Like father, like daughter Part 8
Added 2023-04-22 08:49:59 +0000 UTCHey guys! I took a little rest this week but here's a new part, and I'm already working on the next one, have a good day😘
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Can't wait to see the next part! Any idea when we might see it?
Lebruh-
2023-04-25 23:25:42 +0000 UTCIn my opinion it’s perfect
Saul Martinez
2023-04-23 13:14:30 +0000 UTCCan't wait for more, this is my favourite story so far
Daze_Dreams
2023-04-22 17:54:29 +0000 UTCGreat story development, but I was hoping to see more of Daisy! 😉 Anyway, here are a few dialogue corrections for this chapter: https://www.diffchecker.com/mw2gK6yr/ I'm still working on corrections for Fateful Vacation 1-21. I'll post those as soon as I finish them!
Solaufein
2023-04-22 12:51:27 +0000 UTCHmm was going great but leaning a bit too heavy in the mind control
Samus
2023-04-22 11:37:16 +0000 UTCGood idea, who knows maybe we'll see that😉
LilTKit
2023-04-22 11:35:25 +0000 UTCWould love to see one of his friends come by and meet Daisy. Maybe there is a leaky faucet that needs to be fixed and he can help his good friend's wife around the house with him out of town.
Nicegent42
2023-04-22 11:25:10 +0000 UTC
