that one moment to put his opponent away. Whereas multiple finishers can dilute their significance. That being said, I'd have scripted this scene to go as thus. Act 1 involved Liara fellating the Broker. While she can't fit his entire dick in her mouth, she could utilize her biotics plus whatever naughty tricks she learned from her fling with Jack to actually make the Broker cum first. Thus she establishes an early lead (since this is more of a sexual version of a negotiation). Act 2 would have the Broker evening the playing field. Fingering and pushing deep into her holes with just his fingers alone to show that he has prowess in pleasing the female body, eventually bringing Liara to orgasm. This would bring her to wonder what's going to occur when actual penetration goes down. Act 3 could begin with Liara up above, trying to lower herself onto him into her pussy at first. She struggles to fit it in, and finds that she can't do it. The Broker then has a chuckle, explaining the anatomy of the asari race (revealing things Liara may not have even known about herself). He then proceeds to grab her by the waist, position her so her ass is in line, then slowly grinds her down onto his big dick. You can still have the varied positions, but I wouldn't have him orgasm so many times. Have one at the end of the first cut (where Liara is riding on top), show a passage of time, a timestamp in the corner or something similar (implying the Broker is recording this, as he does everything). This would show how long he can go without slowing or withering, but without wasting the effect of too many cumshots. In regards to the facial, I wouldn't have it at all. The focus of the entire scene was about her ass, so a final external shot should be unloaded on her ass, turning all that blue into white, if ya catch my drift. All in all I would total that to about 5 orgasms in the entire episode. 1 in act 1 (Broker), 1 in act 2 (Liara), and 3 in act 3 (Broker from reverse cowgirl, Liara's choking orgasm, then using the picture above, an internal shot there that's so much Liara falls off his dick, upon which the rest of his cum covers her big beautiful ass). I sympathize with your "script everything before even beginning" strategy. It's why I worked with Big Johnson to forge the script and all the positions before he even got started animating on our little project. I'd only wish you'd asked this sooner, cuz I had a fair amount to say. I may not have the animation skills (that's what I give you guys money for :p) but I've seen enough porn and hentai to see what makes up a good scene.

Vincent Valen

How about a sloppy wet kiss. SB isn't being intimate, he just wants to humiliate Liara even more. Maybe even playing with her pussy and asshole making her cum yet again?

FooldiverDX

I mean, I suppose it's an idea, but my hope was to have the post-first-cream finale be a sort of quick cut of cross-faded scenes, a montage of sorts. I feel like jumping between anal and oral in a cross-fading situation would be a bit jarring, because cross-fades are generally used for forward motion, and don't work as well with cyclical narration (even if the cycling is technically moving forward).

Lord Aardvark

Nah, not gonna go with that. Equal parts because this isn't a humiliation scene, and because I'm not Donald Trump. As an interesting note, your message was posted ~3 minutes after Rhuidean's, but I got the email notification for yours before Rhuidean's. Patreon, what are you doing with the email notifications? :P

Lord Aardvark

Piss in her mouth from POV, with her on her knees. Humiliating enough?

Dan George

Nothing is scrapped, only slightly rearranged. The choking is Liara's orgasm, which occurs before the Shadowbrokers'. The gaping will be after the final anal orgasm, where Liara's sweaty and exhausted from getting creamed 7 times. The reaching around is an interesting idea, but I'm not sure if it would work. I similarly considered a footjob solution, but I'm not terribly sold on both the logistics of that idea (would it even work?) or the actual aesthetic of it (not being a big fan of feet, myself).

Lord Aardvark

Switch back to anal? ATM a few times?

Rhuidean

First of, while this sounds great does this mean the ending you post last week is scraped or this is a prelude ending to that ending? I aboslutly loved the ending from last week with the choking, ass gaping and some other position you were keeping a secret because you were unsure if it would work. As for the pussy creampie. I am unsure yet about the position or how flexible Liara's model is but maybe if she can just fit part of the tip in, she can reach down and jerk the Shadow broker off into her pussy. I have to thing about the position.

Supreme Overlord Llama

AS AN ADDENDUM: It is also wholly possible that, with the restrictions in place, it simply isn't possible to get such pussy shots done. In that case, I am also willing to accept any suggestions of how to rewrite the remaining bits of the finale, such that the segue from blowjob to facial is more punchy than a simple "mouth on cock -&gt; mouth off cock" transition, which is just so boring and cliche!

Lord Aardvark