S2 EP45: History Lessons
Added 2019-02-15 15:17:52 +0000 UTC
I'm having... writer's block or brain dumbs or SOMETHIN.
Anyway, I need you guys to tell me honestly whether or not you understand the flow of these panels. Meaning that I know I skip around - from Pearl to Garnet to Rose, and they're meant to present as 3 separate instances, not linear events. But does that make sense?
Also, is it clear the Lunar Sea Spire is collapsing, or should I add some good ol'e sound effects?
Comments
I understood it without problems.
2019-02-15 19:13:34 +0000 UTCThe flow was fine but adding some sound effects or big cracks to the sea spire wouldn’t hurt.
Kruh-Daze
2019-02-15 18:39:33 +0000 UTCI understood it fine. And it looks amazing as always!
2019-02-15 18:17:55 +0000 UTCI could understand it just fine.
Jon Dalbon
2019-02-15 16:09:49 +0000 UTCsame! though I'm often surprised at the reading comprehension level of your audience lol
2019-02-15 16:03:36 +0000 UTCMakes sense to me, the only thing I missed the first read through was that Amy and Steven are both listening to Pearl. That could just be my eyes though.
Nathan C.
2019-02-15 15:51:32 +0000 UTCIt read very well! Steven's interjections lead into their respective panels excellently.
2019-02-15 15:32:24 +0000 UTCThe flow makes sense to me! Some sound effects or blur or something would be great on the spire tho for a tiny bit more urgency.
2019-02-15 15:29:41 +0000 UTCI followed it pretty well
PapaMedaMacha
2019-02-15 15:22:19 +0000 UTC
