PDF Alex's heel woes (Part 90 to 99)
Added 2024-07-05 15:31:00 +0000 UTCComments
Nice Feedback Terry!
rocky jockey
2024-07-07 02:08:30 +0000 UTCOne item that will deeply help the story. In most these types of stories, we don't get the Reason for the antagonism. We know she's a little bitch with a sweet face. However, why? Could we have a couple of slides showing the back story? The more explanation the better. If possible, showing her facial expressions/hand motions while she recalls the event/events that cause her deep antagonism would help Every reader. Cheers!
terry gene
2024-07-06 10:23:42 +0000 UTCyou're doing great.
terry gene
2024-07-06 10:19:51 +0000 UTCPlease check again, just updated
rocky jockey
2024-07-06 01:39:35 +0000 UTC92 missing, 91 repeated. sorry
terry gene
2024-07-05 16:51:06 +0000 UTC
