Cataclysm Conquest | Chapter 18: Council of War (First Draft)
Added 2026-02-07 02:19:26 +0000 UTCComments
The first half of the chapter seems unnecessary and drags down the pacing.
rams
2026-02-21 04:20:26 +0000 UTCNewfoundland mentioned again let's go ooooo tyftc
Durabler
2026-02-21 02:16:46 +0000 UTCIn 5th or so paragraph, I think you meant “if I were her, I’d suspect us…” Currently have “if I were, I’d suspect us…” Just finished the chapter, banger as per usual!
Thafres
2026-02-07 20:18:44 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter!
Bryn
2026-02-07 08:44:20 +0000 UTCWhew good catch.
Hannibal Forge
2026-02-07 05:11:11 +0000 UTCThe Ministry of Intelligence has prepared a more in-depth briefing, which the Aureates will not distribute.” … will NOW distribute.”
J Snyder
2026-02-07 04:53:11 +0000 UTCTftc!
Dominick Ruiz
2026-02-07 03:20:22 +0000 UTCTftc!
Mr Exar Kun
2026-02-07 03:02:29 +0000 UTCHow??
Ramb0Jo3
2026-02-07 02:20:25 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter!
Quentin Cozzi
2026-02-07 02:20:00 +0000 UTC
