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Cataclysm Conquest | Chapter 34: An Archon's Purpose (First Draft)

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Mr Exar Kun

Ironically it was the part I enjoyed writing most LMAO

Hannibal Forge

Great writing as always. While I do live for edgy grandstanding, the better half of this chapter felt like a filler and delaying progress. While I don't dislike it, it does feel like the story stalls at times just for the sake of a cool speech. And there's been many cool speeches.

stable table

You're welcome! Would love feedback.

Hannibal Forge

Thanks for the chapter!

Quentin Cozzi


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